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Chapter 34 A


Next morning..

After coming back from his jogging he decides to talk to Neha.. he asks Ramu kaka about her.. he tells that she's still asleep..

Jun - [in mind] koi baat nahi.. baad me baat karunga..

he left for ETF after having his breakfast..

~

ETF conference room..


The team was there..except Neha.. they didn't have a case today so all were doing paperworks.. n chatting too.. SamJun were in their respective cabins..

Chotu - ye paper work kisne banaya hoga? kitna boring kaam he ye..

Shree - wo to he mere Bheem.. par kya kare.. karna padega..nahi to Damn it aur SYS hamari band baja denge..

Liza - SYS se yaad aaya.. aaj Sys ki CC aayi nahi.. kyu?

Aisha - haan.. Karan, aaj tumhari Jungli billi aayi kyu nahi?

Chotu - kahi kisika shikaar karne to nahi chali gayi na?

Riya - waise ek baat to maan-ni padegi.. kal jis tarah se Neha ne Sikander ko clean bold kiya.. it was fascinating.. hai na Karan?

Karan - haan.. [in mind] par meri Jungli billi he kahan.. ab tak aayi kyu nahi? itni der to use kabhi nahi hoti..I'm I missing her? [heart] yupp dear.. you are..

Riya - me sab ke liye coffee banakar laati hu..

Aisha - come I'll help you

~

In afternoon, after lunch Sam was checking his mail.. he came across a mail sent by Neha stating that she is on a leave of 15 days.

Sam - [thinking] 15 din ki chutti? lekin kyu? [he called her but number was switched off..]

just then, Jun walked in with some files

Jun - kya hua Rathod? kuch pareshan lag rahe ho..

Sam - haa pareshani ki baat to he.. ye mail dekho Arjun..

he read the mail.. n immediately called Neha.. "number does not exist" message repeated everytime.. he then called at Rawte mansion when Ramu Kaka told that she had already left early in the morning

Jun - kya? kaka..aapne subah mujhe kaha tha ki wo so rahi he.. phir?

Ramu Kaka - beta wo kal usne kaha tha ki agar tum ya koi bhi puche to yahi batau ki wo so rahi he..isliye nahi bataya.. aur wo subah 4 baje hi nikali thi jaane ke liye..

Jun - aise kaise jaa sakti he..kisiko bina bataye??aur wo gayi kahan??

Ramu Kaka - mujhe nahi pata beta..meine bahot pucha lekin kuch nahi bataya..

Jun - ok [he cuts the call..] kuch to chut raha he Rathod..

Sam - bahot kuch Juno..

Jun - ye files meine padh li he.. tum sign kar dena.. [he keeps the files on table n goes to his cabin]

~

Jun's cabin

Jun is sitting in his chair n thinking.. yesternight's converation with Neha was going on in his mind..her words were ringing, "mujhe nahi rehna yahan.. dum ghut-ta he mera iss ghar me.. jaa rahi hu me yahan se.."

Jun - kahan..kahan jaa sakti he.. kahin wapas London to nahi chali gayi? ho sakta he..

[his thoughts were disturbed by knock on the door..he saw shree n asked him to come in]

Shree - sir wo ek naya case aaya he.. Rathod sir ne sabko conference room me bulaya he.

Jun - chalo..

they get busy in solving the case

~

London..

11 a.m.

Neha came out of the airport.. the car was already waiting for her.. she got in it n asked the driver to drive home.. she took out her cell n made a call to Jun..

Neha - me London pahuch gayi hu.. meri chinta mat karna.. agle 15 din me yahin hu.. don't call n disturb me.. ok?

Jun - hmm.. [cuts the call]

she reached home.. as soon as she entered the house she spoke up loudly..

Neha - I'm back.. finally I'm back at my home.. my home sweet home.. ahh.. I missed this place so much.. but now I'm back.. woohoo..

Shalini came down listening the loud voice.. amazed n amused..

shalini - are beta.. dheere.. ye kya he.. aate hi pura ghar sar pe utha liya.. hmm?

Neha - aai..

Neha touched her feet n then hugged her tightly..Shalini hugged her back n pecked her forehead lovingly n blessed her

Neha - to aur kya karu aai.. koi aaya hi nahi mera swagat karne.. to apne aane ki khabar khud hi de di..

Shalini - tum nahi sudhrogi na?

Neha - nahi.. waise aai.. aap bikul nahi badli.. jaisi thi waisi hi he.. hot n happening [winked]

Shalini - [smacked her hand] chal hat badmaash.. kuch bhi bolti he..sharam nahi aati [Neha shood her head in no.. she glared] waise tum kitni patli ho gayi ho dekho to.. bilkool sooke ke kaata ho gayi ho..

