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Part 1


A normal regular day in an actors life


Shaleen went out for his shoot and there was luck , jr and Rakesh ( help) at home .


Suddenly there were sparks happened and there was a major short circuit in the house.


Rakesh got scared and called shaleen. But as his phone was on silent . He immediately called the fire brigade before it got worse .

The neighbour’s tried to help . They called shaleen finally he could take the call .


Shaleen : ha Sharma ji , kya mere ghar mein aag . Mein jald se jald aa raha hoon. Pl fire brigade ko call kijiye mere dono dogs hai Andar aur Rakesh .


He sent a message to his near and dear friends who so ever could reach there as his location was quite far.


Sahil , Suchit, suyash and bez was on their way .


Sana called bez .


Sana: bezi im on my way . I m just 10 mins away . Rakesh, Luck aur jr thik ho.


She reached and saw the fire brigade taking control over the place.


Sana : sir Andar 2 dogs hai aur ek banda .


Fire fighter :ma’am bas mein yeh fire Bhuj jay hum upar ja rahe hai .


Sana couldn’t wait for them . And she ran up the stairs. His home was on 7th floor.


Sana : Rakesh bhaiya … bhaiya .


She get banging the door but as it was not opening she saw a fire extinguisher and started banging it to the door and finally the door opened .


Sana screamed for luck and jr .


She saw Rakesh holding on to them in corner trying to protect them.


Rakesh : didi aap yahan ?? Didi luck aur jr ko leke jayeye .


Suddenly they heard another fire flame bloom . And asked fire fighter could finally get in .


Luck was heavy and jr was on her one shoulder .

Sana lifted them both and carefully started going out .

Firefighters: ma’am Bahar jayeye . Pleaseee run.


Sana : Rajesh jr ko saans lene mein mushkil ho Rahi hai


Rakesh : didi aap jayeye.


Sana : saath Chalo tum bhi com on .


She gathered them and ran down . Bez , sah and suchit were there .


Bez : Sanaa tum yahan ?? Luck jr .


Sana : bez v need to take them to vet. Jaldi .


Bez : ok suchit sahil yahan sambhalo .


They took them in the car .


Sana : my babies luck jr aap dono bohot strong ho bohot Bilkul papa jaise. Bilkul dar a nahi .


Shaleen reached his home and all he could see were ashes .

His home was burned to ashes.


Shaleen : luck jr .


He screamed for them .


Suchit : shaa sana sana ke paas hai dono wooh hospital leke gai hai check up ke liye.


Sahil : shaa chal mere ghar chal abhi badme ayenge yahan.



At the vet ,

Doc : let me check them . Waise toh dono thik hai but fire ki Vajahse dar gai hai .


Sana just kept massaging them .


After a while doc said , both are fine and can be taken home .


Sana : Chalo luck jr papa ke paas chalte hai . Come my babies .


Bez : Lao mein luck ko leta hoon . Aja bachche .


In the car , bez : sana tujhe kaise pata chala ? Tu paas mein thi ?


Sana : I was working out and suddenly news mein Dekha. Mera kick boxing class pass mein hai . Mujhe idea tha aap log aa hi jaoge but I thought mein asse paas ho toh chali jati hoon .


They all reached sahil home . Rakesh was fine too .


Shaleen : Rakesh tum apne ghar jao. Mein phone karta hoon .


Rakesh : bhaiyaa rehne dijiye mujhe yahan . Mein luck aur jr ko dekhunga. Apko akele chodke nahi jaunga mein.


Luck and jr came running to shaalien . He hugged them as tight he could he was scared to hell .


Shaleen : yeh dono thik hai ?


Sana: they are fine shaa . Doc ne check kar liya hai . Rakesh bhaiya kuch khane ko le ayeye luck aur jr ke liue .


Sahil: mein Lata hoon .


Rakesh : aaj didi nahi ati toh pata nahi mein ,luck aur jr ko kaise Bahar nikalte .


Hearing this Shaa went to Sana and hugged her tight .


Shaa: thank you for saving them . They mean my world to me .


Sana : I know it shaa. How could I not come to save them . How could I not come for you ?


Shaa : tum thik toh ho .. tumhe kahi nahi lagi na .??


Sana : are nahi I am all good .


