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Posted: 13 years ago
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omg so romantic...nice update...n thnks..
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oh it will be nice Ram explains his feelin for Priya...
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Ooo liked the update! Thanks! Can't wait for them to reveal their feelings! 👏
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Its a very long wait update the nxt part yar
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Its a very long wait yar update the nxt part
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Originally posted by: ShaiqMadiha

oh it will be nice Ram explains his feelin for Priya...


working on it i ll try to update today or by tomorrow atleast
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Originally posted by: Siacutie

Its a very long wait yar update the nxt part


Sorry was busy with the work i ll try to post it today
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Hi friends sorry for the delay was busy with the work here is the update it is the lengthy post i have ever written hope you dont get bored reading it i have edited it so many times now i dont have patience to edit it again sorry if there are any mistakes

Pyaar ka izhaar - part 2

Next few days were spent in each others company sometimes enjoying the comfortable silence between them and sometimes having a fight, both thought about moving their relation to the next step but didn't know what the other person thought about it.

Ram was in his office and he got a call from Priya

Priya:Mr.Kapoor aap ne kaha tha na ki aap mere class be naad mujhe pick karlenge meri class khatam ho gayi hai agar aap ka kaam bhi ho gaya ho tho mujhe pick karlenge

Ram:haan main bas abhi nikhal hi raha hoon

Priya:theek hai main aap ka wait karungi

Ram:Priya woh actually Vikram ne kaha ki aaj tum,main,Vikram aur Neha bahar dinner ke liye jayenge kyat um chalogi

Priya:theek hai par kab

Ram:abhi' main tumhe pick karlunga waha se restaurant chelenge Vikram Neha ko lekar aa jayega

Priya:theek hai

All the four enjoy themselves while returning to their house Ram's car stops and it doesn't start

Ram:arreh ab yeh kya hai main abhi driver ko call karta hoon

Priya:rehene dijiye na Mr.Kapoor yaha se ghar bas 1 ya 1.5 kilometer hi tho hai hum walk kar ke chale

Ram:nahin main call karta hoon

Priya:theek hai aap jayeye main tho walk kar ke hi aaungi

Ram:kya hai yaar tum aise kaise kar sakthi ho

Priya:jab tak car aayega tab tak tho main aadha rastha bhi tia karlungi

Ram:Priya tum jaanthi ho na main tumhe akele nahin jaane de saktha bahut raat ho gayi hai

Priya:par main kya karu mujhe chal ke hi jaana hai

Ram:tum kab meri baat manthi ho' chalo with that both Ram and Priya walks towards their house, suddenly it starts raining heavily by the time they can get shelter under a tree they are drenched Ram removes his coat to cover his head seeing Priya shivering because of the cold winds he offers to share his coat because of the lighting Priya turns and the coat is over her

Ram:Priya main bhi insaan hoon mujhe abhi thand lagthi hai

Priya:sorry maine jaan bhooj ke nahin kiya

Ram:its k yeh tumhari hi idea than a ki hum chalke jayenge

Priya:mujhe kya pata ki itni badi bearish hogi

Ram:wahi tho main bhi keh raha hoon tumhe kuch nahin pata isiliye sun liye karo

Priya:excuse me mujhe nahin chahiye aap ka coat main aise hi theek hoon

Ram:tum kahan ja rahi ho thand lag jayegi and pulls her hand she collides into him both stare at each other suddenly they hear a honk and comes out of it to realize that they were on road and the rain has stopped they slowly move towards to teir house

Next day morning Priya woke up and got ready was about to leave then she saw that Ram didn't wake up so she went to wake him up usually he used to wake up early but today it was nearly 10 still Ram didn't wake up she called him as there was no response she shakes him and finds that he was having fever

Ram:Mr.Kapoor uthiye

Ram:kya hua hai tum subah subah kyun utha rahi ho

Priya:Mr.Kapoor aap theek tho hai na

Ram:kyun kya hua hai

Priya:kya hua hai aap ko itna jyada bukhar hai

Ram:its k main theek ho jaunga

Priya:lekin aap aaj office nahin jayenge

Ram:kya jabardasti hai

Priya:haan hai aap ko apna khayal rakna chahiye

Ram:mera bahut important meeting hai mera jaana jaroori hai

Priya:theek hai lekin aap meeting ke baad ghar aajayenge

Ram:k main aajaunga

Priya:aap ka meeting kab tak chelega

Ram:12 khatam ho jayega time kya hua hai

Priya:10

Ram:kya tumne mujhe pehle kyun nahin utaya 11 mera meeting hai main late ho jaunga

Priya:mujhe kahan pata hai aaj aap ki meeting kab hai aap kahan mujhe kuch' before she can complete Ram interrupts her