Neha - wo kya he na aai, Mumbai me aapke haath ka bana khana thodi na milta tha.. I missed that so so much..

Shalini - bas bas..jyada makhan mat lagao.. pehle jaake fresh ho jao.. tab tak me tumhare liye chai banati hu

Neha - ho.. Aaishree!

some time later..

Neha came down after freshing up.. n went to the kitchen..her tea was ready

Neha - aai, abhi to Baba [Suryakant] ki dawai ka waqt he na..

Shalini - haan.. me unhe dawai dene hi jaa rahi thi..

Neha - aap rehne dijiye.. me jaati hu

Shalini - thik he.. waise aaj khane me kya khaogi?

Neha - jo bhi aap banaye.. me meri chai aur baba ki dawai dono le jaa rahi hu

Shalini - accha..

~

in Suryakant's room..

Suryakant was reading some files while resting on his bed.. from last year his health was not in much good condition so he was resting.. but he could not keep himself away from work so was working from home now.. he heard the knock on the door n looked up from the file.. saw Neha

Suryakant - aao sonu..

Neha -[she first touched his feet..he smiled n blessed her] baba.. ye kya.. aap files lekar baithe he.. aapko doctor ne aaram karne ke liye kaha he na

Suryakant - wahi to kar raha hu..

Neha - [took the files n put them on the table] wo sab baad me.. pehle ye dawai lijiye..

Suryakant - [takes the medicines] tum kab aayi?

Neha - bas kuch aadhe ghante pehle hi.. [sipping her tea] ab aapki tabiyat kaisi he?

Suryakant - tum aa gayi ho na.. to ab meri tabiyat bilkool thik he.. tum batao.. Mumbai me sab thik?

Neha - haan.. sab thik he..

Suryakant - pichli baar ki tarah iss baar bhi bina bataye to nahi jaogi na?

Neha - I'm sorry baba.. par agar aapko bata deti to aap jaane nahi dete..

Suryakant - iska matlab tumhe bhi mujhpar bharosa nahi he..

Neha - aisi baat nahi he baba.. bharosa he lekin uss waqt me nahi bata payi..

Suryakant -hmm.. ab un baato ko karne ka koi faayda nahi he.. waise suna meine.. tum aur tumhari team ne bahot bade Drug Lord ko maara aur Mumbai me blast hone se bhi roke.. sunkar accha laga.. I'm really proud of you beta

Neha - [her eyes moistened.. she hugged Suryakant] only me baba? [she managed to voice out]

Suryakant - tumhare bhai [Arjun] ki bhi taarif karu kya?

Neha - kyu nahi? unka bhi to haq he na..

Suryakant - wo aakar mujhse maafi maange to me use maaf kar dunga..

Neha - aap jante he.. wo aisa nahi karenge.. bahot ziddi he na..

Suryakant - me bhi uska baba hu.. usse bhi ziddi hu..

they continued their talks..

~

at lunch..

Neha was helping Shalini in arranging the dining table when she saw Sunanda coming.. Dipak n Sunanda came home as they had a meeting nearby n thought to take lunch at home..

Neha - Maa..

Neha almost ran to her n touched her feet n then hugged her..

Sunanda - kaisi ho beta?

Neha - bikool thik.. mujhe kya hona he?

Sunanda - kuch nahi.. how was your journey?

Neha - quite boring..

Sunanda - boring? kyu?

Neha - ek jagah par 10 ghante baithe rehna.. it's not easy..

Dipak walked in..

Dipak - hey princess! how are you my child?

Neha - papa! [touched his feet]

Dipak - [he said blessing her] meri princess hamesha khush rahe.. use duniya ki saari khushiya dene wala jaldi mile.. aur..

Neha - itna aashirwaad kaafi he.. aur mujhe lagta he ki aap mujhe apne paas jyada din rakhna nahi chahte..isliye aisa keh rahe he

Dipak - aisa nahi he beta.. mera bass chale to me tumhe kabhi apne aap se dur jaane hi na du.. [said hugging her]

Suryakant - sonu.. beti tumhare liye na hume ek ghar-jamai hi dhundna padega..

Neha - baba??!!

Suryakant - sahi kaha na Dipak?

Dipak - haan bhau.. ek dum sahi kaha aapne..

Sunanda - ji nahi.. me meri beti ko sasural hi bhejungi.. hai na tai?

Shalini - aur nahi to kya? hum dono bhi to apne baba ka ghar choDipakar aapke saath aaye the..

Neha - [screamed] mujhe bhook lagi he!! khana milega ya baato se hi pet bharna padega?

Shalini - chaliye.. pehle sab khana khate he..shaadi ke laddo baad me khayenge..

