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Posted: 13 years ago
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Can't wait how Priya will confess her love..plsss update soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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nice no no i must say very very good
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: anizor

awsome update/ plz cont. soon. thanks


thankyou i'll try to update today
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: shamma92

Yayy...new update! Great scene...can't wait for the next part...please update soon!


thanks i'll try to update today
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: haribol79

Can't wait how Priya will confess her love..plsss update soon...


thanks for liking it i'll try to update today
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: viny_queen

nice no no i must say very very good


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Posted: 13 years ago
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hi friends here is the update

Pyar ka izhaar - final part

As soon as Ram finished his meeting he was getting ready to reach his home so that he could know Priya's reply he knew her answer but still he want to hear it from her but before leaving he went to Vikram's room

Ram:Vikram main aaj ghar jaldi ja raha hoon tu office dekh lena

Vikram:kya hua Ram sab kuch theek tho hai na

Ram:haan bus aise hi

Vikram could tell that Ram was going home specially for Priya but seeing Ram's eagerness in his eyes he didn't want to ask anything further:theek hai bye

Ram reached his room but Priya was not there he went down all others were watching tv dadi insisted ram to sit with them his eyes were scanning for Priya as he heard laughing sound he knew PRiya was coming so he turned in the direction of the sound Priya enterd hall talking with Rishabh he was looking at her Rishabh came and sat beside him Priya went and sat beside daadi Ram was trying to get sttention of Priya

Ram: Priya mera black colour ka file dekha

Priya: nahin

Ram: mere saath chal zara doondhgi

Priya: haan chalthi hoon lekin kya abhi doondh na hai

Ram: haan bahut important hai mujhe abhi chahiye

Priya: theek hai she was about to get up but daadi stoped her

Daadi: Ram puttar tujhe kabhi kabhi waqt miltha hai sab ke saath baith na thodi dheer

Ram: daadi woh file zaroori hai isiliye

Daadi: mujhe kuch nahin sun na tu mere saath baitega

Ram: theek hai and he looks at Priya suddenly he hears the song coming from tv Ram asks Rishabh to increase the volume

inteha Ho Gayi Intezaar Ki Aayi Na Kuchh Khabar Mere Yaar Ki
yeh Hamein Hai Yakeen Bewafaa Woh Nahin Phir Wajah Kya Hui Intezaar Ki

inteha Ho Gayi Intezaar Ki Aayi Na Kuchh Khabar Mere Yaar Ki
yeh Hamein Hai Yakeen Bewafaa Woh Nahin Phir Wajah Kya Hui Intezaar Ki

baat Jo Hai Uss Mein Baat Woh Yahaan Kahin Nahin Kissi Mein
woh Hai Meri Bas Hai Meri Shor Hai Yahi Gali Gali Mein
saath Saath Hai Woh Mere Gham Mein Meri Har Khushi Mein
zindagi Mein Woh Nahin Toh Kuchh Nahin Hai Meri Zindagi Mein

inteha Ho Gayi Intezaar Ki Aayi Na Kuchh Khabar Mere Yaar Ki
yeh Hamein Hai Yakeen Bewafaa Woh Nahin Phir Wajah Kya Hui Intezaar Ki

He looks towards her she just lowers her eyes not knowing what to do in front of all family members

Rishabh: bhai aap ko kab ne songs mein interest aa gaya hai

Ram: nahin yeh song acha hai aur situation mein bilkul fit hota hai na bus isiliye

Rishabh: matlab mein nahin samjha

Ram: kuch nahin tu gana sun na

All have dinner Priya was serving everyone then she sat opposite to him during the dinner he was looking at her but Priya was not looking at her this irritated him so he came back to his room without completing his dinner he made excuse that he was not feeling hungry and he had an important presentation to make and he excused himself all were surprised to see this behavior of Ram, he was preparing presentation as he needed some information he went to cupboard to take the pendrive but there was a note for him on the door

"Waiting for you on the terrace"

He rushed to the terrace immediately saw that it was dark he switched on the lights to his surprise he saw the same cards on which he has written his message to Priya about his love but he saw something else was also written on it so he went close to it and saw that there was her response written on it he was so happy

"I LOVE YOU TOO WILL BE YOURS FOREVER"

Then he looked around Priya was not there he went back to his room as he entered the room he saw the room was dark and on the table there were candles he heard noises from the wash room so he knew Priya was there so he locked the door and went to the table where there was cake on which it was written

"I LOVE YOU RAM"

