Ariya FF: Pyar ki Daastan Note page16 - Page 3

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Posted: 7 years ago
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awesome CS dear
cant wait to read story pls update soon
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awesome CS dear
cant wait to read story pls update soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
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please note i will NOT be able to send PMs , please book mark this page since i have very little time between managing my baby and new business

Chapter 1 Hostage situation

Dedication to Neha who is writing the Ariya FF second Chance since I am inspired by her style of writing

Mumbai a few hours ago about 7.00 AM

Riya POV

Today I have a feeling my life will change a meeting I have been informed old boss AS about my probable posting to ETF Mumbai and he wants to discuss the same. When I hear from the receptionist that ETF chief is in a meeting with AS I suspect that this might be my new team. Well I am happy since my flatmate and only friend in this world Shree works there.

When I am buzzed in both AS and The ETF chief Sameer seemed very upset and then I was appraised of the hostage situation.

Immediately I and Sameer moved to the ETF building. The moment he showed me to a desk I immediately started the blueprints of the building from the municipal records and I discover a possible entrance from the sewage tunnel

ETF Mumbai conference room

Sameer POV

I asked the team to gather and appraise them of the situation

Just then Riya walks in and the team is startled and angry for the interruption except Shree. Shree yells out her name

I explain that she is our research and intelligence liaison

Riya says that introductions can happen later

In minutes she explains the layout of the bank branch, the approach roads possible number of hostages, the entry exit points into the building

She also explains the fact that there is a possible entrance from the sewage but that could be possible for someone is a great swimmer and lean

Arjun POV

I was very angry when the new recruit walked in. But she seems good and professional

I told Sameer the best way was as Riya suggested to let Ayesha get in first and throw tear gas bomb shells in and then we get in and catch the robbers

Sameer POV

My ETF team at ABC Bandra Ayesha, Arjun and commandos manage to finish the mission with Riya guiding Ayesha step by step when going through the sewage tunnels

ETF conference room late evening once reports are filed

Sameer POV

When I introduced Riya to everyone she seemed so impersonal and cold though professional with everyone except shree

Saakshi the team gossip decided to ask shree if Riya was his girl. Liza seemed upset at that question. Riya got mad and said she did not like personal questions about her. She said anything that did not involve her professional competency was out of bounds.

Felt like I am seeing a female Arjun

Ayesha POV

I loved the professionalism in which she helped me specially in navigating the tunnel. I wanted to be friends with her but when we all had a coffee after filing the reports, Riya seemed to not want to even talk anything apart from post mortem of what happened

Rishab POV

Phir wahi Raat

Wahi dard, wahi khamoshi

Itna sannata hai

Ki kaan phatey jaate hain unknown shaayar

I have a feeling this girl will bring lots of changes in our life.


Edited by AnjuRish - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
#24
Note :
Can someone help me send PMs please then it is possible that all will know the update is up?

please feel free to scrap or PM me


The next few chapters snapshot
Chapter 2
Arjun is in trouble with top officials due to his anger and Riyas lecture to him
Chapter 3
Serial murder and Rape




Edited by AnjuRish - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Wow... Masst dhasu update dear...
Ye to Sach me riya lady arjun lg rhi h but acha hua Jo first shikar sakshi bani nd I think ab (in future) sakshi Ariya k bich jaane se pahle hazaar baar sochegi... Hehehehe
Continue soon...
Nd it's ok pm na de paao to but take care of ur baby first...
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Nice start I like Riya attitude fab update dear eagerly waiting for nxt
Edited by ruhi1985sheetal - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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awsome update

love it..

Riya is female version of Arjun ..

plz continue soon

thanks for pm

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Awesome update
Loved it
Riya arjun ki female version
Pehle baarme hi sakshi ko daat pad gayi riya se
Ayesha wants to be friend of riya but riya is only interested in her duty
Cont soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Note
i have to go to trichy for a family function tomorrow. If possible i will update before i leave else the update will be delayed till monday evening till i come back
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Wow superb amazing fabulous update
Riya female version hai Arjun ki
Thanks for update
Continue soon

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