Neha - [shook her head in disbelief..muttered] inka kuch nahi ho sakta..

at the lunch there were many things talked about.. everything except marriage was discussed

~

evening..

5 p.m.

Neha went to SAC Head-Office to report her case n meet her boss..Officer Turnbull

Turnbull - good evening Mona

Neha - good evening officer Turnbull

Turnbull - I've called you here as the case of Alexander [Sikander] is completed.. I want you to prepae a nice detailed report of that case n show it to me within 10 days..

Neha - 10 days?? [muttering] mote saand.. 10 mahine ka case tha 10 din me detailed report kaise banau??

Turnbull - any problem?

Neha - y..no.. officer.. but can I get 15 days to complete the report?

Turnbull - show me on the 13th day

Neha - [muttering] the unlucky day.. huh.. [loudly] ok fine I'd try to complete it

Turnbull - no.. not try.. I want the report on my table on the 13 day from today..at 6 p.m. sharp..

Neha - sure Officer.. I'll do it

Turnbull - that's the spirit.. good.. now get to work.. fast.. see you soon!

Neha - surely!

she left..

~

Neha - thinking - uff.. ye mota saand.. ise to me.. mann karta he ki spain ki bull fighting me ise bhej du aur un bulls se ise pitwau.. [dreaming] ahh.. that would be so nice!! Turnbull has been turned by the bull.. hehe!!

she came back home n got to work sitting in her room..

at night after dinner, Sunanda came to her room with a file..

Neha - maa.. ye kya he?

Sunanda - isme kuch laDipako ki profiles he..

Neha - kisliye??

Sunanda - tumhari shaadi ke liye..

Neha's heart was breaking into millions of little pieces but she managed to give a fake smile n said

Neha - maa.. aap ye file yahin rakh dijiye.. me baad me dekhti hu

Sunanda - thik he.. [she went]

little later Dipak came to her room..

Dipak - princess.. [kept his hand on her head] abhi tak kaam kar rahi ho? sona nahi he kya?

Neha - [she looked at watch.. 10 pm] itni jaldi mujhe nind nahi aati papa.. baithiye na.. aapse bahot sari baate karni he

Dipak - haan.. mujhe bhi tumhe bahot kuch batana he.. lekin pehle tum batao..

they talked about some random things.. then..

Neha - papa.. me aapko kuch dikhana chahti hu.. [she shows him pic of Karan]

Dipak - Karan? hamare business partner Damsingh Rathod ka beta? wahi he na?

Neha - hmm.. [she is thinking how she'd tell him]

Dipak - [after a silence of few minutes he spoke] tum isse pyaar karti ho kya?

Neha - [quite startled at the sudden question, then nods positively]haan papa.. aapko pata he me kab se soch rahi thi ki aapse kaise kahu..

Dipak - kya wo bhi tumse pyaar karta he?

Neha - haan.. actually he was the one who proposed me..

Dipak - oh.. accha he beta.. waise batao to.. kaise propose kiya tha usne tumhe?

Neha blushed slightly n looked away n then finally found her voice n told everything to her dad.. her dad kept listening like a good listener n waited until she finished..

Dipak - me iske baare me sabse baat karunga

Neha - abhi nahi..

Dipak - kyu?

Neha - papa.. abhi agar aap ye bata denge to meri chat mangni pat byaah ho jayega.. n I'm not ready for marriage still.. pehle na aap bhaiya aur dada ki shaadi karwaiye.. uske baad meri baari.. n promise me.. jab tak dada ki shadi nahi hoti aap ye baat kisko nahi batayenge.. maa ko bhi nahi

Dipak - lekin..

Neha - dad please.. promise me

Dipak - ok princess.. promise.. me kisiko nahi bataunga.. accha ab me some jaata hu.. kal subah office bhi to jaana he.. tum bhi so jao.. thak gayi hogi na..

Neha - bas 5 minit aur pa.. mujhe neend nahi aa rahi..

Dipak - kya??

Neha - aap mujhe wo gaana sunaiye na.. jo hamesha sunate the.. phir mujhe acchi si neend aayegi..

Dipak - thik he..

Neha kept her head in Dipak's lap.. he started singing n caressing her hair..

Dipak - [singing]Surmayee Ankhiyon Main

Nanha Munna Ek Sapana De Jaa Re

Nindiya Ke Udate Paakhi Re

Ankhiyon Mein Aaja Saathi Re


Raa Rii Raa Rum O Raaree Rum


Raat Ke Rath Par Jaane Vaale

Neend Ka Ras Barsaane Vaale

Itana Kar De Ki Meri Aankhen Bhar De

Ankhon Mein Basthaa Rahe, Sapana Ye Hasthaa Rahe


Surmayee Ankhiyon Main

Nanha Munna Ek Sapana De Jaa Re

Nindiya Ke Udate Paakhi Re

Ankhiyon Mein Aaja Saathi Re

Dipak looked at Neha as he finished.. his princess had gone to sleep.. he kissed her forehead slightly, put her head on the pillow carefully, pulled the comforter n left..

