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Part 9


In the evening , Shashank and Sakshi were picked up by bez .


Shashank : Behzaad you know shaleen loves sana. Yeh ma papa se bolna padega


Poor bez had hard time keeping his smile in tact .


Bez : hum Apka hi wait kar rahe the please aap dono kuch boliye .


Sakshi : mein kisi aur ko Shagun nahi dungi . Bol dungi mumma se . Shashank Pehle Jake shaleen se baat karenge . Baki sab badme . He will need our support .


At home ,


Saeeda : shaleen Sana tum dono Andar jao . Aur hum na bulai tab Tak Ana nahi .


Sha mom : sab se Pehle kise pata tha shaleen .


Shaleen : wooh bhabhi ko . Unhone samaj liya tha jab sana jagrate ke liye ayi thi .



Bez msg : we are coming up


Shaa mom : jao andar .


Shaleen was at ease but Sana was still struggling to believe the situation.

He pulled her and made her sit on his lap .


Shaleen : kya hua ? Kyun pareshan ho ? Ab toh hum saath hai .


Sana : aaj itna sab hua hai mujhe lagta hai I vl need days to recover from this shock. Bechare Bhaiya bhabhi aunty unki bhi class lenge just because hum confess nahi kar paye .


Shaleen : are bhaiya will handle it . Aur ma bhabhi aur tumhe kabhi kuch nahi bolenge . Dant toh hamesha Hume hi khane hai .


Waise tell me kya pehnu Shagun pe ??


Sana looked at him with a shock.


Sana : mera shagun hai aur mere pass kuch nahi pehen ko.


Shaleen : wooh joh walking wardrobe hai ghar mein wooh khali hai kya? Are Shagun hai koi bhi outfit chalega . Tum ese hi bohot beautiful lagti hoon , but mujhe mehnat karni padegi to look good with you .


Sana : esa kuch nahi hai . Waise itna achcha chance mila hai na .


Shaleen : kiske liye ??


Sana pulled him for a lip kiss this time and he was happily surprised. after a while ,


Sana: kiss ke liye. Happy confession to us.

Shaleen : I loved this .


Before they could talk further , they were called .

They walked out hand in hand.


Shashank and Sakshi couldn’t believe what they saw .


Shashank : Sakshi flight walo ne khana mein whiskey toh nai Milaye ?? Mujhe shaleen ke saath Sana dikh Rahi hai .


Sakshi : apko bhi mujhe bhi . Shaleen , sana tum dono ho kya ?? Pinch me Shashank .


Shana : yes bhabhi hum dono hi hai .

Sana hugged Sakshi and shaleen hugged Shashank .


Shaa mom : kaise lagi Devrani ??


Sakshi gave a big smile and took evil eyes of her . And said Thu Thu Thu . World best nazar na lage .


Sakshi : Mumma mujhse almost heart attack aa Jata. Yeh sochke humare shaleen ki shaadi kisi aur se ho Rahi hai.

Mujhe toh laga tha apko ake manana padega yeh shaadi na karne ko.


Shashank: par yeh sab hua kaise ,? App jante hoon ma yeh Sakshi ne bola mein kisiko shagun nahi dungi sana ke alava.


Shana : we love you bhabhi .


Shaa mom : waise is sari fasad ki jad tum hi ho Sakshi .


Sakshi : mein meine kya ?


Shaa mom : shaleen ek baat Bata . Tumhare phone mein photos ki jagah full hai ? Tere phone mein sana ki photos nahi hai ??


Shaleen : nahi kyun ? Phone mein hai , insta pe hai .


Shaa mom : toh ghar mein cupboard mein photos kyun rakhta hai .


Sakshi and shaleen were looking at each other with questioning eyes .


Shaa mom : yaad hai Sakshi yahan ane se Pehle hum Iska kamra thik kar rahe the . Tab mujhe cupboard se yeh mila .




Teri bday picture Sana ke saath.


Shaleen :are wooh ese hi pade thi


Shaa mom : drawer mein Andar cheeson ke neeche chupake?


Shaleen : mom Jane do na aap Abhi .


Seeing everyone teasing faces


Shaa mom : tab mujhe laga kuch hai . Sakshi ko pucha toh usne baat Badal di. But mein samaj gai .


Sakshi : are mumma Mujhe bhi jagrate pe hu confirm hua .


Sana : wooh kaise bhabhi ??


Sakshi: yaad hai tumhe ..jab tum ghar ayi thi.


