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Posted: 14 years ago
#61

I'm so annoyed at Bharti today. The scene didn't go the way it ought to have. So to rectify the situation I have written another BharLi scene.

Bharti enters the bedroom and sees Murli sitting on the sofa looking through some papers. He hears her come in, looks up with an accusing look on his face and goes back to his papers. Bharti is a little puzzled by this. 'What's wrong with Murli-jee'? she wonders. She walks over to the cupboard and pulls out her nighty and glances over at Murli. He looks up again and when Bharti smiles, he purses his lips disdainfully and doesn't return it. He just carries on with his work.

Bharti is now even more puzzled. 'What has happened to him all of a sudden? Why is he giving me such funny looks?'. But she puts it down to him being busy with work and walks off into the bathroom.

Once she's gone Murli puts down his papers and glumly sits there with his chin resting in his hands. 'Yeh Bharti na. Asha de kar, nirasha kar diya mujhe!' He humphed and bmphed and disheartendly picked up his work again.

A few minutes later Bharti walked back into the room. Murli instinctively looked up and immediately kicked himself for it. Bharti was wearing a different nighty tonight. It was black, had a lower neckline than her usual ones and had an empire line gathering at the bust. To say that Murli's pulse started racing at the sight, was an understatement! Her bheega bhal and black negligee made her look absolutely beautiful. And the fact that she was completely oblivious of this only added to her allure. Bharti smiled at Murli. She took a few steps towards him, and for a moment Murli's smile was as wide as the ocean. Except, she turned and walked towards the crib instead and started playing with the baby!

Murli was incredulous. He started after her open-mouthed and totally annoyed. Bharti played with the baby and was chatting to Murli at the same time, about this and that to do with Bhopu. After a few minutes she suddenly realised that the conversation was very much one-sided. Murli wasn't responding at all. She looked back towards him and noticed that while he appeared to be immersed in his work, he was infact looking at her out of the corner of his eye.

It was only then, Bharti realised what was bothering her usually jovial husband. She walked up to him. "What's wrong? Why are you not talking. All this time I've been talking and you haven't said anything. What's up?". Murli shrugged his shoulders, "kuch nahi". He didn't look up, but his tone told Bharti, that something was most definitely up. She smiled a knowing smile. "Naraz hai mujse?". Murli cleared his throat. "Do I have a reason to be upset with you?"

Bharti replied, "I don't know. Isi liye toh poonch rahi hoon" Murli said nothing and just buried his head deeper into his papers. Bharti walked away, and without looking up Murli couldn't help but breath a dissappointed sigh.

Suddenly he felt a pair of arms wrap themselves around his shoulders, and Bharti's head popped out from behind him. She raised her brows at him, silently asking him if this is what he wanted. Murli pretended not to care. "Abhi bhi naraz hai? Does this not help"? Murli cleared his throat and asked her to let him get on with his work.

Bharti with one arm still wrapped around his shoulders, used the other to turn his face towards her. Murli was now looking straight into his eyes beautiful big brown eyes. He was gone. Completely and utterly. But he sure as hell wasn't going to let her know that. Bharti looked intently into his eyes, then she slowly kissed him on the forehead. "Abhi bhi naraz hai?" Murli says nothing. He just wants to allow that kiss on his skin to linger for a little longer. Bharti then kisses one cheek softly and asks him the same thing again. Murli remains quiet, but sterness of his face has now been replaced by a softness, that melts Bharti's heart. She kisses the other cheek with the same gentleness as the first and repeats her question once again. Bharti's kisses feel like the touch of feathers on Murli's skin. And yet at the same time, there is an electric frisson that awakens every fibre in his body.

Bharti takes a look into his eyes, deep into his eyes and slowly and very softly takes his lips between hers. It leaves Murli utterly captivated and completely helpless. 'How can something so soft feel so powerful and intense?' he wondered. As they kissed, Murli wrapped his arms around Bharti and gently pulled her around the sofa and to him. He glided across the sofa a little and carefully lowered her onto the seat and cradled her head in his hands. He instinctively sought her hand and entangled his fingers in hers. He loosened his lips from hers and kissed her neck and murmured her name before laying his head to rest on her bosom. Bharti strokd the back of his neck and gently teased his hair. "Abhi bhi naraz hai?" she asked in a playful tone. Murli smiled. Still resting his head on her chest, he replied, "I stopped being upset the moment you walked out of the bathroom. bas I just needed you to sooth the last dying embers". Bharti playfully smacked him on the shoulders "Murli-jee!". Murli turned to face her, grabbed her in a bear hug and said in the same playful tone "Kya Bharti-jee?!"

