Shaleen sana story : Rise from the ashes part 10 page 8 - Page 3

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Awesome update

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Loved it dear Pinku 🤗

Awesome update 😃

Well they both are each other strength & it seems Sha has really taken up a bit too hard 😔 in all this but with such friends everything is going to be good 😊

Now things are going to be bit tough for him but I know he is a strong person and will come out well 💪

Hopefully they understand that that what they mean to each other ☺️❤️

Waiting for more

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Hey goldie thanks for the comment . Glad you like it . Feel toh karenge hum Karane baithe na

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Part4


Rakesh was ringing the bell and it disturbed their sleep . Shaleen couldn’t connect it first.


Sana : Shaa bell baja raha hai koi .


He quickly got up and opened the door.


Rakesh : kya bhaiya . Kabse bell baja raha hoon .


Shaleen : are Akh lag gai thi .


Rakesh entered with bag of fresh vegetables.


Rakesh : didi ne bola tha sabji lane ko ,


Sana : Rakesh bhaiya sab le Ayee?


Rakesh : didi sab aa Gaya . Mein le aya .


Shaleen : Rakesh paise??


Rakesh: bhaiya le lunga badme . Aap pagar mein dena .


Shaleen : tu hisab likh aur mujhe Bata dena .


Rakesh ( in his mind) : inko kya pata Inka hisab koi aur likh rahe hai . Ramji kya Jodi in dono ki .


Sana : Rakesh bhaiya aap break fast bana dijiye . Mein chalte hoon badme ati ho


Shaleen : kahan chalti hoon ?? Nasta karlo


Sana : brush bhi nahi hai . Mein ghar Jake fresh hoke ati hoon tab Tak saman bhi aa jayega . Phir set karte .


Rakesh : bhaiya anda bread ?


Sana : with veges . Rakesh bhaiya makes sure of that .


Rakesh : ji didi .


By the time Sana came back , all furniture had arrived and the carpenter was fixing up stuff .


It was lunch time and sana got her manager’s call .


Sana : ha Dubeyji boliye ,

Dubey : ma’am meine kaha tha na 3 din se zyada nahi hold kar paunga . Kal Akhri din hai Varna contract jayega


Sana looked around . She smiled when shaa smiled at her .


Sana: jata hai toh jay Meri zarorat yahan zyada hai . Mein Parso Tak nahi aa paungi that’s final .


By the time it was evening everyone gathered at shaa place to help with whatever they can .


Rakesh ,Sana and shaleen was doing the final cleaning .


Rakesh worked with shaleen for years now and somewhat understands his feelings too.


Rakesh : bhaiya aap na shaadi kar lo. Abhi bhabhi hoti toh sab achche se manage kar leti .


Shaleen : tujhe kya taklif hai mujhe nahi karni shaadi .


Rakesh : kabhi toh karoge na . Kisi yaad mein zindagi Bhar Kuwara rehna hai.


Shaleen threw a dirty cloth at him .


Sana : yeh kya bolke gaye ?? Shaa wat kisi ki yaad mein ?


Shaleen : are kuch nahi . Chalo yeh room hogaya .


Suchit : dusra hum bhi karte hai . Pehle vada pau. Rakesh aa jao jaldi thodi plates lekar .


Rakesh got plates and they all settled for vada pau .


Shaleen : Suchit Sana nahi khayegi yeh spicy levels uska nahi hai.


Suchit : tumhe kaise pata ??


Bez: are pata hoga hi na . Isi nahi toh kise pata hoga. Don’t worry humne ek less spicy sandwich laye hai for safety . Hume laga Shayad kisiko khana ho


Sana : thank you boys .


By the time it was 10pm the house finally looked like home .


Bez : aunty uncle ki flight kitne baje ki hai ?


Shaleen : 11 baje .


Sahil : unhe kuch pata hai ?


Shaleen : nahi shanti se kal baat karunga .

Chalo guys sab jao rest karo sab Thake ho . Sana you are going home today

Bez drop her home .


Bez : ha Bilkul .


In the car , bez : yeh kyu bola tu aaj ghar jayegi ?? Tu kal yahan thi ?


Sana : ha wooh baat karte karte akh lag gai . Toh yahi so gai.


Bez: sana tujhe bohot fikar rehti hai shaleen ki . Show chodne ke baad bhi you both are same . Caring , loving for eachother .


