OS: ~|Start of something good|~ (Part 5 Pg 27) Updated! 19th July - Page 6

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Posted: 11 years ago
#51

Originally posted by: Live-life

Well...of cousre not it real life...this all imagination dude! all imagination...and mine is realllyyy crazzyyy so don't expect anything normal haha! 😆

Umm...this was more of a teenage OS...hehe...wait wait when did you become sHREEDEVI?😛 hehe!

Lol...it's okay

Thanks for the wonderful comment dude!


if im not mistaken in all my work i'm shree! like you are Ri!
SERIOUSLY!
😡 😕 😲 😭 🤢 🤔 🐷 🤬 😈 😒 😳 that 's all i got here to use to reprimand YOU!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#52

Originally posted by: greensakthi


if im not mistaken in all my work i'm shree! like you are Ri!
SERIOUSLY!
😡 😕 😲 😭 🤢 🤔 🐷 🤬 😈 😒 😳 that 's all i got here to use to reprimand YOU!

ummm...no in my work Shree is Shree and Riya is riya!
😆 Sorry...if i DISAPPOINTED YOU...but...hehe!
but that's cool that you consider yourself shree in your works...hehe makes it easier to write!
😳
Nhahhh reprimanding me isn't o easy...I maybe young at heart...but I am an Asian
Hahah!
😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
#53
Thank you for the overwhelming response!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#54
Haww again.. iska bhi pm ni mila🥺 that's not fair...
See how good I an.. commenting without a pm..😎
Again a super duper os...
The way you explained how it all started and then jojo n rii ke exchanges. .. Awesomely beautiful. ...
Could literally imagine everything. ..
Loved it...
Do write a sequel to it...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#55

Originally posted by: devildiva21

Haww again.. iska bhi pm ni mila🥺 that's not fair...

See how good I an.. commenting without a pm..😎
Again a super duper os...
The way you explained how it all started and then jojo n rii ke exchanges. .. Awesomely beautiful. ...
Could literally imagine everything. ..
Loved it...
Do write a sequel to it...

Awww I am really sorry I didm;t send you a pm D! I don't think you are in my buddy list
wait I shall send you a request just after reply to this!
😳 You'have got skills bro!
😆 I am really glad you enjoyed it Divi!
mEANS a lot!
I will write more promise !
Thank you so much
love you loads !
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Posted: 11 years ago
#56

Hey again * waves *

Yeah...I have written another part of this OS...I don't know why...but hehe

Inspired by the developments in real life...I though I'd spice it up...in my style.😉

I Love this song...hope you peeps like it too!

Enjoy 😊

Part 2: Start of something Good

Dj vu.

That is exactly the word I WOULD use to describe my day today. I mean the most random thing happened in the school's hallway today. I am still questioning myself, if it is real or a hallucination.

It started as a normal day. I reached school a bit late than usual. I was walking in hurry frequently looking at my watch to see if I was going to be late for class.

This came out of nowhere but I collided with someone really hard. I lost my balance and closed my eyes waiting to hit the floor and the pain to come.

But after a few seconds I realized I wasn't on the floor. In fact a pair of hands were around my waist holding me tight. I slowly opened my eyes and his face was there.

Ek din kabhi jo khud ko taraashe

Meri nazar se tu zara, haaye re

Aankhon se teri kya kya chhupa hai

Tujhko dikhaaun main zara, haaye re

Ik ankahi si daastaan daastaan

Kehne lagega aaina Subhanallah...

Jo ho raha haim pehli dafaa hai wallah

Aisa hua, Subhanallah..

Jo ho raha hai pehli dafaa hai wallah

Aisa hua

Him...I mean the guy from yesterday's testing who was smiling at me. My heart did a summersault seeing him so close.

History was repeating itself. It was another one of those Bollywood scene jab Hero and Heroine kareeb hota hai. This is exactly what happened with me.

Oh my Sweet Lord! I think...I might faint of this intimate closeness. Too much for a balanced gurl like me to handle man!

Meri khamoshi se baatein chun lena

Unki dori se taarifein bun lena (x2)

Kal nahi thi jo aaj lagti hoon

Taareef meri hai khaamakha

Tohfa hai tera meri adaa

But I couldn't look away. I don't know how many minutes was it after he finally said something.