Flashback:


Shaleen was back home for sometime and there was a jagrata happening at his place . Sana was in Delhi for some work and so she was invited for it too .


Sakshi: hi Sana


Sana : hi bhabhi . Kaise hoo?


Sakshi : ek dam badhiya. Come .


Shaa mom : Sana aa jao beta .


She was very warmly greeted.


Sakshi : Shaleen sana ko room dekha do aur uska saman bhi le lo.


Shaleen picked up her bags and moved it to the room.


Shaleen : Kaunse Pathar hai isme


Sana : are Hume saman lagta hai tum nahi samjhoge .


They hugged each other .


Sana : you always make him feel home shaa.


Shaleen : you too. so Hogaya kaam ?


Sana : ha bas completed .


Suddenly a help came to invite them for dinner .


Shaa mom : Sana bohot achche din par ghar ayi ho . Aaj jagrata hai .


Sana : oh really . Yeh toh bohot achcha aur interesting hoga but aunty mujhe kuch pata nahi hai .


Shaa mom: are beta just be with us and you are not compulsory to stay awake all night . Tum Jake so Jana tumhe kal shoot bhi hoga na beta.


Sana : Mera kal off hai. Mein aap sabke saath karungi .


During the entire function , Sana was with Sakshi helping her with each and every step . She was following every footsteps and guidance given to her . Sakshi was deliberately asking her to do important stuff.


Sakshi also observed shaleen stealing glances of Sana and Sana doing the same .


Shashank slowly going to shaleen : perfect lagti hai nahi humari family mein.


Shaleen in his thoughts : Bilkul perfect.


Then he realised and covered the topic saying he was taking about arrangements. Shashank gave a thumbs up to Sakshi .


During the Aarti time,


Sakshi : Shashank inko saath mein Aarti karvate hai . Mata Rani ne chaha toh agle Saal yeh bhi joda Bankar puja karenge.


Shashank : Bilkul . Waise aag Barabar lagi hai yahan .


Sakshi : yahan bhi same hai bas ab dhere se mumma papa ko bhi yahi dikhana hai . Aur Inko realise karvana hoga na.


Shashank : chote aaja.


Sakshi : Sana tum bhi aao .


also Sakshi deliberately paired up them together .



Present :


Shashank : hum tabhi samaj gai the . Par yeh chote ne baat hi avoid kardi .


Shaleen : isliye apne aarti pe Hume saath khada kiya ?


Shaa mom : aur chunri bhi sath Chadai thi ?


Sakshi : ha mumma . Meri wish Thi ke next year yeh dono saath mein puja Kare aur dekho wooh puri ho Rahi hai .


Sana : bhabhi Pehli baar barakiyan padakne wale ko chesen saaf saaf dikhai nahi di ?


Sha gave him a look .


Sana : are acp Arjun rawte ko sab kuch jata dikh jata hai .


Shaleen : tumhe bhi training mili jati ms Riya mukherjee par tum adhe mein hi bhaag gai .


Shashank : achcha chote ghar bohot achche se Sajaya hai .


Shaa mom : sab Sana ne kiya hai .


Shashank : good job Sana .


Sana : thank you bhaiya .


Sakshi : mumma Shagun kab karna hai ??


Shaa mom : sana tum batao kal subah kare ??


Sana : ha aunty kal thik hai.


Shaa mom : saeeda ?


Saeeda : are hum toh ready hai . Ap bolo Hume kya Lana hai ?


Shaa mom : apko bas sana ko Lana hai . Baki sab hum dekhenge .


Makbul : Chalo bhai ab sab final Hogaya toh kal milte hai . Chale sana .


Sana was in no mood to leave but she had to .


Shaleen looked at her bhabhi .


Sakshi : uncle hum raat ko coffee ke liye Sana ko leke jaye please.


Sana parents looked at eachother .


Makbul : thik hai leke jao .



At night for the coffee .


Everyone was relaxed now .


Sakshi : Sana aramse 2 shot marle dil ki dhadkan ki awaz yahan Tak aa Rahi hai .


Sana : apko kya batao . Aaj ka din was heaviest bhabhi . Esa kabhi bhi nahi socha tha .


Shaleen : are sachme bohot pareshan hogae the hum . Thoda normal hone ka time chahiye .


Shashank : are le lo time aur suno achche se dating karna phir shaadi karna .


Shaleen : hum toh soch rahe the shaadi kar le .


Sana: ha wooh honestly we want to settle down with each other.

Bas Thoda kaam align karke . We want to get married .