Sana stared at him.


Sana : esa kuch nahi hai you know he is a very close friend . That’s it . He supported me when I was alone suffering from things . Didn’t even bother about himself . Toh aaj meine kar Diya . Kya galat kiya .


Bez : you know Sana tum dono ek jaise ho . Feelings kuch aur kehte hai but Dosti ke naam ke Andar sab chupate hoon.


Sana: esa nahi hai.


Bez: kitne logo ke liye kiya hai esa tune . Sochke dekhna aur phir bhi jawab na mile toh call me .


Sana : aap kuch bhi soch rahe ho .


Bez : you know what even before you both want to believe on this . It’s love that you both have for each other . Unconditional love. Yaad rakhna Meri baat.


Sana home came and she waved good bye to him . But couldn’t forget his words .


Sana : kya sachme mein Shaa se pyaar … aur wooh mujhse ? nahi bez bhi kabhi kabhi zyada hi observe karta hai .


Luck and jr were sleeping when she reached .


Lata her house help .


Lata : didi aap bohot thak gai ho . Mein coffee lau ?


Sana : ha didi please le lau. Luck aur jr ne thik se khaya ?


Lata : ha didi . Mein Thoda ghumane bhi leke gai toh unko achcha laga.

Wooh hogaya shaleen bhaiya ka ghar thik ??


Sana : nahi Abhi toh sara saman ayega aur sab karna hai sab . Parso aunty uncle aa jay toh usko bhi achcha lagega.


Lata : apko bohot fikar rehti hai unke . Meine apko itni chinta karte kisi ki nahi dekha .


Sana : sabko esa kyu lagta hai . Bez , Rakesh bhaiya sab log ek jaisa bolre hoon .


Lata : toh hum sab sach Bol rahe hoon.


She looked surprisingly at her .


Lata : Kai baar hum apne dil ki baat Sunna nahi chahte . Apki coffee .


Sana sipped her coffee and remembered all past moments with shaleen from the beginning till now .


Here Rakesh also was indirectly telling shaalien the same thing .


Shaleen : tu ghar jata hai ya


Rakesh : ja raha hoon par Meri baat pe Dhyan dena . Sana didi Sana bhabhi.


Shaleen : tu aaj mar khayega


Shaleen too went down the memory lane and slept thinking of it .

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Posted: 1 years ago
#25

Loved it dear Pinku 🤗

Awesome update 😃

Well Sana is standing like a pillar to him in his critical time & everyone is really getting that their relationship is special

Their friends are making them think on the right track & hopefully they will pay heed to what their friends have said to them

Hmm 🤔🤔 even Sana decided to sideline her work too in this which is obvious hopefully everything goes well after Sha parents come

Waiting for more

Thanks for the Tag 🏷️

Keep writing ✍️

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Posted: 1 years ago
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Thank you for the comment . Age age dekho hota hai kya

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Awesome update

Love it

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They should pursue when both are emo ready

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Part 5


Next morning all the orders were delivered .


Everyone started setting up the stuff . Finally all furniture was assembled.


Sana : yeh wala table wahan rakho . Uncle ko chai ka cup rakhne ke liye chahiye hogi .


Aur rakesh bhaiya yaad se wooh pani ka jug room mein rakh dena .


Sana: shaa Chalo rooms thik kar le . Yeh tere room ki bed sheets n covers hai . Aur yeh soft pillow just the way you like it


Shaleen : thanks . Mera purana wala Delhi se Laya tha .


Sana: koi nahi change hogaya . Chal yeh sab tu set kar . Mein uncle aunty ka room thik karke ati hoon.


Rakesh : break lagaiye Pehle aap dono Thoda kha lijiye .


Sana : are mein do minute mein karti hoon . Adha toh ho bhi Gaya .


Shaalien : kha le na tu bhi . Le muh khol.


He started putting food in her mouth .. Rakesh called everyone to see this .


Rakesh : Dekho toh in dono ko . Aur bolte hai sirf achche dost hai . Bezhad bhaiya samjhao na inhe .


Bezhad : bohot koshish ki par yeh samjhe ya samjhaon ko kuch samaj nahi ata


Sahil : aur jiski bhasha samaj ati hai wooh khud kuch nahi bolti .


Rakesh : wooh khud bhi toh kaha samajti hai .