Bez: but pagal tu upar kyun gai ? Tujhe bhi allergies hai.


Sana : bez luck aur jr se zyada nahi kuch bhi .aur shaa till things get better they are staying with me . No questions asked no excuses accepted.


She calls her agent and cancels her day schedule .


Precap :


Pulling back together



Hope you like this story And the beginning of this beautiful journey

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Posted: 2 years ago
#12

Loved it dear 😍 Pinku 🤗

Awesome start 😃

Well fire broke out at Shaleen place & he got hell scared after receiving the news which is obvious ... I really loved how friends reached their in no time as resued the dogs & Rakesh je

Sana without caring barged inside & resued them first. ... Without delay she took dogs to vet doctor & got them checked as they were scared too

Shaleen comes to know about this & she stood as a complete support with him in this tough times hopefully our Shaleen will be back soon

Thanks for the Tag 🏷️

Keep writing ✍️

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Awesome

Love it

Continue soon

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Love it..

Sana is so caring for Sha and his belongings..

Can’t wait to see what happens next..

Continue soon

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It's when troubles come u know who cares

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Dear readers, thank you so much for reading and liking the new update


Part 2


Shaleen was standing in a corner worried . Neither could he eat nor could he talk . He couldn’t believe what just happened . Finally after all these years he had a place to call home and now it’s burnt


Sana went to him and placed her hand on his shoulders .


Sana : shaa everything will be fine . Hum haina tere saath . Don’t worry .


She gathered him in a hug. After a while ,


Shaleen : kaise thik hoga . 3 din baad mom dad are coming to stay with me . Kya kahun unse ? Ghar nahi hai . Aap mat aao.


Suchit : bhai meine apne agent ko call kiya

Urgent mein ghar dhoondhke dega wooh .


Sahil : meine bhi building mein pocha hai .


Shaleen: but uss ghar ka kya ?? Kaise fix karunga usee .? 3 din mein?? Wooh ghar Andar Jane layak bhi nahi hai .


Sana gets a call from a friend .


Sana : ha ok. Guys ghar mil gaya and you com on .


Shaleen : tujhe kaise ??


Sana ::meine ek friend ko bola tha.


She gets the message on the new home and they reach the place .


Sana: thanks Gautam.


Gautam : have a look ek bachelor ko toh ho hi jayega .


The house was an average one but they didn’t have many options on such short notice .


Shaleen : Gautam tum landlord se milva doge . Mujhe kal hi ghar chahiye mere parents aa rahe hai .


Gautam : wooh kal Subah aa jayenge . 10 baje .


Sana: great thanks Gautam .


They again reach back to sahil place.


Shaleen : mein apne kapde leke ata hoon .


Sana : I am coming with you .


Shaleen : tu rukna yahan . Infact tu ghar ja Kabse yahan hai .


Sana : mein tujhe chodke Kahin nahi ja Rahi hoon so chal .


They went to the house. There was still smell around and they entered.


Things like clothes and other got saved during to cupboards being strong .


He started feeling restless . But took out the bag and opened the cupboard and started packing in . All his documents , ids and important stuff.


She went in other rooms to see what all is saved.


He packed all he could n sat down on the bed tired and baffled .


She came in with the stuff


Sana : Shaa hogaya kya ?


She saw him worned out . She made him look up to him . He couldn’t resist holding her and hugging from waist.


He remained like this for a while


Shaleen : bohot mushkil se sab kiya tha sana. Ab kaise hoga phir se . Mom dad se help nahi Lena chahta . Unhe kya bolunga


Sana : shaa jaise Pehle kiya tha waise kar loge iss baar . Infact useee better karoge . Aur aunty uncle ki fikar mat karo . Mein unka khyal rakhungi . 2 din mein ghar set kar Denge. Sab hojayega . Chal .


Sana messages her manager to cancel all work related meetings for 4 days . She started making the list of things that

Would be needed .


It was almost night . Dinner time .


Luck and jr are still bit scared .


Sana: luck jr mere strong Bachcho dekho papa is so sad . Unhe cheer up karte hai. Aur dono Bilkul mat daro ok.


She hugged both of them tightly. Shaleen personally fed his dogs so they feel comforted .


Sana went to her place after dropping Shaa to sahil place .


