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farhana

@Rakhie_08

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Posted: 14 years ago

#21

Continuing from Fridays epi when BharLi are in the car and Bharti mentions her fears about having a 'midget' child, I want to see the following scene please.

Murli takes Bharti's hands in his and gives them a kiss. Then he looks into her eyes and says the following.

'Who says that I didn't get a 'sahi' wife? I got absolutely the right wife! If being a sahi wife means someone who is kind, considerate, loving, big-hearted, generous, respectful and loyal, then there can be no-one more sahi then MY Bharti.

Mana ke once upon a time my idea of a sahi wife may have been different. But I'm glad that my idea was wrong. Because I wouldn't trade you for the world!

Mana ke once I thought that perhaps you wouldn't be able to come up to my level. But I was foolish, because you were always at the 'right' level. I just needed to come down from my own pedestal and stand with you.

Mana ke there may have been a time when you weren't my dream. But now my dream and dreams are you.

Mana ke there may have been a time when I couldn't see myself with you. But now I can't see myself without you. Now I can't tell where you end and I begin.

After we got married, there were some apprehensions on both our parts. But slowly we started to understand each other.

When I first started to like you, I was afraid to love you. And now that I love you I'm afraid to lose you.

You think because other people may not see you as perfect, that I also feel this way? I love you not because you are perfect, but because you're perfect for me.

And then he takes her face in his hands and with a little mischevious smile and a glint in his eyes, says

'I'm glad no one else sees you the way I see you. If they did I might lose you to someone else!'

At which point he flashes one of his dazzling smiles, and Bharti overcome by what he says throws her arms around him and we have a very warm heartfelt and loving hug!

Edited by Rakhie_08 - 14 years ago

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addicted1

@addicted1

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

#22

@ Rakhie: i am charmed, enchanted and deeply moved. I read ur post and could see practically the scene. AMAZING, thats what we want him to say. Noone could have expressed it better than u did 👏 u should change ur profession. What about becoming CV ;)

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kt25

@kt25

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#23

I know Rakhie08 is on a roll and once again great post my friend if I might call you that 😊. But is it just me or did anyone not think that it is necessary to let Bharti's mom in on this great news. If it were me, I would first share it with my mom. Hopefully, they do it next week. Unless, they decide to leave Dhara out of the picture and cut her character loose as they did with Sudha. These CVs, you never know. But leave it to Rakhie she will mesh the characters so very well in her posts which the CVs never do. Learn something CVs, take notes from Rakhie's posts. She is giving them away for free 😃

Edited by kt25 - 14 years ago

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Tayyiba

@bavdfan

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: kt25
I know Rakhie08 is on a roll and once again great post my friend if I might call you that 😊. But is it just me or did anyone not think that it is necessary to let Bharti's mom in on this great news. If it were me, I would first share it with my mom. Hopefully, they do it next week. Unless, they decide to leave Dhara out of the picture and cut her character loose as they did with Sudha. These CVs, you never know. But leave it to Rakhie she will mesh the characters so very well in her posts which the CVs never do. Learn something CVs, take notes from Rakhie's posts. She is giving them away for free 😃

right ! the exit of dhara's character was weird and rushed ! i think that the cv forget a little about that and they'll catch up next week by making bharti call her mom.

Rae and Rakhie just delievered us some perfect scenes ! 👏
I think that we're all already seeing it in front of our eyes ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

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farhana

@Rakhie_08

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: addicted1
@ Rakhie: i am charmed, enchanted and deeply moved. I read ur post and could see practically the scene. AMAZING, thats what we want him to say. Noone could have expressed it better than u did 👏 u should change ur profession. What about becoming CV ;)

Aw shucks, thankoo! 😳

I tend to write in scenes in my head. I would love to become a CV. CV's if you're listening, I'm more than willing to do some freelance creative writing for you 😆

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farhana

@Rakhie_08

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: kt25

I know Rakhie08 is on a roll and once again great post my friend if I might call you that 😊. But is it just me or did anyone not think that it is necessary to let Bharti's mom in on this great news. If it were me, I would first share it with my mom. Hopefully, they do it next week. Unless, they decide to leave Dhara out of the picture and cut her character loose as they did with Sudha. These CVs, you never know. But leave it to Rakhie she will mesh the characters so very well in her posts which the CVs never do. Learn something CVs, take notes from Rakhie's posts. She is giving them away for free 😃

Yes, off course you can call me friend 👍🏼. I did wonder why Bharti didn't think to call Dhara. I know the first person I informed, after my husband, was my mother!

If the character has exited the show completely, then there is a chance that we're just supposed to forget her existence. It's happened before! But they could show either Murli or Bharti, even KamAnsi placing a call to Bhushan and Dhara.

I would like to see Bharti calling Neelam too!

And thank you for your appreciation of my scene. 😃

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farhana

@Rakhie_08

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: bavdfan

right ! the exit of dhara's character was weird and rushed ! i think that the cv forget a little about that and they'll catch up next week by making bharti call her mom.

Rae and Rakhie just delievered us some perfect scenes ! 👏
I think that we're all already seeing it in front of our eyes ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

Now if they would just show it on screen...😉

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farhana

@Rakhie_08

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#28

Originally posted by: Rakhie_08
CV's I want to see this scene please. Or something similar.

Murli takes Bharti shopping, and while she is occupied looking at things she wants to purchase, he should buy her a whole lot of gifts. And I mean lots!

Clothes, jewellery, bangles, chocolates, ornaments! Atleast 15, 20 different gifts. Then he needs to have them gift-wrapped just as he said he would when she mentioned that she loved recieving wrapped gifts.

He needs to secretly get them into the house and hide them away from her. Late at night when they're alone, he should give her a handful only. Bharti can sit there opening her presents. and just as she thinks she has opened the last one, Murli should go to all the different places he has hidden them around the room and bring them all out! From under the bed, inside wardrobes, in drawers on top of cupboards! 😆. There should be more presents than Bharti has ever recieved in her entire lifetime!

Then I want to see some masti between these two. Like they had during the SR scene in the honeymoon epi. Obviously Bharti, now being pregnant can't run, but they can be silly. I don't care what they do as long as it results in Murli tumbling onto the bed with her 😉

Then as he realises he is holding his wife in his arms on the bed, I want to see some small eye-locks and some appreciative glances and loving looks. Perhaps he can brush away a few stray hairs from her face and place a soft gentle kiss somewhere 😉

And the rest I will leave to you. You don't pay me to tell you everything! 🤣

Actually, on second thoughts I'd rather not leave it to the CV's if you please. I don't trust them to deliver what I want.😡 So I'm going to carry this scene on. Here's the continuation below of what happened above,

So once Murli has placed a few kisses on Bharti, he is still leaning over her as she lays on the bed. And with gentleness and concern in his voice he says,

"Bharti, I want to be 'close' to you just as much as you wanted to be 'close' to me. But I worry a little. When you took a turn for the worse after the suhaag raat, I felt very bad. I felt very selfish. That because of my desire I had caused you to suffer"

Bharti, then very gently places a hand on his face and replies,

"Was there no desire on my part that night? Did I not desire to be as close to you as you did to me? Besides even if there was any distress or suffering, in order to be close to you mujhe manzoor hai"

Bharti, takes her hand and placing it on the back of Murli's neck brings his face a little closer, and basking in the love of her husband says with a new-found confidence,

"Manzoor hai"

Then she draws his face just a little closer and whispers into his ear,

"Manzoor hai"

Murl looks at his wife like she was the most fragile and loveliest thing ever. We see the back of Murli's head as he leans over and covers Bharti's face.