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Thank you my dear readers for reacting commenting on the story . A big update coming up . Hope you enjoy it


Part 7


Shaa mom : tu kal ghar pe hai ?


Shaleen : ha 12 baje ke baad toh ghar pe hi hoon kyun kya hua ??


Shaa mom : ese hi Meri Madad Kara dena .


It was Around 2 pm bell rang. Shaleen opened the door to Sana.


A big smile on his face .


Shaleen : tu yahan ??


Sana : ha wooh Rakesh bhaiya nahi hai aaj so I thought aunty ki help kar du kuch . Unhone kaha free ho toh aa jao . Toh aa gai


Shaa mom : bohot achcha kiya thank you beta.


She took Sana inside the kitchen . And talks in soft voice .


Sana : kya hua aunty ? Apne urgently Bulaya .


Shaa mom: aaj na meine ek family ko Bulaya hai shaleen ke rishte ke liye , yeh dekh ladki ki photo.


Sana took the photo with an expression of hurt .


( shaa ke liye ladki ki photo dekh Rahi hoon toh mujhe bura kyu lag raha hai ? Kahi bez Jo keh raha tha ya alah yeh kya ho raha hai .Kahin meine bohot dair toh nahi kar di )


Shaa mom shook Sana .


Shaa mom : pasand ayi bohot Achchi haina ? Shaleen ko seedhe batate toh wooh mana kar deta isliye . Tu mere support mein rehna .


Sana was shock , hurt , angry on herself for not letting shaleen know about her feelings .


Again the bell rang and there was a family with a beautiful girl named Ragini .

Shaleen was not expecting anyone but still he felt they might his parents friends .


Sana too came in the living area where everyone was greeting each other .


Shaa dad : yeh Sana hai shaleen ki dost.

Shaleen ao baitho hamare saath.


Shaleen: mein mujhe Thoda kaam hai papa mein milta hoon .


Shaa mom : beta kaam toh hota rahega . Tum Ragini ko ghar dikhao Abhi set up kiya hai .


Though shaleen was not interested he took her around . He now understood what his parents are up to. He was least interested so he decided to make it clear .


Ragini : I can’t believe this . I am such a huge fan of yours and now we will be getting married.


Shaleen : sorry marriage . Dekho i m not interested. Mein yeh shaadi nahi karna chahta . Infact I. I love someone else and I can’t marry you please understand. I respect whatever your feelings are but mein shaadi nahi karna chahta . Pl Bahar jakar apni family ko bata do . Put any blame on me I vl take it but I can’t marry you .


Here Sana was getting desperate seeing the situation. She thought to check on shaa n Ragini .


Ragini who was heartbroken here . Started crying.


Ragini: I thought I can marry a guy of my dreams but aap toh.


Shaleen : look I m sorry but I can’t.


Ragini : ok I understand. Ek fan hug milega please.


Shaleen hesitantly hugged her but uski futi kismat Sana came in the very moment this happened. And when she saw this it was like the last straw in the hay. Anger and hurt was evident on her face.


They broke the hug . Till they walked out Sana thought Shaa is saying yes.


Sana : Bahar Chalo bula rahe hai.


Shaleen : Chalo let’s tell everyone.


When they came out , Ragini was still crying.


Ragini mom : kya hua Ragini ?? Why are you crying beta .


Shaa was like : Abhi toh thik thi phir ro rahe hai.


Ragini : mom shaleen doesn’t want to get married to me . He doesn’t like me.


Ragini mom: what?? Yeh kya hai mrs Malhotra apne toh kaha tha apko Ragini pasand hai . Shaleen ko bhi isliye toh aaj hum yahan hai .


Shaa mom turned to him and says : kya hai yeh sab ,? Kyun mana kar raha hai ?? Hamari izzat ka sawal hai beta.


Shaleen : aur mere dil ka sawal hai ma . I can’t marry this girl or any other girl Møm please.


He goes to Ragini’s parents and seeks forgiveness.


Shaleen : uncle aunty I am very sorry . Mere parents ki Galti nahi hai . Meri hai . Meine unhe nahi bataya . Please forgive me for the hurt Ragini.


Ragini’s parents left the house angrily


Shaa dad : kya tha yeh sab ?? Ha ? Kaun hai wooh jiske liye tune Hume yeh din dikha ya . Kitna insulted feel hua unhe aur Hume. Koi aur hai toh Batata kyun nahi ?? Aur koi nahi hai toh kya problem hai Ragini se .


Shaleen : dad pl aap shan’t hojayeye .


Shaa mom turned to Sana : Sana tumhe pata hai iss barein mein . Tu toh isse achche se janti hai . Bol koi hai iski life mein ?


Sana was staring at shaleen. He was staring back .


Shaleen : ma she doesn’t know anything .please aap log shant hojayeye .


