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sumisa91

@sumisa91

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Posted: 14 years ago

#31

@Rakhie_08

dats exactly wat i wud love to c!!! y dont u become a CV yaar pls hindi serials won't b as boring, it will give them a new life! seriously think of takin it up as a career ;)

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kt25

@kt25

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Posted: 14 years ago

#32

I would like to see Bharti calling Neelam too!

@Rakhie_08 - You are absolutely right! Personally I did not care for Sudha's character. But Neelam on the other hand is a true friend and she deserves to hear this great news from Bharti. She will be genuinely excited and happy for Bharti.

Edited by kt25 - 14 years ago

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Rae24

@Rae24

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Posted: 14 years ago

#33

Defo both dhara and neelam should know so should Amit I
miss him!!!!

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Rae24

@Rae24

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Posted: 14 years ago

#34

Rakhie girl you got flair for writing that was absolutely beautiful they should seriously ask you to become a cv for the show lol here's an idea why not write us a ff I always wanted someone to write one for BAVD 😉 And it certainly would more bharli romance then the actual show!!!

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hashbrown

@hashbrown

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Posted: 14 years ago

#35

it is too good...i loved it!! cvs need to learn something now...it is important to pull out such scenes in order to give a decent closure to the 'intimacy issue'...
please do continue to write more...

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farhana

@Rakhie_08

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Posted: 14 years ago

#36

@ kt25 - Sudha who? 😉. I hope Neelam pays Bharti a visit. She was always lovely to Bharti, and I loved her teasing Murli. Perhaps this time Murli will join in, now that he isn't po-faced anymore seeing as how he has sache dil se claimed Bharti! 😆@ Rae - Thank you kindly. I tend to write one-shots' I'm afraid. It's all I can manage in my time! 😃. I suddenly get a scene in my head and it has to be out there! But I'd love to read someone else's FF.

@ Hashbrown - Thanks for liking it. It doesn't really matter if CV's don't show any of these scenes, but they must show something to indicate closure on this issue. I hope we get to see something real soon.

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Tayyiba

@bavdfan

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Posted: 14 years ago

#37

so after today's episode i can say that it wasn't as romantic as you wrote (and as i wished it could be) but still, really nice to see them together AWWW i want more and more. GIVE UP THE LEAP CV! 👎🏼

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hashbrown

@hashbrown

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Posted: 14 years ago

#38

hope to see murli giving bharti a great present for making him the father of their child...

i would also like to see some kind of a celebration, strictly meant for bharti OR murli, may be their wedding anniversary before the leap, or bharti arranging a surprise birthday party for murli...
then i get to see their love eye locks and later on some real good hugging in the privacy of their room...

i would also like bharti to find out a real genuine guy for veena...who makes up for every thing that she suffered in the past...bharti, acting as a real bhabi will elevate her place in her husband's heart...after all, veena's SHAADI was the reason behind her own SHAADI...and post parakash revelation, it will make a lot of sense...

i would like to see a lot of romance between the husband and wife even after the leap...they will be pretty young 7 later...so i would like to see a lot more love in their lives, as they enter the matured level of their relationship...

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farhana

@Rakhie_08

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Posted: 14 years ago

#39

Originally posted by: Rakhie_08

Actually, on second thoughts I'd rather not leave it to the CV's if you please. I don't trust them to deliver what I want.😡 So I'm going to carry this scene on. Here's the continuation below of what happened above,

So once Murli has placed a few kisses on Bharti, he is still leaning over her as she lays on the bed. And with gentleness and concern in his voice he says,

"Bharti, I want to be 'close' to you just as much as you wanted to be 'close' to me. But I worry a little. When you took a turn for the worse after the suhaag raat, I felt very bad. I felt very selfish. That because of my desire I had caused you to suffer"

Bharti, then very gently places a hand on his face and replies,

"Was there no desire on my part that night? Did I not desire to be as close to you as you did to me? Besides even if there was any distress or suffering, in order to be close to you mujhe manzoor hai"

Bharti, takes her hand and placing it on the back of Murli's neck brings his face a little closer, and basking in the love of her husband says with a new-found confidence,

"Manzoor hai"

Then she draws his face just a little closer and whispers into his ear,

"Manzoor hai"

Murl looks at his wife like she was the most fragile and loveliest thing ever. We see the back of Murli's head as he leans over and covers Bharti's face.

OK, so I decided to continue my continuation of the initial scene! 🤣

The first light of morning streams in through the bedroom window on the sleeping faces of BharLi. Bharti is sleeping in her husbands arms with her head in the crook of his shoulders.

As Murli opens his eyes, he realises her proximity and takes a very loving glance at her. For a few moments he is lost in the serentiy of her sleeping face, and continues to gaze at her.

But suddenly, his forehead begins to crease as a worry overtakes his joy. His fears about Bharti being unable to bear his closeness begins to play on his mind again.

Furtively he raises a hand and very slowly with trepidation reaches for her forehead. And just as he is about to place it there, a hand stops him. It is Bharti's.

And with eyes still closed, she says calmly "I'm fine".

She then opens her eyes and looks up into the worried face of her husband and says once again

"I'm fine".

Murli is still unsure. Bharti gently nods her head to reassure him further and smiles. It is only then that Murli allows himself to relax. Bharti moves herself to try and get up and out of bed, but is pulled back by Murli.

"Where are you going?" he asks with mischeif in his voice.

Bharti completely understanding his intentions smiles shyly and says "It's morning, we need to get up. I need to go and start my days work"

Murli holds her closer, and says"So, start your work. I'm not stopping you".

Bharti still smiling says "I can only start it, if you let me go na?".

Murli strokes her face and says with full masti in his voice "You don't have to go anywhere to start your days work. It starts here! Now give me my good morning kiss and start your work!"

Bharti, laughs "Murli-ji", and tries to get away once again. Murli again pulls her back and says she can't go anywhere until she starts her day with the most important task, his kiss, and indicates his lips. Bharti, now even more embarassed, struggles to get out of his grip. This pleading and refusing goes on for a few moments until finally Murli get's into a 'fake' huff and lets her go. He leans back onto his pillow and closes his eyes. Bharti pretends to move away, but moves back towards him and while he has his eyes closed places a kiss just at the corner of his mouth.

Murli's eyes pop open and before Bharti can get away he grabs her pulls her back onto him saying in a teasing but determined voice "today I will get my good morning kiss".

Bharti giggles away and we see a little bit of a wrestle going on before the camera pans away to the window.