At night only she took out all extra stuff that will be needed to restart the house and packed everything for the morning .

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Posted: 2 years ago
#17

Loved it dear Pinku 🤗

Awesome update 😃

A friend in need is a friend indeed & such friends are rare I loved how Sana is being a strong pillar in his life after this mess

Finally temporary arrangements are made as his parents are coming & now they have to start from afresh as entire house is really in bad condition

Luck & Junior are too scared & they both are taking the care even Sana planned to cheer him up sweetly

Waiting for more

Thanks for the Tag 🏷️

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Such a loving and caring friend our diva is

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Superb update

Love it

Cont soon

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Part 3


Next morning all men were at sahil place planning the day .


Shaa got the schedular call . He was about to refuse to go for the shoot when Sana entered and stopped him from doing so .


Sana: Bol do 30 mins late aoge.


Shaleen : ha ok I vl be there but 30 mins late Hoga.


Schedular : problem nahi hai . Aap aa jayeye .


Shaleen : sana ghar set karna hai . Tum mujhe mane karne se kyu roka.


Sana: kyunki it’s important. Shaa ek ad shoot hai . Jaldi hojayega . Khatam karke aa jao. Shaa kaam bhi zarori hai . Meri car mein ek bag mein Jisme sab basic requirements padi hai. Wooh aaj mein kar dungi.


Suchit : mein Teri help kar dunga sana.


Sahil : mein bhi .


Sana : but Abhi break fast time . Chalo sab aa jao.


Shaleen : mein ready hoke nikalte hoon .


Sahil : Shaa nasta .


Shaleen : I vl leave .


Sana : shaa break fast ke bina bahi jate . Mein tere liye specially heavy protein lai ho .


Shaleen just ate and left.


Bez : he is broken from within. Yeh phuta nahi par bohot Bhara hai uske Andar .


Sahil : itni Saal lagte hai ghar banane mein bez wooh bhi Mumbai mein . Aur uncle aunty aa rahe hai . Unko face karna . Wooh stress mein hai aur kaun nahi hoga.


Sana : so guys let’s cheer him up. Ese baithke kuch hone wala nahi . Ab let’s plan .

Suchit kya tum furniture arrange kar sakte holn .


Suchit : ha wooh I vl manage .


Sana : great 2 set of beds, dining table and chair and sofa 2 itna karo. Mein ghar mein jake joh lai ho sab set karti hoon .


Rakesh : didi mein apki madad karunga .


Sana : Rakesh bhaiya apko yeh kaam ?


Rakesh : Thoda dur hai didi par shaleen bhaiya ne Meri bohot help ki zarorat thi tab . Meine unhe kaise chodu. Luck jr mein nahi chodunga unhe .


Sana : thik hai toh let’s let back to work my team . Shaa ka ghar ready karte hai .


Bez : Pehle wooh landlord se mil lete hai.


Sana : yes wooh 10 baje anewale the . Shaa ke sarein documents ki copy toh raat ko hi ready kar li thi.


Sahil : tu bohot achchi dost hai sana .


Sana: he has been there for me always . Ek baar toh adhi raat ko I called him phir bhi aya tha . Kabhi nahi bola busy hoon Abhi nahi aunga nothing he was just there ..Aur credit lene mein sabse peche . Akhir mein khada hoga. Chalo let’s go .


Meeting with the landlord.


Shaleen had taken it over from the phone.


Shaleen : sir apko Jo bhi contract details hai wooh discuss kar lijiye mein apko paise transfer kar dunga.


Landlord: but apko yahan hona chahiye tha Abhi .


Shaleen: mein kal apse milta hoon pl understand


Landlord : thik hai .


Sana: dekhye it’s very important for us to get this house . Yeh sare documents hai aap sab dekh lijiye .


Landlord : single upar se actor . Koi problem hue toh Aur guarantee.


Sana : guarantee mein leti hoon . Aur app bolte hai toh initial payment mein immediately cheque se deti hoon


Bez : sir achcha sharif ladka hai . Uska kal ghar jal Gaya hai short circuit mein .


Landlord : payments mein koi problem hue toh ?


Bez : hum advance de dete hai .


Sana : yeh lijiye 30k ka advance cheque. Abhi koi problem ??