Ram: rahene do tum aur kuch kahogi aur late ho gayega, he leaves for the office

Priya feels guilty that because of her Ram is suffering from fever so she decides to call him but the call couldn't get connected she tries again it nearly 2 in the afternoon she tries again but couldn't talk to Ram so leaves for the office but as she reaches there Vikram informs her that Ram went home early as he was not feeling well I told him that I ll handle the meeting so I forced him to go home Priya rushes from there to their house on the way she tries again but Ram doesn't respond to her call, it was raining heavily because of traffic jam it takes her 2 hours to reach the home all along the way she tries again n again but Ram didn't pick her call as soon as she reaches the home she rushes to her room where she doesn't find Ram she was about to leave the room she hears noise from the wash room and she waits for him as soon as he comes out she blasts at him

Priya:aap apne aap ko kya samajthe hai

Ram:kya hua

Priya:kya hua kab se main aap ko phone kar rahi hoon

Ram:phone mera phone 27 missed calls ye kisne kiya hai and finds 2 were from Vikram and rest 25 were from Priya

Priya:aap itne careless kaise ho sakte hai

Ram:sorry woh silent mode pe tha tho mujhe pata nahin chala

Priya:sorry aap hamesha aise hi karte hai

Ram:Priya yeh tumhe kya hogaya hai

Priya:kya hua hai main pichle 2 gante se aap ko call karne ki koshish kar rahi thi aur aap

Ram:lekin kyun

Priya:subah aap ko fever tha na tho mujhe laga ki mujhe aap ko call karna chahiye

Ram:lekin kyun

Priya:bus aise hi mujhe aap ki chinta ho rahi thi

Ram:wahi poonch raha hoon kyun Priya cheeks turned red as she was unable to tell him her feelings seeing her cheeks go red Ram heart was beating fast without thinking he advanced towards her till she was between him and the wall he looked into her eyes

Ram:Priya tumhe meri itna kyun care kar rahi ho

Priya:who meri wajah se aap barish mein beege na

Ram:tho isiliye tumhe meri itni khayal hai

Priya lowers her eyes and says :yes

Ram observes this and tells her:jab tumhe jooth bolna nahin aata tho tum kyun bolti ho

Priya looks int his eyes:kya main' aur jooth excuse me' Mr.Kapoor mujhe jooth bolna nahin aata

Ram:acha sach mein

Priya:haan and lowers her eyes and unintentionally bites her lower lip

Ram:aise math karo

Priya: maine kya kiya hai saying this she looks into his eyes she observes the warmth in his eyes.Ram looks into her eyes then at her lips as though asking her permission through his eyes she was shocked and closed her eyes in response he moves towards her suddenly they hear Vikram calling out for Ram they move away from each other awkwardly.Vikram enters the room

Vikram:Ram kya hua tera chehra aisa kyun hai

Ram:kuch nahin tu bata tu yahan kaise

Vikram:bhabhi jaldi jail mein apna purse office mein hi bhool gayi thi aur ek good news bhi hai

Ram:kya

Vikram:aaj jis deal ke liye ye meeting ho rahi thi woh hamhe mil gayi

Ram:yeh tho bahut achha news hai

Vikram:haan isiliye main aa gaya tujhe batane ke liye while Ram and Vikram were talking Priya leaves the room and tells basi kaka to take tea for them and went straight to terrace to clear her mind of the event that happened she shivered at the thought of what could have happened if Vikram didn't come. At night both Ram and Priya were unable to see each other so they avoided each other so much as possible even sleep didn't come near them

Priya was thinking about previous night incident and realized that she didn't know when she started to like him he used to irritate her so much, she often left Ram's eyes on her but didn't dare think that he also liked her as he made it clear to her several times that it was a marriage of compromise for their families she wanted to talk about it but she didn't know how would Ram respond to it if he didn't feel the way she felt for him she feared her feelings for him would ruin the friendship which was between them, after understanding that he never received any love or care from any of the family members which he deserved she thought she would give all the happiness,love and care which would heal all the wounds which where with him for past so many years which he never shared with anyone, unknown to her she would feast her eyes when ever Ram was around, when he was not around her eyes would search for him

Ram was not able to concentrate on his work he didn't know the reason he has never ever lost his concentration on his work since the day he started to handle the business, even in his dreams Priya's eyes and thoughts haunted him, he forgot to sleep peacefully as he used to suddenly wake up from his sleep because of his dreams he couldn't believe he dreamt about kissing her but the previous night he was so close to make it real but he didn't know what Priya thought about it and remembered how many times he told her the it was a compromise marriage but today he want to make it real marriage but didn't know how so he started to avoid her he didn't know why but felt it would be better if he avoided her.

