OS: ~|Start of something good|~ (Part 5 Pg 27) Updated! 19th July - Page 9

Originally posted by: angelarya

Is it a true one...did this happen with you???😉 Well technically I witnessed something similar. I just spiced it up in my style! hehe

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No personal questions in comments...😛 No no...it's fine! hehe I don't mind

Regarding story...
the update was beautifully written,I remembered my days...na... it happens now also...
it happens that there is some very cool type of guy who says something and the girls take it like...filmy dialogs won't work and all...😆 Yeah well...I see it everyday except yahan bollywood dialogue nahi marta...it's more like showing off...But Once in a while you see that filmy scene...and I go gaga on it...Lol

Riya...resembled every such girl and Arjun...the cool dude...but he was genuinely feeling sorry...poor Arjun...Riya ne to kuch bhi soch liya...😆 Well expect the unexpected from Mr.A haha! He might see like the popular kinda guy...but...he has a heart as well. And right now that heart is falling for someone really hard. t

at last the line about the smile...with a ':D' quite true for Sana..Riya must have blushed on that...😉 Well...she indeed has a really sweet smile that makes everyone smile. hhehe! I just had to include that in there.

She now knows the first alphabet of his name..."A"...Coincidentally my name also starts with "A"...joking... Ahaaha!!! Now that is a coincidence...or not 😆 But it's still cool dudeee!

Overall superb update

Continue soon
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Wow! thank you so much for this awesome comment! It really means a lot!

Thank you so much! Love ya! ❤️

Originally posted by: farana786

wow nabi lovely update
u r a fantastic writer
beautifully written
loved ta clumsy riya who was getin nevous n full latu on him
hehehe the part was so cute
riyas a bad lair lol
thnks for pm
cont soon

Originally posted by: ArjunfanNAJAAN

wow finally madam ne update kiya... par kiya toh sahi.
you know ye bahot hi zyada romantic hai. oww i am speechless {aur aisa hardly hota hai},
it all seemed so real, like as if i was witnessing the convo between riya and Mr. A _____ oh kaun hai vo Arjun?
waise letter wo bhi book mein *planned hai ye "takrana" *
me so blushy blushy too.
Ab toh continue karna hi bade ga. SAMJHE YA SAMJHAUN.

Originally posted by: Devangana

Cute and nice continue soon.

Originally posted by: madmadona

lovely os
their 1st & 2nd meeting was so sweet
loved this teenage love
it's really cute
eagerly waiting for next part
cont soon

Originally posted by: Godly_Affection

awesome update
loved it
thankx for pm dear
continu soon

Originally posted by: ShanayaShaleen

Awsummm Nabiooo...👏 Hayeee..I soo lovedd itt!!! ❤️❤️ It was totally filmy..Haye The way You nd Arjun..Errr..I mean Riya nd Arjun were lost in each other..Was Nd I loveee thee songg!! ❤️❤️ Awieee..He is suchh a sweetheart!! Tere saath..Oops..Sorry I mean Riya ko kinna sweet note diya! ❤️❤️ Very much lyk YJHD!!! P.S-SOrryy! I keep imagining you and Arjun instead of ArIya here!!! 😛 P.P.S-Need ur cmnts on Zehnaseeb ASAP! Thanxx fr pm...Continue Soonz!

Originally posted by: pink1

nice update she getting attract
toward him update soon

Originally posted by: sweetpari4u97

nice update