Landlord : nahi . Thank you . Yeh papers par sign karva lijiye aur mujhe send kar dijiye.


Bez : finally Sana hogaya . But tune cheque kyun Diya ? Wooh shaleen kal dekhe gaya tha cheque.


Sana : bez Abhi bohot expenses ayenge . Usko zarorat padegi . Usee kuch bolna mat.

Chalo ghar settle Kare .


Suchit and sahil did their jobs and goods will be delivered by tomorrow.


Suchit : sab Hogaya hai kal saman aa jayega .


Sahil : aur furniture setup ke liye bhi bande ko Bol Diya hai.


Sana : meine bhi sab basic chese arrange kar di hai . Rakesh bhaiya kitchen ki shopping list bana lijiye hum le ate hai .


Bez : Sana tu please Thoda aram kar . Tera kaam hai usko pura kar .


Sana : aram bez I can’t Parso uncle aunty ke ane se Pehle everything needs to be perfect .


It was evening and shaleen was back from the shoot . His friends were still there for his support .


When he came he saw her fixing curtain rods.


Shaleen : superman rukja .


They fixed it together .


Shaleen : sab kahan hai ??


Sana : are sab kisi na kisi kaam se Bahar hai .


Shaleen : luck aur jr. ??


Sana: kal le aungi sab set hote hi. Tu ek kaam kar ghar chal . Unse mil bhi Lena aur wahi so jana . Kal shoot hai ??


Shaleen : nahi kal sab mein dekhunga . Sabka kaam affect ho raha hai . Tu bhi jayenge apni meetings pe . Pata hai sab cancel karke bethi hai.


Sana : wooh mein Sochungi. shaa sabse pehle cylinder chahiye. Khana banana ke kiye . Unlogo ne cylinder hata diye the .


Shaleen : ha wooh mein kal launga. Washing machine kal use karni padegi.


Sana : yeh dekh extra bed sheets , covers , pillow cases sab ready hai , fridge bhi on hai aur stocked hai for requirements.


Shaleen : wooh landlord ka problem ?


Sana : ha sign those documents . Wooh hojayega .


Shaleen : advance cheque nai manga ? Mein deke Gaya tha .


Sana: nahi . Sun yeh le Tera protein shake . Tune lunch mein kya khaya ?


Bez : shaleen sab track pe hai kal morning sab aajayega .


Shaleen : thanks kaise kahu tum sabse . 2 din se sab lage ho mere liye.


Suchit : bhai bolte hoon aur thanks bolke sharminda kar do ab . Tumse hi Shikha hai but yaar agar fir bhi thanks bolna hai toh sabse bada thanks Sana ko karna . Wooh ese lagi hai jaisa uska ghar ho.


Bez: Suchit kuch chese inn dono ko na dikhti hai na Sunai deti hai.


Shaleen took bez to a corner .


Shaleen : advance payment ?


Bez : madam ne kiya . Tujhe batane ko mama kiya tha. Kitne Saal hue Arjun ko khatam hue ?


Shaleen : 2 yrs ( yeh mera fiction number hai to create a future path)


Bez : Abhi tak nahi samjha .


Shaleen : bez phir se shuru mat ho it’s not the time .


Shaleen : sana mein luck aur jr se kal milunga . Mein aaj raat yahi rahunga .


Sana was still checking stuff .


Shaleen : sana chod de ab . Sab kar dunga mei kal .


Shaleen lied down on a floor itself .

Sana sat next to him . He was plainly staring at the ceiling with blank eyes lost motivation.


Sana : kya baat hai shaa?


Shaleen : hum kya sochte hai sana . Aur kya hojata hai . Meine socha tha ma papa bade ghar mein ayenge . Thoda achcha aur proud feel karenge . Par ab dekho


She started to massage his hair.


Sana : shaa kehte hai achche aur Burre dono waqt ki khubi hai wooh kabhi ek jaise nahi rehte . Yeh bhi chala jayega . Phir slowly Us ghar ko bhi thik kar denge aur yahan se saman shift kar Denge .


Shaleen : tune Paise kyun diye ?


Sana : kya fark padta hai shaa. Focus on imp things right now . Baki sab thik hoga.


She said and looked down and found he had already slept .


She decided not to bother him , so she also slept while sitting .


Next morning they woke up at the bell

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