~

15 days later..

Neha was back in Mumbai..

She went to the Commissioner's office with a letter..

~

Part B scroll down! 😃


Edited by Godly_Affection - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Part B


Commissioner's office

Neha gives a letter to DIG Coelho.. he reads it n is shocked.. he calls SamJun to his office.. they come within 20 minits.. now SamJun are in his cabin.. Coelho shows them the letter.. they too are shocked to know it

Jun - Sir, mujhe iss baare me kuch nahi pata..

Coelho - I think we should ask it to Neha..

he calls Neha n askes her to come in. she comes..

Coelho - what is this Neha? you want to resign from ETF? but why?? what is the reason?

Neha - I do have a reason Sir.. what is a team? a team is not a group of people who work with each-other.. but a team is a group of people who trust each other [stressing on "trust"] now when the commanders of the team don't trust me.. how can I work with them?

Jun - who said we don't trust you? [anger was quite evident]

Neha - oh really? do you then? [she looked straight into his eyes]

Jun tried but could not find anything to speak.. so remained silent

Sam - lekin iska matlab ye to nahi ki tum ETF chhorr do..

Neha - [to Coelho] Sir, I don't want to work with this team.. that's it.. n I so am resigning.. you've already got my resignation letter. I don't think there's any point to discuss further

Coelho - ok.. fine.. [to SamJun] you both may leave

they nodded, said Jai Hind, saluted n left..

Coelho - baitho Neha.. [she sat] DCP Aryan Rawte ke saath kaam karna chahogi? He has formed a new team.. Elite Special Squad..[similar team like ETF] he is the chief, with 3 specially trained cops which he himself has chosen for the field job.. I know you are the best in your job.. so I want you to join this team.. as their second-in-command.. I've seen you working under Aryan during Sikander's case.. you both have done a great work together.. I want this duo to be working together as a team once again..

Neha - [was extremely happy to hear that she could work with her Bhau] yes Sir, I'm ready.

Coelho - ok then.. wait till your appointment letter is ready.. I'll sign it n then you can join this team.

after 10 minits.. the appointment letter was signed by Coelho.

Coelho - all the best!

Neha - thank you sir!

she said Jai Hind, saluted n left..

~

She first went to ETF office to collect her things n to bid goodbye to her other team mates n friends.. as soon as she reached ETF conference room.. all were extremely happy to see her back.. they all bombarded her with loads of questions.. she smiled.. SamJun were not there..

Neha - bas! ek ek jawab deti hu.. Me pichle 15 din London me thi.. ek zaruri kaam tha isliye urgent jaana pada tha.. sorry ki kisiko bataya nahi.. waqt hi nahi mila.. waise aap sab ko ek news deni he.. good ya bad ye aap log khud hi decide kar lena.. mere hisab se to sab ke liye good news hi honi chahiye.. aap sab ko aaj ke baad mujhe jhelna nahi padega.. seriously!

Riya - tum kehna kya chahti ho Neha?

Neha - I've resigned from ETF..

[all the gleaming happy faces suddenly became dark n gloomy]

Neha - hey.. sirf ETF chhorr rahi hu..ye duniya nahi.. me yahi hu.. Mumbai me.. aur aap log jab chahe mujhse mil sakte he.. me Elite Special Squad join kar rahi hu.. infact I've already joined.. bas yahan aap sab se milne aur kuch saaman lene aayi thi.. ab aise mat dekho.. meri bidaai nahi ho rahi.. usme abhi kaafi waqt he [winks at Karan] hey everyone.. I want to see the smile.. ab ETF officers ki smile dhundne ke liye kise bulaun? Damn it ko ya phir SYS ko?? haan?? [still no one smiled.. so she decided to make them smile.. she spoke in a tone similar to Sam's] Damn it! team.. ye bhi koi tareeka hota he apni team mate ko good bye kehne ka? you don't behave like ETF officers.. aisa lagta he jaise me civilians se baat kar raha hu.. Damn it!

aisha - stop it Neha.. ab bas bhi karo..

Liza - haan yaar.. rulaogi kya?

Neha - bilkool nahi.. you know I hate tears.. Pushpa! [in Rajesh Khanna's style]

Chotu - ye Pushpa koun he?