He went towards the bed and sat quietly Priya came out saw that Ram was sitting on the bed and he didn't touch the cake

Priya:kya hua Mr.Kapoor aap ko cake pasand hai na tho phir

Ram: cake... cake kahan hai

Priya: kya aap ne nahin dekha

Ram: nahin kyun

Priya: maine table par hi tho rakha hai na

Ram: ohh table par

Priya: aap nahin khayenge

Ram: nahin mujhe nahin chahiye

Priya: par aap ko tho cake pasand hai na

Ram: haan pasand hai par mujhe nahin khana

Priya: lekin maine specially aap ke liye banaya tha

Ram: tumhe cake banaya aata hai

Priya: haan maine eggless cake banaya hai ghar par bhi kabhi kabhi banalethi hoon

Ram: really... thanks par mujhe abhi nahin kahana

Priya: kya hua hai Mr.Kapoor aap aise kyun baat kar rahe hai

Ram went towards Priya: maine tumse subah kuch kaha tha na tho phir uss ka jawab...

Priya: woh... aap terrace par gaye the na tho phir

Ram: haan gaya tha lekin waha bahut andera that ho main wapas aa gaya tha

Priya: aap ne waha pe kuch nahin dekha she was moving back till her back hit the wall

Ram: nahin kyun waha pe kuch tha he kept his hands on both sides and was looking into her eyes

Priya: nahin..

Ram: nahin... nahin na tho phir kya hua

Priya: nahin tha...

Ram: kya tha...

Priya: wahi jo cake par likha hai

Ram: cake par kya likha hai

Priya: woh woh...

Ram: kya hua Priya kya likha hai cake par

Priya:aap bhi pad sakthe hai na

Ram: haan main pad saktha hoon... par mujhe tumse sun na hai cake par kya likha hai

Priya: mere zindagi mein aane ke liye thanks meri zindagi aap ke bina adoori hai

Ram: par cake par tho ye nahin tha na

Priya: haan ye nahin hai woh cake par itni jagah nahin hai na' par' par aap ko kaise pata hai iska matlab aap ne dekha hai

Ram: haan... dekha hai main andha thodi hoon

Priya: aap ne agar dekha hai tho phir kyun pooch rahe hai

Ram: kyun ki mujhe cake par jo likha hai woh tumse sun na hai

Priya: kyun... main nahin kahongi

Ram: arreh yeh kya baat huyi

Priya: main kyun kahu

Ram: Priya kya hai yeh yaar cake par tho likha hi hai na tumne' tho ab kehne ke liye tum aise kyun kar rahi ho

Priya: kyun ki aap ne bhi tho nahin kaha tha na subah

Ram: nahin maine kaha tha tumne nahin suna hoga

Priya: nahin maine suna aur mujhe yaad bhi

Ram: really

Priya lowers her eyes: aap ne nahin kaha

Ram: theek hai tho abhi keh deta hoon he put hair behind her ear with a finger and said "I LOVE YOU" and waiting her to say

Priya: "I LOVE YOU TOO" her cheeks were turning red

Ram's couldn't believe that her simple act of her cheeks turning red would make his heart to skip a beat he caressed her cheeks in her nervousness she unconsciously bit her lower lip.Ram looked deeply into her eyes and then her lips he bent down to touch her lips as she responded he deepened the kiss he was pouring his heart in his kiss telling her what she meant to him it was becoming difficult for Priya was unable to stand she caught his shoulders for support Ram inturn put his arm around her back to support her to stand.After a while when they broke apart Ram looked at her she lowered her eyes kept her head on his chest he held her close to his heart

Ram: Priya thanks mere life mein aane ke liye

Priya: thanks to you too and he looks at her then he again bends down to touch her lips as he was about to deepen the kiss but there was a knock on the door it was Vikram he didn't was to open but Priya forced him to go so frustrated to went to the door to open it

Vikram: Ram kal ke meeting ke presentation ke liye jo information chahiye tha woh file tho mere pass hai

Ram: theek hai de idhar

Vikram: kya hua tu aisa kyun kar raha hai

Ram: kuch nahin

Vikram smiles: main chaltha hoon phir he about to go but turns and says: sorry disturb karne ke liye and he leaves

Ram saw that Rishabh was coming towards their room, he was cursing under his breath for the disturbance

Ram: ek kaafi nahin tha jo dusra bhi aa raha hai but Rishabh was stopped by Vikram and they both went down while going Vikram turned

