New Arjun OS: A ray of hope.. 3/12

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yams.s

@yams.s

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#11

Wonderful Story

Keep such stories going

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Shravani / Arohi

@skrafty

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#12

Beautiful OS
loved it
I wish it turns into reality
But alas! its not going to
hope there is one more part to this OS
because i loved it a lot

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rimi

@rimi_invisible

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+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#13

a very beautiful os...

as usual ur portay of emotions and the concept awesome...the best end to this story that could have happened...😊

thank you so much for the pm...

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Prerna

@daydreamer...

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#14

this was sooo beautiful...the beginning and mid brought tears into my eyes and the end made me smile...loved it... :)

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ll-Shilpa-ll

@SIP1997

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 11 years ago

#15

*Edited*

Snuck one up on me did you?😭

Anyway, sorry was not around, been under the weather.

And like you I am not saying goodbye to anyone.

Okay, here I am behna. I don't know what to say about your latest OS, but just know that this has to be the best goodbye OS I have ever written.

In fact I shouldn't say it's a goodbye OS, but something for new beginnings.

You already know how I feel about the changes in the show, so I don't have to say it still I can't bring myself to feel sad over the changes, because I feel changes are part of our lives and we should learn to adapt with the time and remember what each character gave us.

Besides if we start getting sad over a fictional show life will be unbearable and we have enough real life problems to face everyday.

Having said this, I am also looking forward to the new beginnings and where the show takes us next.😛

Now to your OS, what can I say, it was beautiful, you captured the essence of each character through Arjun's eyes and his relationship with them.

I know the show is going in different direction but I do wish something like this was happening in the show, khair..you gave me what I would have wanted to see so it's all good.

Loved the OS behna, and I am going to miss your writings for this particular team will hope that you have plenty of opportunities for the next.

Thank you for writing this and sharing it with us. Fantastic job.👏🤗

Edited by ll-Shilpa-ll - 11 years ago

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Avantika

@AeDilHaiMushkil

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: ll-Shilpa-ll
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Snuck one up on me did you?😭

Anyway, sorry was not around, been under the weather.

And like you I am not saying goodbye to anyone.

Soo sorry B1..
I did try.. Running around doing last minute things.. Will catch up tomorrow.. 🤗