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Lipsha

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Posted: 13 years ago

#121

OMG!!!

This is sooo so gud...👏 Love da whole scene between RaYa... 😳Itz completely on da track...😍

Love ur Writing... I can imagine da whole Story <3

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laduprav

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Posted: 13 years ago

#122

supab., excellent.

we wish this will happen in balh.

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Anusha.V

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Posted: 13 years ago

#123

very very nice
lovely scene
hope it should happen in the show

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saisamanvi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#124

nice update mnh...thanq
but one mistake in the sentenceMr.Kapoor kya aap AC temperature thoda increase kar sakthe hai please mujhe bahut thand lag rahi hai...ac temp increase nahi decrease

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Anamika

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Posted: 13 years ago

#125

this is brilliant yaar... i hope Priya also falls in love with n Ram confesses his love to her 1st😍

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fan_forever

@fan_forever

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Posted: 13 years ago

#126

hey thnks...

pls update next scene soon...(if possible today... ) this weekend... i just hate...

both as misses RaYa and above that use to have 9-9 college

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ShaiqMadiha

@ShaiqMadiha

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Posted: 13 years ago

#127

wowi... i just loved it...n awesome n fabulous story...

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CHANDNI

@rita7482

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Posted: 13 years ago

#128

very nice update i started crying when i was reading keep it up with good writing

thank you

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M_n_h

@M_n_h

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Posted: 13 years ago

#129

Originally posted by: balhfan
oh i think dis scene would happen if Ram would leave Priya alone for kc n priya'ld decide dat she'll break her "Vrat" wen ram will come... n @ the tym ram enters n Priya faints... Ram will care for her... lets hope we'll c dis... Amazing updates... plz update next soon...

thanks glad u liked it will try to update soon

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M_n_h

@M_n_h

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Posted: 13 years ago

#130

Originally posted by: kavmuks
Very nice and thoughtful and vivid ... Please keep writing .. it helps us to cope with 3 weekend days also..

Could visualize everything ..

thanks glad u liked it
will try to update

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