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Posted: 13 years ago
#81

Originally posted by: nypunya

awesome update...pls write more.thanq


thanks for liking it next update as soon as possible
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Posted: 13 years ago
#82

Originally posted by: viny_queen

i must say plz next scen write soon


thanks next update as soon as possible
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Posted: 13 years ago
#83

Originally posted by: riya01maddy

hey awesome ss dear...i read hole ss just now...nice writing...plz update next part


Glad to know that u liked it next update as soon as possible
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Posted: 13 years ago
#84

Originally posted by: lipshaa

Awesome update.. Love da night scene n lipstick scene between RaYa.. <3


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Posted: 13 years ago
#85

thanks for liking it
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Posted: 13 years ago
#86
when u update new scene i m waiting
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: viny_queen

when u update new scene i m waiting


today or by tomorrow
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Posted: 13 years ago
#88

Pls... update soon... desperately waiting for next part...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#89
Hi friends here is the next update

Scene 7:

Priya woke up with a start in the morning, saw it was 8 hurriedly she got up and went to the washroom as she had her class at 9 but the washroom was being by Ram she called out his name

Priya: Mr.Kapoor... Mr.Kapoor

Ram: kya hai Priya

Priya: kya aap jaldi bahar aa sakte hai

Ram: kyun kya hua

Priya: kuch nahin woh... aaj se mere classes shuru ho rahe hai

Ram: tho...

Priya: tho... mujhe dheer ho rahi hai

Ram: tumhe dheer ho rahi hai tho main kya karu

Priya: agar aap jaldi nahin aayege tho main kaise ready ho sakthi hoon

Ram coming out of the washroom: tho tumhe jaldi uthna chahiye na

Priya runs into the washroom, quickly completes her chores and comes out: aap kuch keh rahe the na

Ram: tum jaldi uth sakthi thi na

Priya: haan main tho ghar mein jaldi hi uththi thi lekin kya karu yahan par

Ram: kyun yahan kya hua hai

Priya: aap sone de tab na main jaldi uth paungi

Ram: kya matlab hai tumhara main tumhe sone nahin deta

Priya getting ready in hurry: haan... bhul gaye aap ke karate

Ram: theek hai theek hai baar baar bolne ki zaroorat nahin hai he turns around and Priya bumps into him as she was in hurry to get ber bag

Ram: tum dekh kar nahin chal sakthi

Priya: aap bhi tho dekh sakte hai na again she walks to her cupboard to get some other thing

Ram:har baar aisa jawaab dena jaroori hai

Priya: kya karu aap sawal hi aise poonch the hai

Ram: Priya ye kya hain tum araam se nahin kar sakthi kya

Priya: sorry papa... and then sadly she tells: sorry woh dher ho rahi thi isiliye

Ram realizes that she was missing her family: maine driver se keh diya hai woh tumhe drop kardega

Priya: thanks aap nahin aayega... I mean aap office nahin jayenge

Ram: nahin... thodi der baad jaunga mujhe thoda kaam hai

Priya became sad: tho phir main ja kar aati hoon

Ram: bye

Priya: bye then she left for her classes. After some timeRam tries to call Priya but she forgets her phone in the room in hurry so he goes to her coaching center asks someone to call her Priya who was in her class, comes out some what irritated for being disturbed during the class but was surprised to see Ram there

Priya: aap yahan...

Ram: haan tum apna phone ghar par hi bhool gayi thi isiliye dene chalaaya

Priya: thanks par aap ko itni takleef leni ki zaroorat nahin thi

Ram: nahin its k mujhe tumse kuch aur bhi kehna tha aaj shaam ko dinner hai mere kuch important guests aa rahe hai main chahtha tha ki tum waha raho

Priya: theek hai main jaldi aa jaungi

Ram: thanks bye as he was about to leave he notices that students were peeping from the windows and doors he wanted to know about it but decides to ask her later

In the evening Priya is all ready and was waiting for the guests but was surprised to see her family upon asking them they tell her that Ram had invited them while this conversation was going on Vikram and Neha has also arrived along with their kids in the mean while Ram also came from office then all have dinner together and have nice time then later in the night Ram, Priya, Vikram, Neha and kids in Ram's room one of the kid was sleeping Ram asks Neha to take them to the guest room as Neha was taking them she notices that they dropped water on the couch and it was wet

Neha: yeh kya kiya iss par pani kisne daala but the kids were unable to reply as they were feeling very sleepy

