OS: ~|Start of something good|~ (Part 5 Pg 27) Updated! 19th July - Page 11

Created

Last reply

Replies

195

Views

15.5k

Users

40

Likes

290

Frequent Posters

Live-life thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: IshitaRocks015

awh!
this was just..mind blowing...
ahan!
m falling for this story man!
it was just mmmwwaaahhh!!
the collision..
the naughty remark..
the joke yaad a gyi part...
and then that sweet note!
i loved it!


Awww! Thank you so much Ishi!

tHAT IS a big complimenttt! LOve yaaa!

Glad you liked it so much means a lot!

Thank you 😃
Live-life thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: IshitaRocks015

awh!
this was just..mind blowing...
ahan!
m falling for this story man!
it was just mmmwwaaahhh!!
the collision..
the naughty remark..
the joke yaad a gyi part...
and then that sweet note!
i loved it!


Awww Thank you Ishiii!

That is a big compliment! Glad you liked it sooo much!

Love ya!

Thank youuu!
😃
Live-life thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Areesha566

nice part

continue soon😊



Thank you so much

Will do!

minamma thumbnail
11th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 11 years ago
Wowwieee so good nabi
Lyvd it
So arjun already flat on riya's smile haaa
Luvd d updt
Plzz pm me wenever u updt
Live-life thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: minamma

Wowwieee so good nabi

Lyvd it
So arjun already flat on riya's smile haaa
Luvd d updt
Plzz pm me wenever u updt


Thanks min! I am really glad you like it.

Hmm...Riya's smile is beautiful...uses to khona hi tha na!
Will pm you for sure!

thanks again love YOU!
😳
Live-life thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: khemanisarita

wow
awesome update
love it
cont soon

Thank you Di!!

Means a lot...will do


ArjunfanNAJAAN thumbnail
11th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 11 years ago
awesomely fantabulously and amazingly written. its so cute story just waiting for the update.
Live-life thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 11 years ago

For some weird reason this update isn't posting on the actual thread of the story. which is Why I am making a new post...really sorry. But when these technical difficulties are sorted I'LL repost it on the right thread

So yeah I am back with an update again.

This a pretty long update so please bear with me. The real life happenings took a toll on me so while writing this I was literally hypnotized so yeah...

#Cukkingfrazzines

Here you Go... and PM's will be late Sorry

Part 3: Star of Something Good

Sparks...

Bouncing all over my skin and especially my wrist. Is this for real or am I in another universe? Because this feeling right now... seems to have consumed both my mind and my heart. Is feeling this even possible? This feeling, which I have no words to describe, is spreading like a plague.

People usually are happy in this situation but then again I am not one of those "people". I was born crazy...so expect the unexpected from me. Like today, surprisingly I wasn't expecting anything from today. Even before I went to sleep last night I knew that today was going to be one of those "eh" day. And on one of those "eh"days I like to wash off the boredom by playing a sport or even working out.

So after school finished I went to the community GYM for a good workout and to sweat that boredom off and what better sport than basketball to sweat of stress and boredom.

I changed into my tracks and quickly started shooting hoops. Oh man! Feels so good. I think I might have taken about 99 shots already in 20 minutes. * Pat on the back for me. *

I decided to try my luck and shoot a hoop from the three-pointer line. I had been practicing to shoot from there since I came to know what basketball really was. It was one of the wow moments for players if they got it in. Taking a deep breath I stepped up to the line squared my shoulders towards the basket and aimed for the middle of the square on the backboard.

Now...if this was in a real game I'd probably chicken out and never take any shots. I way too embarrassed to embarrass myself in front of people. But since I was alone I could just show off to myself.

I stared at the target for little while more and bent my knees to shoot the ball.

"Riya!"

The ball left my hands but I never heard it touching the backboard. In fact it went over the backboard and bounced on the wall back to me.

I sighed deeply again. So freaking close! Bappa apki merse kya dushmani hai? Iss Mr.A ko bhi galat time pe dramatic entrance marne ki zaroorat thi?

"God Dammit!' I mumbled to myself.

"And Hello to you too Riya. I must say you have got skills."

"Thanks!" I smiled sarcastically.

"That was a close shot. You need to relax your body just a little bit to get it in."