Vikram: Ram tu jo kaam kar raha tha na usse continue kar, tomorrow's presentation is my responsibility he gave him a thumbs up and went way.Ram enters his room with a confused look

Priya sees Ram's confused expressions: kya hua Mr.Kapoor aap kya soch rahe hai

Ram: kuch nahin

Priya: matlab' Vikram aaya tha na tho kya kaha usne

Ram: pata nahin bahut ajeeb behave kar raha tha

Priya: kyun and Ram was thinking about what Vikram so he didn't give any reply just then Priya's eyes fall on the cards on which both Ram and Priya wrote their message to each other

Priya: aap upar gaye the na tho phir kyun kaha ki aap ne kuch dekha nahin

Ram: kyun ki maine bhi wahi kiya jo tumne kiya

Priya: matlab

Ram comes and hugs her from behind: matlab tumne dekha tha na mere message phir bhi chup thin a isiliye main bhi chup tha

Priya: this is not fair

Ram: aur tum ne jo kiya woh fair tha kya arreh Priya tum yeh batao kit um jab bahar aayi tho power chala gaya tha tumne kaise dekha

Priya: main jab principal se baat kar rahi thin a tab maine window se dekha tha aap ko baccho ke saath tho mujhe samaj mein nahin aaya ki aap baccho ke saath kya kar rahe the isiliye main window ke paas aa kar dekha tho mujhe aap ka message mil gaya tha

Ram: jab tumhe pata tha tho tumne kyun jawab nahin diya

Priya: kyun ki mujhe aap se sun na tha Mr.Kapoor

Ram: acha Mrs.Kapoor

Priya: aaj aap kyun mujhe Mrs.Kapoor keh rahe hai

Ram: kyun ki tum mujhe Mr.Kapoor keh rahi ho ha

Priya: par mujhe bahut ajeeb lag raha hai

Ram: mujhe bhi ajeeb hi lagta hai jab tum mujhe Mr.Kapoor kehthi ho tho

Priya: pelhi bhi tho kehthi thi na aaj pelhi baar thode hi keh rahi hoon

Ram: pehli baar nahin kaha hai lekin humare pyar ke izhaar ke baad tho pehli baar hai na

Priya: woh tho hai

Ram: aaj se balke abhi se jabhi tum mujhe Mr.Kapoor kahogi tho main tumhe Mrs.Kapoor kahunga

Priya: tho phir main aap ko kya kaho

Ram: main tumhe kya keh har bulatha hoon

Priya: aap mera naam hi tho lethe hai na

Ram:tum bhi wahi karo and bends and starts kissing her on her neck

Priya feels shy so she tries to deviate him:woh... Mr.Kapoor Vikram kyun aaya tha

Ram remembers Vikram's words: Mrs.Kapoor pata nahin sorry kahan phir keh raha tha main jo kaam kar raha tha na use continue karu mujhe kuch samaj mein nahin aaya

Priya turns towards Ram shyly she raises her hand and points to him: woh...

Ram looks all confused: kya hua

Priya: aap ke...

Ram: mere kya...

Priya: lipstick

Ram: kya lipstick

Priya: lipstick hai

Ram: Priya tum pagal ho gayi ho main lipstick nahin use karta

Priya: jaanti hoon Mr.Kapoor

Ram: phir kya hai Mrs.Kapoor

Priya: aap ke hoonto pe lipstick hai

Ram: lipstick... kaise he tries to erase it but was unable to

Priya wipes it off with her hands: chala gaya Mr.Kapoor

Ram who closed his eyes at her touch opens: thank you Mrs.Kapoor

Priya: aap please mujhe Mrs.Kapoor mat kahiye

Ram: tho tum bhi mujhe Mr.Kapoor mat kaho

Priya: tho phir kya kahu

Ram: mera he traces his hand on her lips

Priya: aa... aapka na... naam le.. ka..kar

Ram: acha lipstick chala gaya

Priya: haan chala gaya Mr.kap... nahin Ram

Ram: thanks waise bhi lipstick mita kar kya faida

Priya: matlab

Ram: matlab abhi phir se jo lagne wala hai before Priya can say anything he kisses her

this is the last part next one will be on some other random scene do let me know my mistakes so that i can improve myself


Edited by M_n_h - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#68
omg...that was sooo cutee and romanticcc!!! 😍 😍 😍 😍
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Posted: 13 years ago
#69
my god...that is super romantic...
coudn't find even a single mistake...
beautiful
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Posted: 13 years ago
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it is really nice, thank you so much. please write some more.

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