Neha - me to nahi hu! aap me se koi he kya? [all noded in negative] ab khud hi pata kar lo ye Pushpa koun he.. waise yaar ab to haso.. mera joke itna bhi bura nahi tha [pout]

Riya - [hugs her] we will miss you Neha..

Neha - I'll also miss you guys..

[Aisha n liza joined them in group hug n Shree Chotu n Karan too.. n after a while they parted]

chotu - tum hume bhoologi to nahi na?

Neha - c'mon guys.. I'm not going to work with you.. but we'll still be friends.. right?

shree - right!

Neha - accha.. me mera saaman collect kar leti hu.. I'm getting late.. [she turned to move out but stopped] aaj raat 8:30 baje sab Tulip Grand Hotel [imaginary name] me aa jana.. meri taraf se dinner he aaj sab ke liye..so see you in the evening! saabko aana he.. koi bahane nahi..

all nodded!

she went to her desk..followed by Karan

Karan - ye sab kya he billi? tum resign kar rahi ho..but why?

Neha - Rats.. raat ko jab hum milenge to ye baat aaram se discuss karenge.. yahan nahi..

Karan - ok.. by the way did you miss me?

Neha was packing her stuff.. looked at him for a moment n then looked down..trying not to blush.. n noded slightly.. resuming the packing..after finishing it..she went to Sam's cabin.. Jun was sitting there.. they were discussing something..

Jun - ab kyu aayi ho yahan?

Neha - aaj raat 8:30 baje..Tulip Grand hotel.. aa jana.. agar aane chahe to.. waise me meri team ko bye kehne aayi thi.. socha aap se bhi mil leti hu

Sam - ek aur baar soch lo.. jo tum kar rahi ho wo..

Neha - [cutting in mid] meine jo faisla kiya he wo bahot hi soch Samajhkar kiya he.. me chati hu.. mujhe late ho raha he..

she went out n saw Karan alone in a corner..

Neha - [whispered into his ear] yes.. I did miss you.. a lot..

then walked away.. he kept looking the her retreating form.. she did turn back before going out for the last time n gave her trademark smile.. he too smiled n she left..

she came down to the parking lot.. n gave a last look to the ETF office n then zoomed out in her car towards the Elite Special Squad head office..

~

Elite Special Squad head office..

Neha reached there in 20 minutes.. she saw the building.. it was a nice tall one with 15 floors.. covered with glass on the front side.. she parked her car n walked in.. the glass doors opened automatically.. they had shadow-sensors.. as she walked in, the receptionist asked her who she wants to meet..

Neha - DCP Aryan.. I'm a new officer here..

Receptionist - the first cabin in right on the second floor Ma'am..thank you.

Neha nodded n moved towards the stairs.. the whole office was full of latest technology.. high security.. she finally reached 2nd floor.. n went to Aryan's cabin.. Aryan had already got a call from DIG about Neha's joining his team..

Neha - Sir.. may I come in?

Aryan - yes.. you may! [smiled] welcome to the team!

Neha - thank you Sir..

Aryan - Neha.. stop that sir! ye sir sir sunke mera sar dard karta he.. I feel as if I'm a teacher with students all around me!

Neha - [chuckled] to me kya kahu bhau? Chief??

Aryan - ok.. that's better.. n tell the rest of the team too!

Neha - ok chief!

Aryan - chalo me tumhe team ke baaki members se milwata hu.. [he rings up n aska the team to come in conference room]

The conference room..

as Aryan n Neha reached there, the rest of the team was already present.. Neha looked at the room.. it was spacious room.. with a touch-screen monitor covering almost half of a wall in front, a TV on another wall, a large softboard on the third one..

Aryan - he is Abhinav Singh, Ammunitions specialist

Neha - hello Abhinav!

Abhi - Hello!

Aryan - he is Rehan Aggarwal, the Tech expert!

Neha - Hello Rehan

Rehan - Hi!

Aryan - she is..

Neha - Manushi Singhania..

Manushi - Forensic expert!

Aryan - ok.. team.. She is Neha Rawte.. our team's second-in-command! [all welcomed her with smile] Neha tum in saab se baat karo.. me meri cabin me hu.. I've some important work

Neha - ok!

Aryan left..

Manushi immediately went to Neha n hugged her tightly.. but instead of hugging her back, Neha slightly pushed her away..

Neha - Ms. Singhania.. better behave like an officer of ESS!

Manushi - Ms. Singhania?? Neha why are you addressing me like this? I'm Manushi.. your Maan.. your best friend dearie..

Neha - no.. you are no longer my Best friend.. I lost her 5 years ago.. you are only my team mate.. that's it.. nothing else..

Manushi - [hurt] that's it? nothing else??

Neha - [coldly] yes..