Ram: kya couch ghila kar diya both Ram and Priya look at each other not knowing what to do.Ram and Vikram spend some more time talking Neha comes along with Priya and tells them they cant take the kids to their house as they are sleeping upon Ram's insisting Neha accepts to stay in the guest room that night Vikram alone leaves.When Ram and Priya were alone in the room

Priya: thank you Mr.Kapoor

Ram: kisliye

Priya: aaj aap ne saare gharwala ko bhulaya na

Ram: its k subah jab tum ne apne papa ko yaad kiya tho mujhe laga tum apne ghar wala ko miss kar rahi thi tho maine unne dinner ke liye bhulaliya

Priya goes towards the sofa but remembers Neha's words and she looks at Ram scratching her head not knowing what to do Ram too doesn't know what to do

Priya: aaj main guest room mein bhi tho nahin so sakthi

Ram: haan

Priya: ab main kya karu

Ram: tum chaho tho bed share kar sakthi ho

Priya: aap ke saath...

Ram: hmmm

Priya: pata nahin aaj raat so bhi paungi ya nahin

Ram: matlab

Priya: kuch nahin... aur koi choice bhi nahin hai she moves towards the bed and takes her place and covers her self with blanket

Ram seeing this: kya hua Priya tumhe tand lag rahi hai kya

Priya: nahin kyun

Ram: tho phir tum aise blanket...

Priya: try kar rahi thi ki aisa hi sahi ki kuch tho awaaz kam sunyi de

Ram: its enough k waise bhi mujhe thoda kaam hai tum so jao

Priya thinks to herself that she is lucky today as she can sleep peacefully atleast for some time

In the morning Ram bends over Priya, she wakes up and is startled to find Ram so close to her and shouts Ram closes her mouth

Ram: Priya ye kya kar rahi ho sab ko jagadogi kya

Priya: aap... aap yeh kya kar rahe hai

Ram: kya kar raha hoon matlab tera haath nikhal ne ki koshish

Priya: kyun...

Ram avoids her question and asks: bahut achi needh aayi hogi na

Priya: haan magar aap aise kyun poonch rahe hai aur aap aise kyun dekh rahe hai

Ram: maine yeh dekh raha hoon ki tum kab uthogi

Priya: aap kya kehna chahte hai

Ram: yahi ki agar ki uthogi tabi main bhi uth paunga Priya looks blankly at Ram not understanding anything Ram then points towards his hand on which Priya was sleeping, she looks at it and gets up with a start her head hits Ram

Ram: ye kya kar rahi ho tum

Priya: sorry woh main uthne ki koshish kar rahi thi

Ram: ek minute and he moves aside

Priya gets up from bed: sorry mujhe pata hi nahin chala needh nahin aa rahi thi kab main aap ke...

Ram: its k ab ja ke ready ho jao warna kal ki tarah phir...

Priya: haan meri class she leaves to get ready

Ram and Priya come to the dinning table Neha greets them all have breakfast together

Neha: Priya aaj bahut fresh lag rahi ho raat ko bahut achi tarah soyi hogi na

Priya and Ram look here and there not knowing what to do Neha sees this and tries to take advantage of the situation by teasing them

Neha: fatty tumhe kya hua tum kyun aise sarma raheho

Ram: aise kuch nahin mujhe dher ho rahi hai aur Priya ko bhi

Priya: haan Neha ab mujhe chalna chahiye with that both leave from there without looking back at Neha afraid of the thought of even facing further questions about it

Ram was driving the car but he looks at Priya surprised by that: aap aise kyun dekh rahe hai

Ram: woh... main soch raha tha I mean mujhe lagtha hai Neha sach keh rahi thi

Priya: matlab

Ram: tum aaj sach mein fresh lag rahi ho lagta hai raat mein bahut acchi needh aaye Priya just looks outside not knowing what to answer

Ram to break the silence: mujhe kuch poonch na hai

Priya: ji poocnhiye

Ram: Priya kal jab main tumhare coaching classes par aaya tha tho tumhare sab students mujhe aise kyun dekh rahe the

Priya: kyun ki aap The Ram Kapoor hai and asks to stop the car

Ram: kyun

Priya: mera coaching center aa gaya both bid bye to each other

thanks for liking it i have received such nice comments from you all so i was thinking about writing a new FF


Edited by M_n_h - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#90
nice to read all your scenes...awesome writing ...waiting for your ff ...if you write it then pls PM me

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