Fiction Arjun: Reborn from Ashes. Chapter 22, p.50

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sisodia_shefali

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Posted: 11 years ago

#221

nice update will be nice to see di pair up with arjun and karan for solving mukharjee case

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Snehajain

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Posted: 11 years ago

#222

Awesome update...

Case is going fab...👏👏👏 👏👏👏

Di's angry eyes are enough to kill someone...😆😆😆

This Mukherjee sound fishy...😕😕😕

Continue soon...Thanks for PM...

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misakiscarlet

@misakiscarlet

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Posted: 11 years ago

#223

awesome update...
di ne to sab to apne peeche ghumda diya
case is going so intresting...
contd. soon
thnx gor pm

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kunchu

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Posted: 11 years ago

#224

loved it again Atu

Di aur Arjun ko challenge kiya hai

ab dektha hu ke kya kya hone wala hai

start the picture

me already in front seat with popcorn

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anitasharma

@anitasharma

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Posted: 11 years ago

#225

Toh anik is safe but memory lose
thoda nahi kuch jyada hi fishy hai
ab Di madam kya karti hain
continue soon

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Shravani / Arohi

@skrafty

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Posted: 11 years ago

#226

Awesome update
loved it
Di ne to sabke naak main dum kar diya😆😆😆
These Mukherjee's sound fishy
interesting
waiting for the next part
continue soon

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Delusional Minx

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Posted: 11 years ago

#227

wapas aate hi pehle aapki story padhi😉😛
awesome update di👏

loved it🤗

clear details of car case👍🏼

all tracking di..sab uske piche😆

case seems to be very interesting⭐️

sab dishari ke dimaag ke piche pade he😆

Mukherjees sound fishy..🤔😕

ye di ke dimaag me kya plan he??😲❓

thankx for pm😊

continu soon

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rimi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#228

Chapter 10

what is this atisha..ager case sesh holo na aro ekta mystery suru...or are they connected??😕

i am doubtful of your intentions now...😃😉

well di ne gali di..atisha tumhe kitna pata hai..😆

well ronny?? important character or just a passerby?? i think..well let it be..😳

the car blasted..now what?? arjun will investigate..

karan arjun both are conerned for di..u know what.. you are such a..leave it again..🤢

you are confusing me more...pareshan kar rakha hai apne readers ko..kuch to reveal karo yaar..⭐️⭐️

good job though i love this thrill..😃😃

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rimi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#229

Chap 11

So shree was on leave...how on heaven i gonna know that..He isnt my boyfriend...🤔

then came your ever mysterious di...i will some day be bald coz of your weaving mysteries...

she was injured in a landmine...was it a lie for there is something more to it..

karan knows about di...i will kidnap him and make him speak with some seductive moves...girl you dont know my impatience...😵

sam and arjun jog on the same beach..cool...

raghu knows ddt...but why did she keep herself hidden for so long??

connections...awesome workk..i am fida with this part...atisha take a bow from me...👍🏼

chalo me going to read the next part😳

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rimi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#230

chap 12

so you almost end the bhatakta driver case here...but proving the guilty is left too arjun and di...👏👏

anjali is the smartest of all..kaise deduce kiya..

what about this law firm di works in??its real or a facade ??i am in real doubt..

Arjun's concern for di was shown in a superb manner...not too much yet appropriate...

loved this update..specially the convo between the police officials and the other three detectives...

ab unki band bajegi...continue soo ati-sha...😃

thanks for the pms..😊