Sana I want to talk to you please Andar chal .


Sana didn’t move an inch as she was very hurt with today happenings.


Shaleen took a deep breadth . Sana please Andar chal bohot patiently aur respectfully Bol raha hoon pl chal .


Sana went in the room to talk with him understanding his anger .


Sana : kya hai ?? Abhi aur kya Batana hai mujhe ?


Shaleen : tu gussa kyun hai? Mujhe hona chahiye . Ek toh ma papa ese ladki dekha rahe hai upar se naraz hai aur tu bhi chilla rahe hai .


Sana : tune Ragini ko hug kiya . Dekha meine .


Shaleen : are shock ke baad fan moment bolke hug kiya wooh bhi I didn’t even touch her .


Suddenly dimag ki batti jali, He then understood she got jealous .


Shaleen : Tujhe kya itna taklif Hai lekin ?? Mein hug karu kiss karu tujhe kya ?


Sana started pushing him hug karna hai kiss karna hai . Tujhe toh mein batati hoon .


He tried to stop her hands from hitting him and just pulled in for a hug .


She was finally a bit calm. He hugged her tightly not a friendly one . After a while they parted , she was staring at him in anger .


Sana : kaun hai wooh jiske liye sabse lad raha hai .


Shaleen: Abhi bhi nahi samjhe.


He turned to the mirror in his room and hugged her behind,giving her kiss on her cheek .


She stood there understanding nothing .


Shaleen : tu hai wooh hamesha se . Tu hi Thi aur rahegi .


Sana was never expecting this to happen . She was shaken by the moment .


He turned her to him and pulled her chin to look at him .


Shaleen : I love you Sana .


Sana : toh bataya kyun nahi ?


Shaleen : tune bhi toh kabhi nahi bola. Mujhe laga mujh jaise ordinary ladke se tujhe pyaar nahi hoga .Tere jaisa successful bhi nahi ho. Tere Baki sab friends jaisa social nahi hu . Mere toh insta followers bhi nahi hai to match up with you .


Sana : accha esa hota toh tujhse dosti bhi nahi karte mein . Idiot. Why are you so judgemental about yourself ? Don’t you know why are different from others ?


Shaleen : ab I love you toh Bol .


Sana : nahi karti tujhse pyaar ja.


Saying this she pushed him again. He caught her hand and pulls her again


Shaleen : karti hai mein janta hoon karti hai . Aaj Teri Akhon mein wooh sab dikh Gaya. Pyar , hurt , jealousy , fear of losing me

Bol dena ab.


Sana denied at first but then said it


Sana : nahi karti . Teri akhen aaj kharab hai . Chasma nai pehna hai na isliye .


Shaleen :phir bhi tu hamesha saaf saaf dikhti hai .Bol na Sana please please


She kept staring at him for a minute and decided to tell him


Sana : I love you shaa . Tu hi tha hamesha se. Sabse ghulti milti hoon but jab tujhse milti hoon tab lagta hai I m home . Tu hamesha sunta hai Samajta hai Jaisa koi nahi Samajta.


Shaleen : toh Bol deti . Jaise hamesha bolti hai Haq se .


Sana : tujhe kho deti toh .


Shaleen : chal Bahar chalke ma aur papa ko batate hai. Dekh abhi pooch leta Shaadi karegi na mujhse ?


Sana : ha karungi par tujhe abhi karni hai ya badme ?


Shaleen : tujhse se karni utna pata hai. Kab wooh dekhenge .


Sana : mummy papa manège ?


Shaleen : mana lunga . Tu maan gai ab sabko mana lunga.


They came out and parents were still acting angry .


Shaa mom: dekh shaleen mein keh deti hoon tujhe .


Before she could complete. ,


Shaleen : mein aur sana pyaar karte hai ek dusree se . Shaadi karna chahte hai .


Shaleen dad got up in anger to slap him ( he was portraying this )


Sana got so scared and hid behind shaa .

His father hugged him and patted his back.


They both were surprised…


Shaa dad : yeh hue na baat sher putar wali


Shaleen : Apko problem nahi hai ?? Aap naraz nahi ho ?


Shaa mom : hum toh yahi chahte the . Par tum dono seedhe se mante nahi toh humne socha ungli tedi karte hai .


Shaleen : ma itna drama . Seedhe baat ki hoti.


Sha mom : sedhi baat . Tu batata Hume seedhe seedhe . Aaj Tak bola tune ? Kyun sana?? Bol pati tum ? Aaj rone jaise shakal thi ragini ki photo dekh ke . Par ek baar nahi bola aunty mujhe shaa se pyaar hai .


She went on to give a warm hug to Sana. Welcome to the family officially. Ab tumhare parents ko bula le. Unhe bhi pata nahi hoga


Sana looked at shaa . He held on to his hand to console her .