Ram was in a meeting but he was not able to concentrate so he asks Vikram to take care of it and he leaves from there. After finishing the meeting Vikram enters Ram's cabin and observes that Ram was lost in other world

Vikram:Ram tu yahan kya kar raha hai

Ram:kuch nahin Priya

Vikram:Priya' Priya nahin Vikram

Ram:haan' sorry Vikram bol na.. kya baat hai

Vikram:agar tu yahan hai tho na main apni baat bol paunga

Ram:aisa kuch hai bol main tho bus' tu batana

Vikram:kya baat hai Ram' kuch dino se dekh raha hoon tera kaam par dhyan hi nahin hai

Rma:aisa kuch nahin hai

Vikram:Ram kya hua teri thabiyat tho theek hai na

Ram:haan kyun

Vikram:kyun yeh tu pooch raha hai tu meeting se aise uth kar kyun aa gaya aur Priya ke bare mein kya soch raha hai

Ram:kuch nahin' bus aise hi

Vikram:aise hi matlab' Ram batana kya hua hai

Ram:kya batao tujhe jab kuch hai hi nahin tho

Vikram:Ram tu mujhe nahin kahega tho phir kise kahega kahin tum Priya se pyar tho

Ram:tu aise kaise keh sakta hai tu jaantha hai na ki meri aur Priya ki shaadi kin haalatho mein hui hai

Vikram:jaantha hoon aur ab us shaadi ka asar bhi dekh raha hoon

Ram:matlab

Vikram:Ram aaj kal tu bahut koya koya sa rehtha hai mujhe lagta hai ki tumhe na bhabhi se pyar karne hai

Ram:pata nahin yaar mujhe kuch samhaj mein nahin aa raha hai

Vikram:kya samaj mein nahin aa raha hai main tera help karunga batana

Ram: woh' Priya ke bare mein

Vikram: bhabhi ke bare mein kya samaj mein nahin aa raha hai

Ram:mujhe nahin pata kya Priya bhi mujhe se

Vikram:tu bhi na tu aisa kyun soch raha hai

Ram:mujhe nahin pata tu janta hai na humari shaadi kin halato mein hui hai ab mujhe kaise pata hoga ki woh mere baare mein kya soch rahi hogi agar usne na kar diya tho

Vikram:nahin yaar aisa nahin hai Priya bhabhi bhi tujhe se pyar karti hai

Ram:tujhe kaise pata

Vikram: uss din jab tera tabiyat theek nahin thin a maine dekha hai ki bhabhi tere liye kitna pareshaan thi, tere liye office aaye thi tab maine unke aanhoke mein dekha hai tere liye pyaar aur jab unhe pata chala kit u ghar chala gaya hai woh tere piche ghar aa gayi maine kaha tha baarish bahut ho rahi hi thodi der baad chali jaye lekin unhe tho sirf tera khayal tha agar woh tujse pyar nahin karthi tho teri inti parwa kyun hai

Ram:pata nahin

Vikram:ek bar tu bhabhi ko apni dil ki baata bata

Ram:nahin mujhe nahin lagta

Vikram:please Ram meri baath sunle ek baar Priya se baath karke tho dekh mujhe pura yakeen hai bhabhi jaroor haan kehengi after a lot if insisting from Vikram finally Ram agrees

Ram:theek hai main koshish karta hoon

Vikram:koshish nahin tu kahega unse varna mein keh dunga

Ram:nahin.. main khud kahunga

Vikram:cha lab ghar ja

Ram:jaata hoon baad mein

Vikram:baad mein kab nahin tu abhi ja yaha par main sambhalunga Ram leaves from the office as he reached his room he finds Priya watching tv he sat on the sofa

Priya:arre aap inti jaldi aa gaye

Ram:haan kuch jyada kaam nahin tho isiliye

Priya:theek hai aap kuch lenge

Ram:nahin

After some time Ram finally tries to speak to her:Priya kyat um aaj mere saath bahar chalogi

Priya:haan lekin kahan

Ram:batana jaruri hai tum jaldi ready ho jao

Priya:jab aap mujhe ye batane ke liye bhi ready nahin hai tho main kyun aap ke saath chalu

Ram:tumhare liye kuch surprise hai chalo ab

Priya:par

Ram:par war kuch nahin jaldi ready ho jao

Priya gets ready and enters the room finds a red rose near the mirror she doesn't know who kept it there she looks here and there but doesn't find anyone then she picked it and was about to keep it away she found something written on the petals she observed carefully and saw that "I LOVE YOU" was written on the petals of the rose she couldn't believe that Ram had expressed his feelings but then again she had some doubt whether Ram would do it she looked towards the door he was not there. Ram entered after some time looking at her and then he looked at the rose and then towards her so though asking her silently to reply to his message through his eyes but Priya quietly kept the rose where it was and asked whether they can leave

