OS: ~|Start of something good|~ (Part 5 Pg 27) Updated! 19th July - Page 7

Originally posted by: GOLD.A

Nice Nabi

really good

thanks for the PM
Continue soon 😊😊

Is it a true one...did this happen with you???😉

😆😆😆
No personal questions in comments...😛

Regarding story...
the update was beautifully written,I remembered my days...na... it happens now also...
it happens that there is some very cool type of guy who says something and the girls take it like...filmy dialogs won't work and all...😆

Riya...resembled every such girl and Arjun...the cool dude...but he was genuinely feeling sorry...poor Arjun...Riya ne to kuch bhi soch liya...😆

at last the line about the smile...with a ':D' quite true for Sana..Riya must have blushed on that...😉

She now knows the first alphabet of his name..."A"...Coincidentally my name also starts with "A"...joking...

Overall superb update

Continue soon
Thanks for the pm

wow nabi lovely update
u r a fantastic writer
beautifully written
loved ta clumsy riya who was getin nevous n full latu on him
hehehe the part was so cute
riyas a bad lair lol
thnks for pm
cont soon

wow finally madam ne update kiya... par kiya toh sahi.
you know ye bahot hi zyada romantic hai. oww i am speechless {aur aisa hardly hota hai},
it all seemed so real, like as if i was witnessing the convo between riya and Mr. A _____ oh kaun hai vo Arjun?
waise letter wo bhi book mein *planned hai ye "takrana" *
me so blushy blushy too.
Ab toh continue karna hi bade ga. SAMJHE YA SAMJHAUN.

Cute and nice continue soon.

lovely os
their 1st & 2nd meeting was so sweet
loved this teenage love
it's really cute
eagerly waiting for next part
cont soon

awesome update
loved it
thankx for pm dear
continu soon

Awsummm Nabiooo...👏 Hayeee..I soo lovedd itt!!! ❤️❤️ It was totally filmy..Haye The way You nd Arjun..Errr..I mean Riya nd Arjun were lost in each other..Was Nd I loveee thee songg!! ❤️❤️ Awieee..He is suchh a sweetheart!! Tere saath..Oops..Sorry I mean Riya ko kinna sweet note diya! ❤️❤️ Very much lyk YJHD!!! P.S-SOrryy! I keep imagining you and Arjun instead of ArIya here!!! 😛 P.P.S-Need ur cmnts on Zehnaseeb ASAP! Thanxx fr pm...Continue Soonz!

nice update she getting attract
toward him update soon

Awwwsssmmm part
Love it
Supperbbb...
Amazing...
Sooo... cute
Cont sooon
Thanks for PM