"Acha? Tumhe bada pata hai Basketball ke bare mein? Aise hai to khud hi karke batao." The guts of this man! God.. pehle he messed up my concentration and now he is teaching me how to play? Too much!

"Sure Milady! Why not...Ball please." I threw him the ball as hard as possible expecting it to hit his head but of course he was a boy...all those muscles come in handy after all. Ball se marne ka idea mainstream ho jayega...iska badla to mein leke Rahoongi Mr.A...You wait and watch!

"Woho! Go easy on me gurl! After all I am just a teenage boy." He said making an innocent-face-that-looked-not-so-innocent to me.

"Oh I am sorry! My hands slipped." I replied sarcastically and moved away from the three-pointer line to give him space to shoot.

He walked towards me with a smirk on his face.

Coming right up to my face and locking his eyes to mine he said with a authoritative tone, "Watch. AND. Learn"

Saying that he moved to the three-pointer line to take the shot. He did the same stuff I did, Stepping up, squaring shoulders, aiming for the target and blah blah blah can we get to the point already.

Seeing that he was taking long I chuckled lightly at his overconfidence and shook my head. And that's when I saw it...the ball went flying from his arms and hit the backboard right in the middle of the square, which caused it to drop right through the basket.

My mouth was left hanging open. I am pretty sure my jaw was touching the ground right now because that... was...an... amazing... Shot! Hate to admit it but it's the truth. Day am! Talk about skills man!

Of course I wasn't going to show how I actually felt about the shot to him. Oh But wait! I think he has already seen it as he was grinning at me goofily as if he had just won an Olympic medal.

"Haan haan theek hai. That was just luck in the moment you know."

"Well luck ho ya kuch aur...I still got it in. Want me to teach you?"

What? Where did that come from? Was he really going to teach me? Umm...I think this a bad idea. Kisakh le Riya..Kisakh le!

"Uhh...I have to go now...I have homework to do..."

"Oh come on! This won't take long. Plus I was here to return you your headphones. But if you don't shoot this last hoop with me then..I might have to forget about the idea of returning them."

Oh Fudge! I can't loose those headphones. They were a gift from someone. And they are blue, which is my favorite. Goodness...Bappa aap bhi kya situation mein dalte ho? Yaar timing appki bohut kharab hai!

What to do now? Should I say yes? Akkir ek headphones ki kimat tum kya jano Mr.A!

Riya fimy hona band kar and focus!

"Fine. But only one shot and then I am going."

"Trust me. One is enough to learn."

Now you might be thinking about why my headphones are with him? Well ever since our little collision in the hallways he had actually started talking to me. At first I felt weird that this guys out of the blues starts talking to me but then something about him told me that he was a. ...Nice guy. We would talk about the most random things in lunch, in the library and whenever I saw him in the hallway. Now you see it was one of those relations where you couldn't actually call it friendship yet it more than just an acquaintance. I was starting to like this thing between us. Even though it had no name...but kehte hai na kuch rishton ke nam nahi hote. So anyway Study Hall was the only class we had together and even then we would sit across the classroom facing each other yet busy doing work. Sometimes he would make this weird faces at me and I'd reply by making some back and sometimes I would just smile or laugh.

It was weird but fun. So one day he came up to me during Study hall and he asked me If I wanted to swap headphones. Taken aback for a moment I asked him Why? And he said you know just as a symbol pf the start of our friendship, afterall who tune nahi sunni kya? Jo tera hai wo mera hai, jo mera hai wo tera. His reply made me smile and we switched headphones. His were black, just plain black which made them kinda cool. I love black. It goes with everything.

That whole scene replayed into my mind as I walked towards Mr.A. Oh Lord! Please do not embarrass me in front of him.

I took a deep breath and stood on the three-pointer line facing the basket holding the ball. He came up right behind me. Suddenly my body tensed up. His one hand overlapped the ball I was holding and the other went around my waist. I took a sharp intake of breath. I think he heard it because he whispered in my ear.

"Relax."

How the heck am I supposed to relax when he is standing so close? Oh God! I think I am going to hyperventilate.

We did the "drill" aiming, squaring shoulders, and on and on.

And then the ball left my hands, hit the backboard square right in the middle and went through the basket!