Shashank : waise yeh toh best hai . Warna wooh aunty’s boht pareshan karti hai. Kaun yeh hai beta ? Apki friend ?? Dur ki Cousin ?? Girlfriend?? Sakshi ko toh Mujhe dur jake milna padta tha .


Sakshi : oh yes . Yeh toh bohot evident hota hai . Jab tum jagrate pe ayi thi tab bhi chaar logo ne puch liya yeh shaleen ki dost hai ya girl friend ? Kab kar rahe hoon Rishta ? Ab wapas Jake achche se bataiyenge . Mumma toh dhindora Pitt pittke batayenge.


Shashank : humare time pe toh mumma Sakshi ko ese milati thi jaise miss universe ko mila rahi hai .


Sana : are bhabhi yeh sab jagah same hai . Isliye best thing shaadi hojay toh ghar bhi asani se milte hai aur ek baar bolo mera pati hai phir koi kuch nahi puchta .



Shaleen : n plus we want to explore life together . After what happened few days before I need to buck up on my work and get the house done . Sana shaadi Tak ghar Kara lunga .


Sana : hum kar lenge shaa.


Sakshi : aur batao confession kaise hua ?


Sana got little shy thinking about it .But still she spoke .


Sana : shaa ne mirror ke samne khada kar bola you are the one .


Shashank : waah chote kya baat hai .


Shaleen : are esa laga ke abhi nahi toh kabhi nahi . I couldn’t afford to lose her .


It was almost nearing midnight .


Sakshi : shaleen Sana ko ghar chodo kal phir se milna hai tumhe .


Shaleen : ha ok Chalo Sana .


After they reached at Sana place.


Sana : good night see you tomorrow. Aur zyada abs mat dikhana .


Shaleen: tu thodi kam hot lagna . Waise kal se shuru officially Meri banne ka first step .


Sana : righttt.


Shaleen : waise Tera wooh insta bio - Divasana ke neeche Sana makbul Malhotra Woow kya Lagage .


Sana : sirf Sana Malhotra bhi achcha lagega.


Shaleen : wooh Teri choice hai .Ek Teri identity hai


Sana : aur ek banne wali hai . Pata I m gonna get trolled for this . Teri hot abs ka fan base bohot bada hai .


Shaleen : nope jab mere bio pe ayega married to diva tab ladke hate notes bhejenge .


Sana : chal ab good night .


Shaleen : esa good night .


Sana : ha Sadak pe hai hum . Chal bye .


Shaleen reached his home and the preparations we’re going on for the next day .

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Posted: 1 years ago
#52

Very interesting update 😃

Just loved it 🤗

Well chalo class Kum he lagi Bhai or Bhabhi ke 😂 but what a beautiful surprise they got made it all worthy ❤️ as they knew she is just perfect 😍

Well I really appreciate the views of Shana that they are going to take proper time & get married after settling down & good that things are going to be bit better now 😔

I really loved how both the families are so close & also special jagrata FB was really cute 🥰. Finally now they are engaged & our hero seems to be bit desperate too 😂😂

Waiting for more

Thanks for the Tag 🏷️

Keep writing ✍️

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Awesome update

Love it

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I am glad you found it interesting and enjoyed reading the update

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Part 10


From morning , everyone was doing decorations in the house .


Shaa : mom itna Sara decorations ?


Bez : Bilkul yeh koi Chota function nahi hota. Chal lag ja decorations mein.


Shaleen :yaar samaj nahi aa raha kya pehnu ??


Shashank: are achcha shirt pant chalega na .


Sakshi : are kya shirt pant no not at all. .Ruko mein yeh jacket lai hoon , gusse mein Sahi rakha tha meine . Yeh lo yeh pehno.


Shaleen was finally ready . Sana was getting ready in her room .


Saeeda : Sana ready beta ?


Sana : yes hogaya.


Saeeda was so happy seeing Sana smiling and blushing .


Saeeda : I am very happy for you. Chalo someone is waiting for you.


Makbul , saeeda and sana arrived for the ceremony and as usual our diva looked so gorgeous.


She was welcomed with lots of love and blessings .


Sha mom : dono betho ek saath Chalo. Sakshi aao beta rasam karo.


Saeeda : Sakshi tum aaj bohot khush lag Rahi hoon.


Sakshi : ha aunty. Aaj toh mein bohot khush hoon. I can’t explain .