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Posted: 2 years ago
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Good parents brought these two on line

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Posted: 2 years ago
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Loved it dear Pinku 🤗

Awesome update 😃

Chalo Aunty ke drama ka asar to postive hua shana who were scared to even confess their love to themselves finally spat out their real feelings

But drama badiya tha & finally Aunty & friends ke mehnat safal Hui & they confessed their real feelings to each other

Waiting for more

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Thank you for the comment

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Thank you goldie for the comment . I am glad you are enjoying this .

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Amazing update

Love it

Continue soon

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Part 8


Sana parents were there in a while . Ofcourse this was all a part of the plan .


Saeeda : are kya hua ?? Ragini pasand aa gai meethai toh khilao .


Shaa mom : aap hi dekhlo .


Saeeda turned to see Shana together.


Makbul uncle got really angry seeing this and went to Sana and raised his hand on her . Before he could hit shaleen came in between.


Shaleen : sab Meri galti hai. Meine usko nahi Bola . Pl aap usko kuch mat kahiye .


Makbul uncle straightened his angry face and with a big smile hugged shaleen and Sana ,


Today was a day Shana will be hit with multiple big and small bombs.


Makbul : finally Chalo ab iski fikar Chuti.


Saeeda: ha Hume mehnat karni padi but result man chaha mila . Are ab meethai toh khilao .


Shaa mom : ha ek minute rakesh meethai Lana


Shaleen : wooh chutti pe hai mom.


Rakesh : kaun chutti pe hai bhaiya mummy yeh lijiye methai


Shaleen : tujhe bukhar tha na??


Sana : ha isliye toh mein ayi yahan kyunki aunty ko help Kara saku


Rakesh: are Mein ek dam Badhiya hoon . Bhaiya ab toh Sana didi ko bhabhi bolu na .


Shaleen hit him.tujhe toh badme dekhta hoon. Tu bhi mila hua tha isme.


Rakesh : mummy bachao


Again there was a bell .


Shaleen : aur Kaun kaun hai in sabme shamil ?


There entered bez, sahil, suyash .happily dancing ..,


Bez : hogaya sab finally .


Shaleen : kamine tune sara raita failaya.


Sahil : humne kuch nahi kiya . Aunty uncle sure karna chahte the humne bas Mohor lagai.


Bez : aur wooh Ragini aur uske parents ko paise bhi de diye .


Shaleen : paise kaise ??


Suyash : are wooh actors the . But Kasam se aunty uncle kya acting karte hon aap log . Ek kaam karo aap dono auditions de do .


Shaa dad : yeh sab achche se shoot kiya na .


Suyash : ha Bilkul . Humne sab shoot kiya ( slowly only to heard by Shana)confession bhi .


Shaleen gave a look to suyash .


Shaleen : ghar mein camera hai . ?


Bez : ha humne lagai .


Going little closer


Thoda sambhal ke romance karna . You know sab dekhta hai .


Sana congratulations.


Sana hugged bez and others .


Sana : akhir apne kar hi Diya.


Bez : tum seedhe na mani meine ese

manaya .


Chalo finally mission Shana milaap successfully accomplished. Luck and jr were sleeping inside . They woke up and ran to shaleen .


But when they saw Sana . They jumped to her.


Shaleen : dar badlu. Sana ati toh Mujhe bhi Bhul jata hai


Jr just went and hugged Sana more .


Sana : my babies .


Shaa mom : luck jr ko bhi samaj aa Gaya . Unki official mumma aa gai .


The boys showered her with lots of licks


Shaa dad : dekho ab tumhare court mein ball hai . Decide sab kuch kaise karna hai . Roka , Shaadi , kab kaise kuch you both have to decide .


Shaleen: papa jo bhi karenge will do it as per both the families traditions . Thoda time dijiye.


Everyone was definitely impressed with his suggestion.


Shaa mom : sana tumhe bhi opinion dena hai . Tumhari bhi choices are as important as us . Please jaise thi waise Raho hamare saath . Itna daro mat .


Sana : wooh itna sab hogaya hai toh absorb nai ho raha hai .


Saeeda : wooh toh hoga hi tum log Thoda aram se sochlo aur Hume batana .


Shaa mom : Sakshi ko phone kar shaleen use bhi toh yeh khush khabri doon . Waise ek baat batao unhe yeh baat pata hai ??


Shaleen : ha bhai aur bhabhi jante hai.


Shaa dad : toh humse kya dushmani thi jo chupaya .


Shaa mom : lagao phone unhe bhi thik karu Zara .


Video call


Shaa mom: sakshi kaise ho beta ?


Sakshi : bohot achchi mumma . Shaleen ka naya ghar Kaisa hai ?? Shaleen thik hai na ab ??


Shaa mom : are wooh toh bohot zyada thik hai . Aur tumhari ek aur wish puri hone wali .


