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Posted: 14 years ago
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Another BharLi scene.
It is night time and BharLi are in their bedroom. They are on the bed. Murli is sitting up, leaning back against the headboard, while Bharti is leaning back against him. Murli has his hands around her in an embrace.
They are discussing the arrival of the baby. After a visit to the doctors they have been told how difficult this pregnancy may be for Bharti. She voices her worries and doesn't want anything to happen to the baby. Murli reassures her that nothing will happen. That they will be prepared for all eventualities, and he will be there for her no matter what. He places a kiss on the side of her head, and strokes her hands as he says his words of comfort.
Suddenly, he comes from behind Bharti and lays across his stomach and brings his face near to her stomach and starts talking to the baby.
"You can hear me right? I can't tell you how happy I am that you are coming. My days aren't going fast enough. I know you will be the loveliest baby in the world. After all you are growing in THIS mother's womb, so that will be for sure"
He smiles up at Bharti, who places a small hand on his cheek touched by his sentiments. Murli carries on.
"I will do anything and everything for you when you get here. But before then there is something you must do for me. You musn't give your mother any trouble ok? You must behave and give her a pleasant time. And when the time comes near, like a good child, enter the world without causing her any pain ok? Whatever difficulty you were to give to her, when you come, you can give it all to me"
He kisses his own fingers and then gently places them on Bharti's stomach. Bharti has tears in her eyes as she looks at her husband and wonders why she ever felt alone at any point.
Murli then places his head on her lap as Bharti runs her fingers through his hair. The lovely bansuri music is played and we leave the couple to their thoughts and to each other.
Edited by Rakhie_08 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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oh rakhie, i am stunned...out of words...how beautifully you have written this!!
i am deeply moved...it is simply amaaazing...i can use all the right adjectives to describe the beauty of this scene...but it speaks for itself...
I WANT THE CVS TO HAVE IT FROM HERE...I WANT IT ENACTED BY THIS LOVELY COUPLE...


the earlier one is equally good..very romantic..but we all want that kind of display on our screens for sure...loved that one too!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
#43
OMG Rakhie, LOVE UR SCENES N LOVE UUU FOR THEM.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#44

Originally posted by: Rakhie_08

@ kt25 - Sudha who? 😉. I hope Neelam pays Bharti a visit. She was always lovely to Bharti, and I loved her teasing Murli. Perhaps this time Murli will join in, now that he isn't po-faced anymore seeing as how he has sache dil se claimed Bharti! 😆@ Rae - Thank you kindly. I tend to write one-shots' I'm afraid. It's all I can manage in my time! 😃. I suddenly get a scene in my head and it has to be out there! But I'd love to read someone else's FF.

@ Hashbrown - Thanks for liking it. It doesn't really matter if CV's don't show any of these scenes, but they must show something to indicate closure on this issue. I hope we get to see something real soon.



awww no worries we love it all the same so thank you!! 😃👏
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Rakhie you've done it again - absolutely fab scenes!!! I LOVED IT !!! oh how I wish the cv's would check these out..👏
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Posted: 14 years ago
#46
Thanks guys.
Seems CV's are bent on following the usual Kekta Maiyya type tracks now. Hence Gau's mum coming to poison her daughter's mind, and Gau reverting to her old tricks. Boooring! 🥱
They'll not show what we want. So we might just have to contend with reading these scenes.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: Rakhie_08

Another BharLi scene.

It is night time and BharLi are in their bedroom. They are on the bed. Murli is sitting up, leaning back against the headboard, while Bharti is leaning back against him. Murli has his hands around her in an embrace.
They are discussing the arrival of the baby. After a visit to the doctors they have been told how difficult this pregnancy may be for Bharti. She voices her worries and doesn't want anything to happen to the baby. Murli reassures her that nothing will happen. That they will be prepared for all eventualities, and he will be there for her no matter what. He places a kiss on the side of her head, and strokes her hands as he says his words of comfort.
Suddenly, he comes from behind Bharti and lays across his stomach and brings his face near to her stomach and starts talking to the baby.
"You can hear me right? I can't tell you how happy I am that you are coming. My days aren't going fast enough. I know you will be the loveliest baby in the world. After all you are growing in THIS mother's womb, so that will be for sure"
He smiles up at Bharti, who places a small hand on his cheek touched by his sentiments. Murli carries on.
"I will do anything and everything for you when you get here. But before then there is something you must do for me. You musn't give your mother any trouble ok? You must behave and give her a pleasant time. And when the time comes near, like a good child, enter the world without causing her any pain ok? Whatever difficulty you were to give to her, when you come, you can give it all to me"
He kisses his own fingers and then gently places them on Bharti's stomach. Bharti has tears in her eyes as she looks at her husband and wonders why she ever felt alone at any point.
Murli then places his head on her lap as Bharti runs her fingers through his hair. The lovely bansuri music is played and we leave the couple to their thoughts and to each other.

The expression that I had was AWWW... You keep outdoing your own posts my friend. Keep it up.👍🏼
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Posted: 14 years ago
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We want more Rakhie, pleeeaaase.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#49
Dear CVs,

Pls don't spoil such a nice drama like Baba Aiso Var Dhoondo. The plot you have is a very engaging one and a lot can be done with it. The current track being shown is not at all appealing to any of the viewers and displeasure has already been voiced in this regard.

The viewers are more interested in seeing the relationship between the two main protagonists Bharti and Murli. No one is interested in seeing secondary characters. Its okay if they come for an episode or two. Most of them are simply dragged and make miseries into the lives of the main characters. All have been witness to crying, and trust me it doesn't seem pleasant at all! Keep the happy moments going!!!!

Pls a humble request by all the fans we want to see more of Bharti and Murli!!!!!

Come on forum members, lend your support!

PS: I hope the CVs have a look at this :P
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Posted: 14 years ago
#50
I understand that we can't just see BharLi all the time. Off course there have to be other subplots and characters too.
But the upcoming track doesn't appeal at all. This is just the same as all the other serials out there.
Then what makes BAVD different from them? Why should we bother watching this and not something else?

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