Ram:Priya tumhe kuch kehna hai

Priya:nahin kyun aap kuch kehna chahte hai kya

Ram:nahin bas aise hi tum uss rose ko aise kyun dekh rahi thi

Priya: kuch nahin woh uss rose ka colour bahut accha hai main soch rahi thi uss colour ki koi dress lo aap kya kehte hai' colour acha hai na

Ram couldn't believe his ears:tum colour dekh rahi thi

Priya:haan kyun mujhe kuch aur bhi dekhna hai kya phool mein kya dekhta hai

Ram:nahin' kuch nahin chale' with that they left

In the car Ram was driving the car and he was stealing glances at her but Priya refused to look at him she was looking outside enjoying evening weather and was also enjoying teasing Ram

Ram:Priya tum kuch soch rahi ho

Priya:kuch nahin bas aise hi aap ko kuch kehna hai then she observes another rose in front of her then understood that Ram was trying to bring her attention to the rose her heart was filled with the joy that Ram also loved her but she decided to play for some time

Ram:nahin tum chup thi na isiliye

Priya:arreh yeh rose aap ko tho flowers se allergy hai na main abhi isse door rak dethi hoon and keeps it in her purse she turns back and finds some cards:yeh kya hai Mr.Kapoor

Ram:kuch nahin... dekho tumhara surprise aa gaya

Priya looks and finds them outside the NGO turns towards Ram:yeh aap yahan

Ram:kal tumhare papa ne phone kiya tha keh rahe the ke yahan ke baache tumhe bahut yaad kar rahe the isiliye agar tum yahan ek baar aathi tho acha hota tho maine socha ki main bhi tumhare saath chalta hoon

Priya:thanks chale Priya enjoys herself by playing with kids Ram just stands there staring at her

After some time Priya goes inside to talk to the principal mean while Ram arranges everyone with the cards on which it was written

"I LOVE YOU WILL YOU BE MINE FOREVER?"

He asks one kid to call Priya he calls her by the time Priya was about to come forward some other kid calls her so she went back by the time she could read power was gone it was dark so she was unable to see anything but Priya has seen everything how Ram has arranged the kids she even read what was written on it through the window while talking to the principal here Ram thought that she was not able to see and was sad

Ram was trying to sleep but he couldn't as all the ideas failed he didn't know what to do so he thought he would talk to Priya directly in the morning he tried to talk Priya then he saw the roses beside her pillow which he kept at the mirrow and in the car then he remembered Priya looking at the rose he was sure she has read his message as soon as Priya entered the room Ram saw her

Ram:Priya mujhe tumse kuch baat karni hai

Priya:haan batayiye

Ram:tum kya samajthi ho apne aap ko

Priya:main nahin samji

Ram:nahin samaji he then shows her the flowers which she kept beside her pillow

Priya:main woh' she fumbles with the words

Ram:tum kya'

Priya:aap kya kehna chahte hai mujhe kuch samaj main nahin aa raha

Ram:kya matlab tumhara tumhe panda tho aata hai na

Priya:haan panda tho aata hai lekin

Ram:lekin kya

Priya:mujhe kya pata ke ye kisne likha hai aur waise bhi yeh baate

Ram's temper raised knowing that she was playing with him: kya chathi ho tum ki main kya karu

Priya:koi bhi insaan pyar ka izhaar pyar karnewale ke mooh se sunna chatha hai hearing it he calmed himself and came close to her took her hand held it between both his hands looked into her eyes and said:

Priya jab se tum meri zingadi mein aayi meri zindagi badal gayi mujhe pata nahin chala kab main tumse pyar karne laga hoon kab mere zindagi mein itni khushiyaa aayi jab se humari shaadi hui hai maine tumse kabhi theek se baat nahin kiya hamesha saara gussa tumhare uppar nikhlatha raha lekin tumne har waqt mujhe sambhala hai mujhe ab iski aadat ho gayi hai abhi mujhe inta pata hai ki main tumhare bina nahin reh sakta kyat um mere is zindagi ki safar mein mere humsafar banoge?

When Ram was telling all this she was looking into his eyes which reflected his love for her she felt she was the happiest person in the world as she was about to tell him her feelings Ram's phone rang but he ignored it still catching her hand waiting for the reply but again his phone rang so he picked it up and it was from one of the important client that he had to attend the meeting immediately

Ram looked at her:main tumhare jawab ka intezaar karunga with that he left the room

Priya went out of the room as she saw him getting down the stairs moving towards the door she was just looking at him as if asking him to look at her as her thought was heard he turned back and moved his lips "my answer" he knew she could read him what he was trying to tell her she smiled and blinked her eyes telling him silently I'll give you answer when you are back and Ram left for the office as he got the message that he would get his answer once he is back from the office

happy dussehra in advance and god bless everyone and fulfill their wishes


Edited by M_n_h - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awsome update/ plz cont. soon. thanks
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Yayy...new update! Great scene...can't wait for the next part...please update soon!

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