Sakshi : achcha kaun si ??


Shaa mom: are tumhe Jhethani banne ki bohot ichcha Thi na wooh puri hone wali hai. Humne shaleen ke liye ladki final kar di hai . Zara Shashank ko bulao aur use bhi Bata do .


Sakshi who knew about Shana got tensed.


Sakshi : hum Mumbai aa rahe hai next flight se . Par mumma itni bhi kya jaldi thi . Shaleen ko set hone do na achche se .

Aur shaleen ko ladki pasand hai ? Usne ha kar di ??


Sha mom : use toh bohot zyada pasand hai . Ruko tumhe photo dikhati hoon


She passed on the phone to shaa dad and he showed Ragini pic


Shaa mom : bohot upset hai wooh Bilkul khush nahi hai .


Shaleen : bhabhi mere liye worried hai ma mat tang karo unhe.


Shaa mom : mujhe kyun nahi bataya usne. Ab thodi Saza toh Milegi. Waise dekha jay toh usi ki wajah se Meri tum dono ke rishte ki ichcha aur strong hue hai .


Shana again looked at each other .


Shaa dad : Sakshi Shashank achchi hai na photo .


Shashank and Sakshi were unhappy and it showed on their faces


Shaa mom : ao tum dono Mumbai batate hai sab . Aur Han wooh Shagun hai na joh wooh leti Ana.


Sakshi : thik hai . Chalo let’s start packing .


After the call ended .


Shaa mom : saeeda excitement mein pochna hi Bhul gai I hope tumhe problem nai hai . Mujhe bas sana ko Shagun dena hai .


Saeeda : are isme problem kyun ? Mein toh kehte hoon agar engagement karna hai toh bhi hum ready hai . Infact bachche ready ho toh shaadi bhi . Hume koi problem nahi hai


Shaleen : nahi please . Ek saath isse zyada nahi seh payenge hum .


All started laughing .



Bez : aunty ab hum chalte hai .

Shaa mom : kal aa Jana Shagun ke liye


Bez : Bilkul ab toh isse dulha Banake hi chodenge


He went to shaleen and said .


Bez : Thoda sambhalke romance karna .


Shaleen : sare cameras nikal ke leke ja . Dekh panga na le . Aur sun thodi baat hojai badme bahana mar ke Bahar jana hai Sana se thik se baat nahi hue hai . I need to talk to her


Bez : are ab toh Teri hai puri zindagi baat karna .


Shaleen : bakwas mar kar. Jaisa bola waise kar .


Bez : dekh dhamki tu dena nahi. Warna camera mein recording hai sabko dekha denge .


Shaleen : dekha de mujhe koi farak nahi padta .


Sahil : achcha ab dekho kaise Himmat aa gai hai .


Suyash : sana mil gai toh sab Himmat gai .


Sana needed a break too . To calm her heart down . Friends understood this .


Bez : aunty in dono ko Zara neche leke jaye. Thodi batein karni hai .


Shaa mom: le jao bhai tumhare dost hai


Shaleen : Chalo Sana . Sahil cameras hata abhi .


Sahil : chal thik hai.


Finally they went out and let a big sigh .


Shaleen couldn’t think of anything else but hugging Sana and calming them down.

She too needed this comfort after such a heavy day.


Sana:shaa is this a dream or we are for real .


Shaleen : we are for real Sana . Dekho . And anything you feel should be shared with me. Nothing changes between us We were and will be friends first always .


Sana : Shaa mujhe toh yeh hi yakin karne mein mushkil ho Rahi hai ke we confessed our love . Our parents are happy about it and now we will be life partners.


Shaleen : I know Thoda time do. Baki mein yakin dilata rahunga . You know


Saying this he slightly kissed her cheeks . She turned red at this.


Waise let’s go on a date soon. Confession dinner and kiss due hai .


Sana : uncle aunty ko Jane do phir karte hai . Aur mere back to back kaam hai and I m gng to Chennai after a week .


Shaleen : kab wapas ayegi ?


Sana : in total 20 din baad . Sun mujhe airport drop karne Ana .


Shaleen : done aur haa aj raat coffee pene jayenge . Bhaiya bhabhi bhi aa rahe hai .

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Awesome update

Love it

Cont soon

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Posted: 2 years ago
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Wonderful update Pinku 🤗

Just loved it 🤗

I really loved how everything was like a bomb on shana 😂😂 they were still dazed as it was bit too much for them to absorb 🙂

Well friends & family all were happy thou both were bit terrified with the reactions but still everything was on track & finally their alliance was fixed 😄

Here brother & sister in law of Shaa were also informed & tricked by their parents 😂 but good that things are sorted now

Luck & Junior are too cute 🥰 they love Sana more now

Waiting for more

Thanks for the Tag

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So cute glad that they are friends first ..it will help them in the long run

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