Manushi left the room.. Abhinav n Rehan stood there.. confused.. Neha looked at them n guessed their confusion

Neha - Abhinav n Rehan.. right? [both noded] dekho.. abhi jo kuch bhi hua.. use bhul jao.. wo hum dono ke bich ki baat he.. hum manage kar lenge.. tum logo ko chinta karne ki koi zarurat nahi he..

Abhinav - lekin tumne use aisa kyu kaha.. aur..

Neha - Abhinav.. that's something personal.. n I believe in keeping personal n professional life separate.. better keep that in mind.. [smiles]

Abhinav - [smiles back] ok ma'am..

Neha - please.. don't call me Ma'am.. I'm Neha.. you can call me by my name.. I don't mind

Abhinav - ok.. Neha!

Neha - that's better! give me the case reports of the recently solved cases.. I'll have a look on them.. any case going on now?

Abhinav - I'll send the reports.. n today we don't have any case yet..

Neha - oh.. so you all were kinda relaxing right?

Rehan - no.. completing the paperworks..

Neha - ahh.. great.. good then.. continue your work.. I'll take a look around the office till you complete the reports..

Rehan - If you don't mind, shall I show you the office n explain the latest technologies that we have around?

Neha - surely! Itd be really nice of you.. [she walks ahead but stops when she hears Abhinav speaking]

Abhinav - [whispering to Rehan] flirt karne ka koi mouka nahi chodoge na?

Rehan - [smiles] nopes!

Neha shook her head in disbelief n left. soon accompanied by Rehan..

they walked around the second floor.. he showed her cabin.. a nice large cabin with a table n 3 chairs in the corner, a couch, n one wall completely occupied by cupboards.. a large window at one side giving complete view of the city.. her cabin was exactly in front of Aryan's cabin..

then they went to the third floor.. it was the Technical department there.. on the fourth floor was the Forensic department..

~

evening

6 p.m.

ESS conference room..

Neha, Abhinav, Rehan n Manushi were sitting n chatting.. the paperwork was completed n they had some free time..

Neha - now this is so boring.. to sit here idly.. makes no sense!

Aryan - so according to you doing what makes sense Ms. Rawte??

Neha - [in mind] Ms. Rawte.. he deva.. ab kya hoga?? deva.. mala vachwa! [save me]

Aryan - you didn't answer me..

Neha - wo.. wo.. actually.. I think we should get an early day off today..

Aryan - [looks at his watch] it only 6 now.. why do you want an early day off?

Neha - you seem to forget something..

Aryan - oh the dinner party? well that's at 8:30 right?

Neha - I need to get ready!

Aryan - [rolling his eyes] you need two n half hours for that?

Neha - yupp.. n as also there's no work to do now.. n plus this is one of the rare ocassions where we get so much of free time.. please.. give the day off.. please..

Aryan - ok fine.. but this is for the first n last time.

Neha - [giving a winning smile] ok chief!

Aryan - so team.. meet you all at 8:30..Tulip Grand Hotel.. ok.. good day!

all left..

Aryan - sonu.. ye tumne thik nahi kiya.. iss tarah jaldi day off.. that's not good..

Neha - oh ho bhau.. chillax! waise bhi hamare paas koi case nahi tha.. aur paper work bhi complete ho chuka tha.. to phir wahan baith kar karte bhi kya

Aryan - lekin phir bhi..

Neha - agli baar aisa nahi karungi.. ok?

Aryan - promise?

Neha - pakka promise!

~

7:30 p.m.

Rawte Mansion

Neha was in her room.. getting ready from the past 15 minits.. before that, she took a small nap as she felt sleepy.. she looked at herself in the mirror.. dressed in black n purple knee-length, silk-net dress.. with black heels.. little makeup of kohl in eyes n lipgloss..

her cell beeped.. A message from Karan.. he was waiting down in the car.. she immediately took her purse n cell n left.. bidding a bye to Shyna..

~

After a drive of about 15 minutes, Karan n Neha reached the beach.. it was one of Neha's favourite spots.. whenever she liked to stay alone.. she used to go there.. it was quite lonely there..

they sat on one of the coconut tree-branch.. rather.. tree bench as Neha called it.. as it was just two feet above the ground.. ideal to be called bench! they sat there.. their hands entwined n looking into each-other's eyes.. no words were needed there.. slowly it turned dark.. the little street-light at one corner glowed.. spreading a faint light everywhere.. they both were now hugging.. it was a long hug.. slowly Karan cupped Neha's face.. his eyes on her lips.. she lowered her eyes.. her took it as her approval.. n their lips just touched when the shrill noise of her cell disturbed her.. hey stopped.. Neha looked at her cell.. cursing it.. it was an alarm.. it was already 8:15 by now.. they had to leave now else they'd get late.. so they left n reached the hotel after 20 minutes.. as they were stuck at a traffic signal..!