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Posted: 14 years ago
#62

While my earlier scene was a separate scene that continued what was started in yesterdays epi, but never continued. The following is a continuation of yesterday's scene and starts from the point at which Murli says:

"Mahol bana diya tumne Bharti, ekdum"

Bharti, though somewhat surprised smiled and slowly turned to face him, still in Murli's embrace. She wrapped her arms around his neck and said

"Darasal, humne aapko yahan pyar mohabbat ke batein karne ke liye nahi bulaya. Lekin jis baat ke liye bulaya woh tori der ki baad mein bhi ho sakti hai"

She smiled shyly and bent foward to place a kiss on his forehead. Murli hugged her tighter.

"Nahi, aise mathe par kiss dene se kaam nahi chalega".
He raised his brows at Bharti with a mischevious glint in his eyes. Bharti bit her bottom lip in an effort to stop her self laughing. She looked at him in mock puzzlement, shook her head and asked
"Nahi chalega?".
Murli vehemently shook his head. Bharti pretended to be in thought.
"Achcha, toh kiya yahan dene se chalega?"
and pointed to his cheek. Murli merely shrugged his shoulders non-commitally. Bharti smiled and kissed him on his cheek. A small smile appeared at the corner of Murli's mouth, but he said nothing. Bharti looked at him again, smiled broadly and asked
"Abh chalega?".
Murli again shook his head, and replied
"Uh uh, nahi".
Bharti raised a brow, saw the look in her husbands eyes and blushed. She closed her eyes and leaned in to place a soft kiss on his lips. She pulled away and turned her back to the window, but Murli pulled her back to face him.

He pulled her closer to him, closed his eyes and rested his forehead against hers. He could hear her rapid breathing and feel the racing of his pulse.

"Bahut pyar karte hai tumse Bharti. Bas humesha mera pas rehna. Kabhi mujhe chod ke maat jana".
His voice was almost a whisper.

Bharti rested her cheek against his own and in a voice that matched his replied

"Abh kahan jao mein? Meri sari duniya toh in bahon main hai".
Murli held her tighter and kissed her on the neck. Bharti rested her head on his shoulders and reciprocated his hug.
"Hum bhi aapse bahut pyar karte hai Murli-ji"
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Posted: 14 years ago
#63

Originally posted by: Rakhie_08

I want to see the following tonight.

It's night time in the Lal mansion. Bharti is sitting on the bed leaning against Murli who has his arms around her and the baby that is cradled in Bharti's arms. Bharti is looking at the baby. Just looking. Murli is looking at Bharti and noting how motherhood becomes her.

He takes her hand and holds it up to his lips and kisses it softly. Bharti looks up at him and takes her hand and places her palm against his cheek. Murli feels reassured by the warmth of her touch. Bharti smiles and asks gently 'khush'? Murli replies equally gently 'bahut'. He looks at his sleeping child and ishare-se asks Bharti if he should take him to his cot. She nods, kisses the baby on the forehead and hands him to Murli. Murli walks to the cot and gently lowers the baby in. He kneels and stares at his son in awe and wonderment for a few moments before giving him a kiss and returning to bed.

Bharti is still sitting there watching the baby sleeping. Murli embraces her from behind and together they spend a few precious moments just watching their sleeping child. Murli steals his eyes away from his son and focuses them on his mother. He tucks a stray hair behind Bharti's ear and kisses the side of her head. Then just behind her ear, before placing a soft, gentle kiss on her neck.

"For one moment when I thought I had lost you, my whole world turned dark. And when I realised I still had you, it was like being given life again. I never want to go there again Bharti. I never want to be at that point ever again. Promise me that we will never have to deal with anything like that ever again"

Bharti kisses his arms that are still wrapped around her shoulders and says " I promise". Murli inhales deeply and tightens his hold on her. He turns her around and lays her on the bed. He brushes the hair away from her face, cups it's side and gently strokes her cheeks with his thumb.

"I don't know how to thank you. I don't have the words with which to show my gratitude for the ultimate risk you took to bring our child into the world. I love you so much. So very much. And for the moment all I have to offer you in return for this sacrifice and this gift, is my undying love for all seven lifetimes"

He leans forward and ever so softly and gently, but with warmth and passion from every part of his being, he kisses her on the lips. He so wants to be with her, and yet is terrified of being so. He wraps his arms around her and pulls her into him. Bharti snuggles in close and rests her head against his chest. And together they enjoy just being in each others arms for that moment



this scene is so natural. I can totally see it. Thanks !

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