Sana: hogaya yeh toh. Finally . Are sara mujhe khila Diya tumne kya khaya .


Shaleen : meine bhi khaya .


Sana : rakesh bhaiya Baki sab hogaya na ?


Rakesh : ha sab kuch Hogaya .


Sana still took a look around .


Sana : shaa tumne bedsheet Dali?


Shaleen : ha


Sana : ese ? horrible you are . Ruko mein karte hoon . What has happened to your decent self .


Rakesh : dekha bhaiya isliye mein kehta hoon shaadi kar lijiye .


Shaleen : tune ek aur baar shaadi bola na toh Tera ghar tudva dunga . Peche hi pad Gaya hai .


Sana : unhe badme danto Pehle yeh kaam karo . Thik se karo.


Finally by the night the house was ready .



Next morning , he got ready to pick his parents up from the airport . He was leaving when Sana came with luck and jr.


Shaleen hugged his babies and they too showered him with licks.


Shaleen : luck jr ma papa ko leke ata hoon be good boys ok.


Shaleen picked up his parents and got them home .


Meanwhile Sana was instructing Rakesh .


Sana : Rakesh bhaiya aunty ki tabiyat ka you know please unke khane ka achchhe se khyal rakhna . Aur uncle ko sugar hai toh kitna bhi mange meetha mat dena .


Rakesh : ji didi . Yaad rakhunga .


Bell rang and luck and jr ran towards the door .


Sana: hello aunty uncle please ayeye .


Shaa. Mom : sana tum yahan what a pleasant surprise .? Kaise ho beta ??


She hugged her .


Shaa dad : kaise ho sana ?


Sana : mein Bilkul thik ho , aap dono kaise hai ? Flight mein koi problem nahi hue na?


Shaa mom : flight toh comfortable Thi .


Sana : aap log fresh hojayeye lunch bhi bas taiyar hi hai .


Shaa dad: beta ek cup chai ho jati toh .


Sana : uncle adha cup bina chini ke Milegi.


Shaa dad : yahan pe bhi . Wahan Sakshi (shaleen’s bhabhi ) pine nahi deti . Yahan tum . Thik hai le ao Adha cup .


They all freshened up and finally Shaa is hesitant to tell his parents about the house .


Shaa mom : beta yeh ghar Abhi badla hai tune ?


He was feeling hesitant to talk about it . Sana came and sat next to him . She held on to his hands


Sana: Shaa it’s ok bol do .


Shaleen : ma mere purana ghar mein 3 din Pehle hi agg lag thi .


Shaa dad: kya ?? Aag? Tu thik toh hai ?? Luck jr ?


Shaleen : sab thik hai . Mein shoot pe tha . Rakesh luck jr ghar mein the . Sana , bez, Suchit aur sahil ne sab handle kiya .

3 din se yahi hai sana . Luck jr ko bhi aag se Bahar layi hai wooh .


Shaa mom : sana kaise tumhara shukkriya karu ? Shaleen Luck jr teno ko sambhala tumne .


Sana : aunty kaise baat kar Rahi hai aap . Shaa mera dost hai uski help kardi toh kya hogaya .


Shaa dad : beta hum Teri madad Kare ?


Shaleen : sab sorted hai papa. Bas thode din baad wooh ghar thik Kara lunga .


Shaa mom : yeh bhi bohot pyaar ghar hai . Sab kitna achcha hai .


Rakesh : are mummy sab Sana didi ne kiya hai toh achcha hi hoga na . Unka taste toh Kamal ka hai . Choice toh 1 number.


Rakesh giving looks to shaalien and viceversa .


Rakesh : Are didi wooh machine mein thodi problem ho Rahi hai naya model hai na


Sana : mein dekhti hoon .


Sana went in and settled it . And was also getting the lunch table ready . It couldn’t skip his mom eyes too . After what she heard from shaleen about past 3 days she was very much impressed by her .


At the dinning table ,


Shaa mom : shaleen ab na tu shaadi kar le . Bohot akele reh liya ab tujhe bhi life partner chahiye .


Sana choked her food and started coughing . Shaleen immediately offered her water and patted her back .


Shaleen : are you ok ? Pani pe .


Sana : nahi thik ho


Shaleen : ma please aap shuru mat hojao


Rakesh : mein bhi yahi keh raha hu mummy . Abhi Socho bhabhi hoti toh kaisa khyal rakhti .