~

After the dinner, Sam got an idea.. he asked Neha for a race.. n Neha did agree reluctantly.. n this time Aryan too joined in.. so there was going to be lot of fun..

Sam - aur team? how will we divide?

Neha - look.. jise bhi meri team me aana he.. ek baat yaad rakhe.. koi guarantee nahi he.. apni risk par baithna padega! n however I drive.. at whatever speed.. not even a single word about that.. rest is up to you! [she left towards her car]

Sam's team included Aisha, Manushi, Chotu; Aryan's team included ArJun, Riya, Shree n liza while in Neha's team were Karan, Rehan n Abhinav.. they both were actually confused where to go when Karan dragged them with him..

In parking lot..

Aryan - race kahan tak karenge?

Neha - the Ice-cream parlour!

Sam - won't that be too short?

Neha - me hamare purane wale spot ki baat kar rahi hu.. it will be atleast more than half an hour from here! aur uss raste pe jyada traffic bhi nahi hota

Aryan - ok.. aur jo bhi jeetega wo treat dega

Neha - no.. koi bhi jeete.. treat to me hi dungi!

Sam- fine then..

they left with their respective teams n cars.. with Neha starting n leading the race.. followed by Sam n Aryan driving almost together.. after driving for 10 minits, Neha slowed down her car a little.. letting Sam n Aryan take the lead..

Karan - why did you slow down?

Neha - didn't you hear the disclaimer?

Karan - haan but..

Neha - nothing..

she opened her window..letting the cool breeze in.. the speed was still 60 kmps.. soon, a jeep was beside them.. n all heard a whistle!

Neha - are o Sukhi!! ye aawara aashiqo wali harkate band kar!

Sukhi - [from the jeep's co-driver seat] ek aawara kabhi aashiq nahi hota aur ek aashiq kabhi aawara nahi hota!

Neha - once more repeat! [ he repeats the dialogue] wow.. waise itna accha dialogue tera to ho nahi sakta.. kahan se copy paste kiya?

Sukhi - copy paste to kiya he lekin kahan se ye yaad nahi

Ashfaq - [from the back seat] tum london se waapis kab aayi DQ?

Neha - kal raat ko hi

Dj - [from the driver seat] maa-papa kaise he? tumhare bade papa ki tabiyat thik he?

Neha - acche he.. haan... bade papa ki tabiyat bhi thik he..

Ashfaq - haan.. tumhe dekhne ke baad to unki tabiyat thik ho hi gayi hogi..kyu?

Neha - sahi he..

Sukhi - waise lair sahab galat kab hote he thane-daarni ji!

Neha - koun lair??

Sukhi - ye.. jo mere piche baitha he..

Neha - abe wo lawyer he lair nahi!

Sukhi - kya yaar.. lair lawyer.. sab ek hi he..[gets a hit on his head from back] ouch!!

Dj - accha DQ.. ye bata teri London ki trip kaisi thi.. iss baar kya khaas tha?

Neha - kuch nahi.. wahi har baar ka drama.. Shadi kar lo shadi kar lo.. I was just fed up! meine maa ke laaye huye dhaiso [250] rishte.. dhai minit me reject kar diye..

Sukhi - itni jaldi? kaise?

Neha - bas ek paper pe likh diya rejected' aur file me rakh diya.. kaam ho gaya!

Dj - matla tumhari mom ki 6 mahine ki mehnat pe tumhare 6 words ne pani pher diya?

Neha - yupp!

Ashfaq - par tumhe un dhaiso me se ek bhi pasand nahi aaya?

Neha - dekha hi kahan meine?

Sukhi - matlab?

Neha - meine un sab ko dekhe bina hi reject kar diya.. !

Dj - great! waise aaj party me aa rahi ho na?

Neha - not sure..

Dj - aana zarur.. we'll be waiting!

Neha - ok.. fine! I'll try!

Ashfaq - ok.. see you soon!

they took another turn n vanished into the twisted roads..

Karan - this was the reason you slowed down?

Neha - ya!

Abhinav - hum to kaafi piche reh gaye.. ab?

Neha - tighten your seatbelts.. the plane's soon gonna take off..

saying so, she closed the windows n increased the speed.. n took a short cut to reach the place..

in between she got a call from one of her friend, Maulik

Maulik - Neha.. pls help me.. mujhe sirf tum hi bacha sakti hu.. me yahan fass gaya hu.. wo log mujhe maarna chahte he.. me unse jyada der tak bach nahi sakta..

Neha - what nonsense MD?? kitni baar kaha he aisa mazaak mat kiya karo..