"Good morning to you as well."

Wow he had a deep but husky voice. Very impressive! What? Impressive? Riya what is wring with you? He is not trying to impress you. Or is he?

"Uhh...Good morning."

"Umm...are we gonna stay like this the whole day. I mean I don't mind!" he said with naughtiness in his voice.

I realized the awkward position we were in and quickly got up saying, "Sorry."

My books were on the floor because of this collision I bend down to pick them up. Surprisingly he did too. Huf! I know these tricks! Trying to be a gentleman and all. That's what the "not-so-cool" boys do in 10th Grade. Then they start flirting. I know the drill but I am not like those "Oh! I am flattered by your flirting skills" or "Omg! You have abs! I am totally dating you" types girls. You are gonna have to try a lot harder than that Mr!

"It's okay. I'll do it myself." I said with a firm tone.

"Not it's fine! It was my fault I should have watched where I was going. I am sorry," he said with a genuine tone in his voice.

That made me look up to find a "I-am-sorry" expression on his face. He was looking like a small child right now. He really did look adorable. And Before I could hold myself I giggled a little.

"What?...Why are you laughing?"

"Ummm...it's nothing. I just remembered a joke," I lied to his face. I feel bad already.

"What was the joke? Mujhe bhi sunao na!"

Oh Shoot! Now what do I do? Uhhh...Riya think of something quickly warna teri lag ne wali hai.

"Umm...I am getting late for class. I should go. Thanks. Bye," I quickly picked up all my books, turned around and started walking towards my class.

I didn't realize that I had started running. As I entered my class I quickly sat on my seat, opened up a book to take notes and there I saw a note and said,

Tumhari smile kitne dangerous hai pata hai?

:D

~ A

Reading that note made me smile. And I may have blushed as well. OH Lord! What is happening to me? Ye Ranbir Kapoor ka dialogue kyun mara? Matlab iss story mein he is...wait Mr. A is Ranbir kapoor and I am Deepika Padukone. Hmm...but I am not a chashmish. Oh well it still works.

Ek din kabhi jo khud ko pukaare

Meri zubaan se tu zara, haaye re

Tujh mein chhupi si jo shayari hai

Tujhko sunaaun main zara, haay re

Ye do dilon ka waasta waasta

Khul ke bataaya jaaye naa

Subhanallah...

Jo ho raha hai, pehli dafaa hai Wallah

Aisa hua.. Subhanallah (x3)

Jo ho raha hai, pehli dafaa hai Wallah

Aisa hua..

A? So his name starts with the first letter of the Alphabet...Fascinating! Wait...why do I find that fascinating? Arghhh...matters of the heart...very complicated!

Done! Now comments ki bari!

You know the drill...ball is in your court!😉

Oh and the continuation of this depends on your response...so if you want me to continue then

A for aao re aao

B se bhao na khao

C se chilla ke comments karooo! 😆

Until later peeps!

😎

Edited by Live-life - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#57
heyee nabi😳
epic fall..hmm hero nee entry mari 😳..bahon ke darmiyan ***
haa good morning ...kuch toh utter kiya ussne😆
hmmm..riya toh full on mood pee ghussa hiii maan mein ladoo phutta phir bhi yakani nahi horahi hai ussee😆😆
note ...😆 yeh kha see ayaa nabi😉
oyee ranbir and deepika ..chashmish😉..hmmm not bad haa
MR A ..riya toh gayee😳
**matters of hearth ..complicated**** ..true😃
🤗
Edited by re123 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#58
It was again Cute❤️

Riya is giong gaga at MR. A.

I am flattered by your flirting skills" It was hilarious 🤣🤣


PS. I wonder how I never read your any story before??
Edited by laila1994 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#59
Nice Nabi
really good
thanks for the PM
Continue soon 😊😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#60

Originally posted by: laila1994

It was again Cute❤️
Riya is giong gaga at A.

I am flattered by your flirting skills" It was hilarious 🤣🤣


PS. I wonder how I never read your any story before??


Thanks again!

Lol...yeah I enjoyed writing that part as well.
😆

Hmm...Maybe because I am not a regular writer...I just started last year I think😛
I am not sure...Plus i HAVEN't wrote much so that maybe another reason.

but Thanks anyway!
😳

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