Sana got a little uncomfortable here .


Shaleen : Rakesh chup kar ja .


Shaa dad : tu usee kyu daant raha hai ? Wooh bechara Sahi keh raha hai. Tum layi hai biodata dekha do .


Shaleen : meine koi nahi dekhna please. Menu Baksh do .


Shaa mom: are Shashank ko dekh Sakshi ayi hai tab se itna aram hai use aur mujhe . Chinta hi nahi . Sakshi itna khyal rakhti hai .


Yeh dekh yeh wala bio data bohot beautiful hai yeh ladki .


Shaleen threw the paper on the side.

Sana got little uncomfortable with the topic and got up from the table.


Shaa mom : Sana Are tum ise kyu nahi samjhati ke shaadi kar le .


Sana : mei kya bolu .


Shaa dad : tumhare baat Manega yeh.


After lunch laundry was done and Sana took out to put it for drying .


Shaleen : mein kar dunga


Sana: Abhi kar dete hai kal tak dry ho jayengi . Rakesh bhaiya dusra kaam kar rahe hai.


They started putting clothes on the drying rack


Shaleen parents were happy seeing Shana working together .


Shaa. Mom : suniye aap kya kehte ho ?? Sana ke barein ..mein Hamari bahu ?


Shaa dad : mujhe toh bohot hi pasand hai . Par yeh dono ki ha honi chahiye . Uske parents bhi bohot achche log hai .


Shaa mom: mein na Behzaad ya sahil se pochti hoon kuch hoga toh unhe pata hoga.


Shaa dad : iss baar toh Iska pakka karake jayenge . Aapna Sana ki mummy se baat karo.


Shaa mom: kal karti hoon . Unhe kal milne bulati hoon .


Sana : aunty uncle mein chalti hoon .


Shaa mom: kaam hai beta ? Warna ruko na . Tum hoti ho toh family complete lagti hai . Tumhare presence se bohot achcha feel hota hai .


Sana gave a surprising look to shaleen .


Shaa: ma wooh bohot din se uska kaam disturb hua hai jao Sana you go I vl manage.


Sana again before leaving gave instructions to Rakesh .


Shaa mom : dekha kitna achche se sambhal ke gai sab .


Shaleen was busy on a phone call .


Shaleen : ma wooh ek urgent kaam mein Zara Bahar hoke ata hon . Koch chahiye toh rakesh hai.


Shaleen maa: ha tu ja.


The moment he left , shaa mom called rakesh.


Rakesh : are mummy yeh bhaiya kuch dekhte sochte nahi hai . Aap aye ho toh inko samjhake jao.


Sha mom : tu Bata kuch chal raha hai Inka ?


Rakesh: are kahan chal raha hai? Inko dono ke alava sabko khabar hai pata nahi inko accept hi nahi karna .


Kabhi koi bole toh baat Badal dete hai .


Sana didi aree mummy mein toh Taras Gaya bhabhi bolne ke liye itne dino se kiya wooh Kamal hai .

Wooh kamra yeh Ghar sab unhone sajaya. Bhaiya ko luck jr sabko Sambhala . Jab ghar mein aag lagi aur Fire brigade wale aye use Pehle hi wooh upar ayi luck jr aur mujhe sabko bachake nikala.


Mujhe toh lagta yeh aag lagna ishara hai ke ab in dono ko mann Lena chahiye ke wooh pyaar karte hai. Ek dusree ke liye bane hai.


Shaa mom : tu fikar na kar putar .Meine yeh karke Jana hai . Sedhe sedhe manega nahi Inka beta Jo thera. Eske toh kaan marodke manaungi .


Shaa dad : mujhe kya Bol rahe hoon . Aap uska dimag thikane pe lau .


Shaa mom : mein Behzaad se baat karti hoon .

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Posted: 1 years ago
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Loved it dear 😍

Awesome update 😃

I really loved how Sana took over the charge of Sha house & also fed him with all the right 👍 even he to fed her which was quite cute 🥰

So finally Sha ke family as gayi & Sana instructed Rakesh & welcome them ... I agree inke alawa subko pata hai 😅 that they love each other

Hmmm 🤔 great Aunty je ne responsibility le li hai ke ab wo dono ko accept karwa ke maangi waiting for that moment

Thanks for the Tag 🏷️

Keep writing ✍️

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