Maulik - me mazaak nahi kar raha..

Neha - oh.. stop it.. ye tum pehle bhi kar chuke ho..

Maulik - me sach keh raha hu.. sach.. oh no.. they're here.. I need to run..

the call gets disconnected.. as she was not sure that this call was true or not.. she took it to be a joke n started driving at a worst speed n reached the place well before everyone..

after reaching the place.. she took her cell n called Maulik again.. the call was not received..

Neha - what the hell! mazak karne ki bhi hadd hoti he..

they were now waiting for others to return.. but somewhere deep in her heart Neha was feeling something was wrong.. she closed her eyes n leaned on the stearing wheel.. Karan asked her what happened but she didn't reply.. soon Sam n Aryan also reached there.. they were surprized that how did she reach before them.. as she was quite behind n they didn't see her crossing them..

Aryan - phir se cheating ki na tumne?

Neha - nahi.. meine koi cheating nahi ki!

Sam - shortcut use karna aur cheating karna ek hi baat hoti he.. agar agli baar bhi cheating hi karni he to pehle hi bata dena.. we won't race

Neha - aur jo aap cheating karte he uska kya??

Sam - me koi cheating nahi karta..

Neha - rehne dijiye.. meine kuch keh diya to aapko accha nahi lagega..

she goes towards her car

Aryan - aur treat koun dega?

Neha - [throws her wallet towards him] jise jo khana he kha lena.. mujhe ek zaruri kaam he.. me seedha ghar aa jaungi

Jun - raat ke dus baje aisa kounsa zaruri kaam he tumhe?

Neha - me mera kaam khatam karke aa jaungi.. don't worry

Jun - kya kaam he aur kahan jaa rahi ho pehle ye batao [took her keys]

Neha - mujhe nahi pata..

Aryan - kitne baje tak wapas aaogi?

Neha - 11 ya 11:30 baje tak

Aryan - be specific

Neha - 11:30

Aryan - ok.. jao..[gave her keys snatching them from Jun]

she left..

Jun - bhau aap..

Aryan - wo 11:30 tak ghar wapas aa jayegi.. baad me puch-tach kar lena.. aur tum sab.. yahan kyu khade ho.. apne apne flavours choose karo.. Ice-cream treat baaki he..

all of them had their ice-creams n then left for their homes..

~ ~ ~

That's it!

Almost 6000 words update in total!

so do drop in long comments dearies!

precap - wher did Neha go? why? was the call made by Maulik true.. or fake.. n much more coming up..stay tuned!
Edited by Godly_Affection - 10 years ago
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Res..😉/Unress Yess! Me First!!! 🥳 Dhinka Chika! Awsummm Update Chutki..!! 🤗 So Neha is in London..!! All are missing her spcly Karan. Loved The family moments!!! Neha is really the Laadli of Her Aai-Baba and Maa-Papa..❤️ Par phir wahi topic!! Shaadi..!! Hadd Hai..!! So Dipak cums to know that Neha loves Karan. So, Neha is backk!! And she resigned frm ETF! 😲 It was shocking but her reasons werent wrong too! Aww..All wud miss herr!! ❤️ The ETF Moments were cutee too!! ❤️ Neha joins ESS. Like the new team too! But whats wid Manushi-Neha? 😕 🤣🤣 Karan-Neha's Romantic Moment was broken by the cell phone!! 😆 Neha gives them a dinner treat! The race was fun too! 😃 But ek baat, I think Neha is treating SamJun a bit rudely..!! Who is Maulik? And is he in danger?? Ab kya syaappa hai? I agree that Juno had been very rude and idiotic to Neha but she is being very hard on hin nowadays!! 🤔 Thanxx fr Pm! Continuee Soonz!!
Edited by Bubbly_Shanaya - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awesome update.
Loved it a lot.
Neha in London and everyone in Mumbai is missing her a lot,especially Karan.
Arjun thinking that whether she is in London or not.
Aww...
Loved the family moments..
Haahahahah... Turnbull-mota saand... 🤣
everything was just perfect...
Continue sooonish...
Update soon...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#16
plz post next part.awesome update
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awesome neha is in London..
rawte family scene was superb..
neha back to Mumbai..
plz continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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beautiful
love it
waiting 4 next
continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#19
loved it Neha
awesome update
Hmm so neha is in London
discussing every thing with her parents
Thats good Neha poori papas daughter hai 😃
she told everything to her papa
kya baat hai Arjun ki bhi setting karane main lagi hai 😊
That bull was interesting & Good 😆
lets see what happens next
& Banner is nice
Thanks for the PM
Continue soon 😊
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#20
Awesome story
Read all parts in one go
Loved them
Waiting for the next part
Continue soon

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