She put the tikka on both of them and put a nice red and golden chunri on sana head it had shaleen name written on the border . She gave him a nariyal and gave a gold coin. ( yeh shaadi specially customised hai )


Saeeda : yeh chunni bohot beautiful hai.


Shaa mom : dono ladko ki sath me banvayi thi . Yeh idea bhi Hamari Sakshi ka hi tha .


She was looking so beautiful. Shaleen was having his 32 degree Walt smile .




Family photos time.


Bez : Dekho toh in dono ko kya smile ayi hai . Suyash photo khich raha hai na ?


Suyash : ek dam perfect wali.


Suchit : meine video bhi liya hai .


After the rasam ,


Bez: aunty inke thode pics click Kare social media pe announce karne mein kaam ayenge . Aa jao Andar lighting set ki hai .


Shaa mom : are Bilkul . Aur tum dono ab se thode free ho . Kalse kafi dare hue rehte ho humne tumhe kale pani ki saza nahi sunai hai


Everyone laughed at it .


Saeeda : ab tum dono Hume decide karke batana ki shaadi kab karni hai .


Shana looked at each-other and decided to tell their parents .


Sana: hum Thoda kaam align karke shaadi karna chahte hai .


Shaleen : aur wooh ghar bhi thik karke .


Sha mom: thik hai jaisa tum dono Sahi Samjho . Hum khush hai.


Shana went inside for a shoot. They were relaxed now . Their friends too understood and give them some time alone .


Shaleen: aaj toh bohot hot lag Rahi hai .


Sana : tum bhi . Yeh jacket ki choice achchi hai


Shaleen : bhabhi lekar ayi. Waise Shagun Mubarak ho . Tum jab tak wapas aogi wooh ghar thik Kara lunga . Baki tum ake decide karna kaise karna hai sab . Aur wooh cheque Jo tumne Diya wooh transfer kar deta hu


Sana : apne hi ghar ke liye spent kiye the meine. Remember we are a team now.


Bez : tum dono ka huggy kisi hogaya toh hum aye.


Shaleen : nahi ruk Bahar . Wooh toh reh hi Gaya nahi fiancé


He gently kissed her forehead and they hugged each other in happiness . And smartly this was captured by the friends .


Shaleen : jaldi jake wapas aa ja . Can’t wait to get married to you


Sana : ha bas Thoda time aur


Bez : Abhi aye ya rehne de photo ?


Sana : guys don’t tease .


Sahil: Abhi toh haath mein aye hoon . Shaadi toh mein itna pareshan karunga toh shaleen bhi nahi bachayega .


Shaleen : photo nikal jaldi.

Aur Sana wooh joh bhi hashtag wagera karna hai decide .


Sahil : hashtag Shana ready . Sarein photos mein handle karunga tere . Sana ka social media she can manage. Wooh expert hai . Tera toh alag se dekhna padega.


Shaleen : mera bhi kar legi wooh .


Sana : no shaa sahil ko de do .mein shaadi ki rasamo ke beech phone mein zyada nahi rehna chahti .



15 days later , Sana is in Chennai for some work .


Shana tries to find time to talk eachother . They were on a video call


Sana: shaa tumhe toh naya show mila hai toh chutti ?


Shaleen : meine production ko Bol ke rakha hai chutti ke liye .


Sana : ha meine bhi . Mein badme break lungi . Hamara ghar accche se sajayungi. Par tumhara lead hai na toh kaise ?


Shaleen : karenge mission pe bhejenge ya death sequence. Tension na le .


Hearing this she gets a bit low .


Shaleen : oh real mein nahi marna hai meine .


Sana : dubara bola na toh wahi ake marungi .


Shaleen : aa Jana jaldi . Ma Bol Rahi Thi outfits choose karne hai . Mera bhi sab dekh lena tum .


Sana : ha meine aunty aur bhabhi ne designer se baat kar li hai . Roka, haldi, mehendi ,cocktail shaadi sabki outfits ki designs wagera shortlist kar rahe hai .


They chatted till they finally decided to call it good night .

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Posted: 1 years ago
#56

Wonderful update 😄 Pinku 🤗🤗

Just loved it 🥰

Finally our Shana gets engaged & now they are getting close to each other ... Process of knowing each other as partners for life

Family & friends are really happy & are teasing them to bits 😃😃 but it's really cute 🥰

Yaha marriage preparations bhi shuru ho gaya hai that's really good 😊 & hopefully sha ka Ghar jaldi theek ho jaye

Waiting for more

Thanks for the Tag 🏷️ ☺️

Keep writing ✍️

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Nice update

Love it

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