New Arjun OS: A ray of hope.. 3/12

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NeethuEli

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Posted: 11 years ago

#31

Beautiful story!!!
If only this was portrayed in the show and not the bomb blast!😭
You had me in tears but finally made me smile! For that a big thank you!!!😊

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Shreya

@shreya09

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Posted: 11 years ago

#32

its beautiful

kash show me bhi aisa hota

excellent writing 👍🏼

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-Rajvi-

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Posted: 11 years ago

#33

Thank you Avni di for writing this..Love you so much❤️

I was so heart broken, after reading that the whole team will die except Arjun. But you made me smile. I don't have words to say how beautiful this was😊.

Thank you for the PM!🤗

PS : Please don't make this your last work on this forum. Arjun is incomplete without your stories.

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846182

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Posted: 11 years ago

#34

Honestly a ray of hope in-midst all the tears!

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sweetpari4u97

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Posted: 11 years ago

#35

sorry for late reply.

actually quite busy.

but the whole part was wonderful.

beautifully written.

like the whole update.

thankx for pm.

cont soon.

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PoohLover

@PoohLover

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Posted: 11 years ago

#36

Avni first of all i would really like to say that though we didnt interact too much you are really sweetheart and a gem of a person...And a brilliant writer ❤️ and funny as well 😆 😆

The beginning of a new story this is..dunno how it would be but yeah Arjun surely gave all of us many things..friends,sista and many moore😛

Awesome piece of work...really loved it...emotional and fantastically written ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️

Continue soonish and huggies to you 🤗 🤗

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Farheen Shaikh

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Posted: 11 years ago

#37

To tell you honestly,I believe&have seen as well that revamping/Season2 loses the essence of the beautiful story which ppl have cherished till date.I m not sure of how much i m xcited or ready to accept the changes but then as they say,Change is the only thing constant in the universe.Let see whats there in store for us
Coming to the story:
All the while reading this,I had this heady feeling &which reminded me the group hug of the last episode😭U have beautifully drafted this one Avantika👍🏼&then till the end of this,it brought A ray of hopealong with an expression.change from😭 to😃.Now even if you keep this one as an open ending,I would cherish this one as well.Not evertime life is fare.Right?