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Posted: 7 years ago
#41

Chapter 3

Dedicated to awesome writer ariyabestfan

3 weeks laterRiya was back to field work and as usual cases were being solved

Ayesha POV

I know Arjun Sir is feeling an attraction to Riya and i am very surprised that he is not fighting it. I know Riya has no such feelings. I see that Ri is slightly friendly with us now especially our commando Rishab with whom she shares a love for hindi Shayari. I don't want Saakshis heart to be broken

Morning 10AM Friday

Shree had a feeling since morning that something was wrong and just then the phone rang and Rathore announced that there was a case about death of a father in Shimla and the principal of a boarding school called in a favor to get us investigate this case

ETF team reaches Shimla

Arjun POV

I saw Riya rush out of the school once we saw the body. Me, Rishab and Riya had come to see the body and the rest of the team was at the reception. Both of us followed Riya on the steps. It was dark and I tried to hold on to her elbow I heard her scream and say don't touch me don't touch me. It freaked me out I saw Rishab reach out to her by sliding his gun to her. I heard him tell and she should calm down and count to 100 with him and point the gun at us if she is scared. I ran and called Shree

Shree POV

Shit was the first thing in my mind this was our alma mater Father Francis mattered a great deal to both Ri and me. I was worried on how Ri is going to cope. Years back when Ri parents were on a visit they had forgotten about her in the room and she was about to be molested by a clerk until I and Father Francis located her which is why sometimes she is still claustrophobic and has panic attacks. I heard Arjun calling me saying something had gone wrong with Riya

Riya POV

No No No not father Francis our games instructor. I noticed the room I realized that this room was the room of my childhood nightmares. I freaked

Rishab helped me calm down a bit until shree reached out to me. Shree familiar smell and voice helped me back to normal I could see Arjun was freaked. So, I told him a edited version that Father Francis who was murdered was someone I and Shree idolized when we grew up and his death threw me off. I know he did not believe me but I did not care

Rishab POV

I think there is some child hood trauma that Riya is battling. I was relieved that I was able to use my Masters in Psychology training to help Riya out

I heard Arjun ask Shree what happened and Shree replied with a famous quote from Henry Longfellow "Every man has his secrets which the world knows not, often times we called a man cold when he is only sad. This love of poetry and shayri was common between me shree and Riya. I was surprised to see the emotions in Arjuns eyes for Riya. I think he is attracted to her. Shree asked me and Arjun to keep it between us. I told him we need to report it if it happens again. I was reminded of a shyari

Chalo aaj phir dhikawa karte hai tum pucho kaise ho main kahun sab thek


Next Week the case resolves and serial murder appears

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Posted: 7 years ago
#42
Lovely update
Thanks for update
Waiting for next
Continue soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
#43
Y Riya close to rishabh not Arjun from Ayesha p.o.v Arjun likes Riya but Riya not how many problem Riya faced in pass hope soon Arjun bring out Riya from her past superb update dear eagerly waiting for nxt
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Posted: 7 years ago
#44
Awesome update
Love it
Cont soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
#45
aww..that's so sweet of u..u dedicate this chapter to me

love u for this..

oh god..poor Riya get panicked seeing the same room again..

oh..I love the shayri..

so true..Sach me ham Sab dikhawa hi karte he jab koi puchta he kaise ho..thought we said fine..but inside we know nothing is fine..

plz continue soon..

I waiting ke aur aise acchi lines padne ko milegi..
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Posted: 7 years ago
#46

Originally posted by: ariyabestfan

aww..that's so sweet of u..u dedicate this chapter to me

love u for this..

oh god..poor Riya get panicked seeing the same room again..

oh..I love the shayri..

so true..Sach me ham Sab dikhawa hi karte he jab koi puchta he kaise ho..thought we said fine..but inside we know nothing is fine..

plz continue soon..

I waiting ke aur aise acchi lines padne ko milegi..


i am not sure if u know i am one of u r regular readers :) thats y the dedication infact first ariya story i ever read on IF where they have a tom and jerry relationship was urs
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Posted: 7 years ago
#47
awesome update dear
loved it
ri had suffered a lot in past
and that past night mares still scare ri
and now this case had again opened the past wounds
wow arjun is getting attracted to ri
and ri ne rishab se dosti bhi karli
interesting
cont soonish
Bye take care
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Posted: 7 years ago
#48
Hey nice updts
Read all in a go
Wow Arjun is attracted to Riya
Oh so Riya know that person
Hope they find the culprit soon
Cont soon
Edited by Ariyatogether - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
#49
Awesome update
Read all parts
Loved it
Riya suffered alot and that nightmares stil scare her
Arjun is atrracted towards riya
Cont soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
#50
Awesome updates
loved them
Riya took a bullet for Sameer and Shree freaked out
Arjun is starting to develop feelings for Riya
She and Shree lost their idol
She is still battling the trauma she had faced
loved the bond between them

p.s. thank you so much for the dedication. I appreciate it a lot.

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