Exactly a copy of the last shot he took I was kind of shocked! I had finally made a three pointer. Man felt so good.

I turned around and was almost about to hug him out of joy and excitement but at the last moment I pulled my self back. There was a moment of awkward silence that passed and then he spoke up.

"Good Job. See it's not that hard."

"Hmm."

After that we didn't know what to say to each other, which did not help the awkwardness at all.

"Okay THEN. I have to go. Thanks... bye"

Before he could reply I ran out of the GYM grabbing my stuff. My heart was working overtime. Oh Lord kahin dhadakte dhadakte dil bhar na aajaye!

Warna mere liye problem ho jayegiii.

And that is how I have got this feeling... I cannot describe in words, which apparently involves sparks on your body. As crazy as that sounds but it is true. But I am glad that I got that shot in and I guess I am happy that he was with me when that happened. I might be blushing right now. Oh God! I am such a teenager. Oh wait I am a teenager. Well, don't know about my heart but I think I am going to have a good night's sleep tonight.

To be Continued...

"There is never a time or place for true love. It happens accidentally, in a heartbeat, in a single flashing, throbbing moment."

Sarah Dessen, The Truth About Forever

So there you go.

Hit those like button and leave those cute and long comments

Will be waiting

Sorry again for the late PM's

Until later peeps

😳

Edited by Live-life - 11 years ago
saritak thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Visit Streak 180 Thumbnail + 6
Posted: 11 years ago
wow
beautiful
awesome update
love it
cont soon
when u update another story update
Edited by saritak - 11 years ago
904129 thumbnail
Posted: 11 years ago
Yooo Nabiooo!!!!! It was a stupendo fantabulously Fantastical Update! Loved It To The T!!!! As I always say you gooo onnn writinggg abouttt ArIya I can only imagine ArAbi (Arjun+Nabi) Cute Na?? 😳 I just came up wid this name for you guys..❤️❤️ Dunno what is it with my Grey Matter! 😃 Anyways..Hayeee!! Arjun teaching u basketball! Oh Em Gee!! His one touch is enuf to set the skin on fire!!!! Aur yahaan pe toh he touched ur waist..😳😳 Gosh this guy is sooo freakin hott!! Sply his Watch.AND.Learn was..😳😳 Uspar ball phekne ka koi faayda nhi hota! 😆 Afterall those are the muscles for which he works out in the GYm for hours baby..😊 Aww..You too sawped headphones! So cutee! My cuties..❤️❤️ Love the way ur frndship is evolving! Hope this blossoms in love soon..❤️❤️ Continuee Soon! Love you loads lyk a Sishta!! ❤️❤️❤️

Related Topics

Arjun Thumbnail

Posted by: muskan760

7 years ago

The Wait (Ariya FF) Part-36 Updated (Page-66)

Hey guys I'm here with the prologue of my Ariya story, though the title hasn't been yet decided but i hope you will enjoy it. Prologue :Life is

Expand ▼
Arjun Thumbnail

Posted by: VindhyaMounika

1 years ago

Arakshi SS: Chance By Kismat - Part 15 Updated (Page 4)

Arakshi SS: Chance By Kismat Prologue, Part 1 and 2 Part 3: Arjun kneeled before lifeless Sakshi, who didn’t even blink from past 5minutes. She...

Expand ▼
Arjun Thumbnail

Posted by: SarafWasima

4 months ago

Ariya SS: Bandhan – A Tale of Shadows and Sunshine {Part 4, P.6}

Prologue The night was heavy. As if the air itself carried the weight of unspoken truths and unfinished emotions. A storm was brewing—not...

Expand ▼
Arjun Thumbnail

Posted by: SarafWasima

5 months ago

Ariya FF: Tera Mera Rishta Purana {Part 12, P. 12}

Part 1 The ETF office had always been a place of tension, urgency, and adrenaline, but today, an unusual silence loomed over the space. The...

Expand ▼
Arjun Thumbnail

Posted by: Navyasree08

3 years ago

Hamari adhuri kahani ( arakshi fan fiction) part 13 on page 17

Hey all iam Navya , this is my first fan fiction, iam so obsessed of our beloved arakshi ,i almost read all ffs of arakshi ,now I thought of...

Expand ▼
Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".