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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: shamma92

Awww...so cute! Loved it! Thanks 👏


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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: anizor

awsome update. thanks, would love to read a new ff from u.


thanks glad u liked it
yup i m working on it would post it soon
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Sumithra

nice update yaar 👏


thanks glad u liked it
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: fan_forever

awwe so cute...

loved it...
pls update soon... waiting for some cute romantic scenes...


thanks glad u liked it
i have to think about a scene it will take time as it is not a continuous story

Edited by M_n_h - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

hi friends we know we'll get a awesome episode on Monday but as the wait is long
for 3 days so i just thought to write down the Monday scene hope u'll like it

Scene 11: Daadi stopping Ram from going to Chennai

Priya after talking to daadi entered the room excited knew her trump card would definitely work, saw that Ram was working on his laptop she took a book and sat on the couch, she was watching at the door but was pretending to read so that Ram wouldn't know about what she was upto she knew daadi would come to take a class of Ram and was exicted to hear what would daadi tell him, as he was leaving for Chennai for meeting. When Priya saw that daadi was coming she looked at Ram

Priya: Mr.Kapoor kya aap ka Chennai jaana jaroori hai

Ram: haan woh meeting bahut important hai

Priya sees that daadi was standing beside the door and listening to their conversation

Priya: main jaanti hoon ki ye meeting important hai par… ye mera pehla karva chauth hai agar aap yaha hote tho mujhe acha lagta hai

Ram: maine kaha na Priya kya hogaya hai tumhe jab humari shaadi ke pehle din US gaya that ho tumne mujhe nahin rokha tho phir ab kyun

Priya: kyun ki yeh mera pehla karva chauth hai na

Ram: hai par tumhara

Priya: agar aap rukh jaate tho…

Ram: tum typical wife ki tarah behave kyun kar rahi ho before Priya could give any answer daadi entered the room

Daadi: kya keh raha hai tu woh teri biwi hai… tho biwi ki tarah behave karegi na

Ram: nahin daadi woh tho main bus aise hi

Daadi: kya aisi hi aur main yeh kya sun rahi hoon tu Chennai ja raha hai Karva chauth ke din

Ram: haan daadi meri bahut important meeting hai

Daadi: main kuch nahin jaanti tu nahin jayega

Ram: par daadi agar ye itna important meeting nahin hota tho main kabhi nahin jaata

Daadi: chup kar kothe yahan par meri bahu tere liye bukhi pyasi rahegi aur tu… tu keh raha hai ki tere liye meeting jyada jaroori hai

Ram: daadi par ye meeting… before finish his sentence daadi interrupted

Daadi: chup kar tu kahi nahin jayega uss din ab tu itna bada hogaya hai ki mujhe ulta jawab dega chup chap bahu ke paas reh samjha hearing this Ram thought of saying something but becomes quiet on other side Priya was enjoying it and she was waiting for next bomb which daadi was going to explode on Ram and Ram's reaction to it

Ram kept his head down sulking not knowing what to do just then heard daadi calling him he turned his head

Daadi: Ram puttar mera ek kaam karega

Ram: boliye na daadi

Daadi: tu bhi na Priya ke liye vrat rakh

Ram: kya????

Daadi: haan kya tu ek din bhukha pyasa nahin reh saktha hai tere biwi ke liye

Ram: par main kyun daadi mera matlab hai ki yeh tho patni rakthi hai na

Daadi: haan patni rakhthi par pati bhi apne patni ke liye rakh saktha hai aisa kahan hai ki pati nahin rakh saktha

Ram: par daadi main…

Daadi: tu jaroor vrat rakhega Priya puttar se saheliyo ke pati bhi rakhte hai tho tu kyun nahin

Ram gives a killer look towards Priya as he understood that this all was done by Priya where Priya gives him a triumph smile

Daadi: mera accha Golu rakhega na apne biwi ke liye

Ram looks at Priya angrily and says: theek hai daadi

Daadi: mera accha Golu kitna pyar hai tum dono mein, mere dono bacche ek dusre ke liye vrat rakh rahe hai tum dono ki jodi hamesha bani rahe after giving them blessings daadi leaves the room.

Ram turns towards Priya angryily: tum kya samjhthi ho apne aap ko

Priya: maine kya kiya hai

Ram: aise poonch rahi ho jaise tumne kuch kiya hi na ho

Priya: kya kiya maine

Ram: tumne daadi ko kyun kahan ki main Chennai ja raha hoon

Priya: maine… maine kaha bataya daadi ko

Ram: phir daadi ko kaise pata hai tumhe kya lagta hai ki main kya hoon bewakoof

Priya: maine kuch nahin kaha

Ram: stop it k… mujhe pata hai tum ne hi kaha hoga daadi se

Priya: jab hum baat kar rahe the na thabi daadi ne sunna hoga

Ram: accha tho tumne kuch nahin bataya tho phir daadi ko kaise pata ki tumhare friends ke pati unke liye vrat rakhte hai

Priya lowers her eyes: asie hi batao batao kaha tha

Ram: mujhe pata hai ki yeh tumne hi kiya hai

Priya: haan maine hi kiya hai tho kya… maine hi daadi ko bataya ki aap Chennai ja rahe hai kya kar lenge aap

Ram: tum… tum aise kaise kar sakthi ho

Priya: jo aap karne ja rahe the uska kya

Ram: tum mujhe rokhne ke liye yeh sab kar sakhthi ho maine kabhi nahin socha

Priya: ab tho aap ko pata chal gaya na

Ram: rokhne tak theek tha par tumne daadi ko yeh kyun kaha ki tumhare friends ke pati fast rakhthe hai

Priya: kyun ki aap hi ne kaha tha na ki yeh mera pehla karva chauth hai aap ka nahin tho maine aap ka bhi pehla karva chauth rakhvadiya

Ram: I don't believe this

Priya: chaliye chal kar thayari karte hai

Ram: kis ki

Priya: humari pehli karva chauth ki she gives him a smile 😆 where as Ram gives her an angry look 😡


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Posted: 13 years ago
hmmm... hoping to see the monday's episode woulde be exactly similar to this...
nice update...
take care...😊😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow
cant stop smiling after reading dis update
awesome update
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Posted: 13 years ago
Love it! 👏 👏 Can so see this happening on Monday!! Can't wait for the next part!
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome dear!!
Hope they give us a scene like this it will be great to watch it!! I can already imagine their expressions!
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: fan_forever

hmmm... hoping to see the monday's episode woulde be exactly similar to this...

nice update...
take care...😊😊


thanks you glad you liked it you too take care 😊

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