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Posted: 13 years ago

what you taking about mistake

IT WAS VERY NICE ONE

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Posted: 13 years ago

i must say plz next scen write soon

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Posted: 13 years ago

hey awesome ss dear...i read hole ss just now...nice writing...plz update next part

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Posted: 13 years ago

Awesome update.. Love da night scene n lipstick scene between RaYa.. <3

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: sravz23
nice one do write more.

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: surbhi_16
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: shamma92
omg...that was sooo cutee and romanticcc!!! 😍 😍 😍 😍

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: sakshisfan
my god...that is super romantic...
coudn't find even a single mistake...
beautiful

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: anizor
it is really nice, thank you so much. please write some more.

thanks for liking will post next update as soon as possible

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: rita7482
what you taking about mistake

IT WAS VERY NICE ONE

thank you so much but criticism is always welcomed to improve

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