New Arjun OS: A ray of hope.. 3/12

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CrazyHasii

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Posted: 11 years ago

#21

Wow... Plz continue soon.
And pm me. I sent you a buddy request

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Safina

@miss_choxz

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Posted: 11 years ago

#22

Aww the ending was so sweet... I felt I could see it all happening!!

Please continue this... I wanna read more on their secret reunion...

Thanks for the pm x

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laila

@laila1994

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Posted: 11 years ago

#23

Perfect ending of Great ETF😊

This OS is Fab

Loved it so much

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nakshatra92

@nakshatra92

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Posted: 11 years ago

#24

awesome OS ...

beautifully writen ...

just wish ki aise hi kuch ho show mein , but...

anyway will be waiting for arjun as before...

loved it and thanks for the PM

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prachi

@prachi90

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Posted: 11 years ago

#25

Beautiful os
middle tak reaf krte krte to I start cryng...stupid me:-)
Bt vn reach d end smile automatically appeard :-)
U hv wruttn everythng so nycly...:-)
.kash show mein bhi aisa hi ku h dikhate bt nhi sab change krdia:-(

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kunchu

@kunchu

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Posted: 11 years ago

#26

that was too good
I went the usual athyachar way and you went by a beautiful way
loved it
esp the hug
and the reunion is just superb
apart from the story, you know whats the only thing I am happy with whats gona happen in the serial?
in the blast you know whats going to happen
the only bright side i see is Rathod and Sree wont be inside at that time
they are already out of the office na
but cant believe the PH
they can even bring in them at last moment and blow the fuse
but this story did make me smile a lot

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yas23

@yas23

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Posted: 11 years ago

#27

Awesome os
the feelings and emotions were beautifully written
loved it soo much
thanks for the pm

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..sweetchilly..

@..sweetchilly..

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#28

Saying goodbyes are also a part of our life.
The ETF and it's members have made a good place in our heart and will remain forever.
We don't know what CVs have in store for us this Saturday, it probably isn't something like this.. But it would have been glad if it's something to make us happy for.
Anyways, lets go with the flow of it.
Coming to the OS.It was Fantastic..
Arjun and the team members feelings were so beautifully potrayed..
Loved it..<3
Thanks for the PM.

Edited by ..sweetchilly.. - 11 years ago

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fly.high

@fly.high

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Posted: 11 years ago

#29

it cant' get any better!
i dnt get it...why our forumwasis write so much much much much better than the CVs and writers of the show...

the emotions were so beautifully portrayed and the short story was so nicely told.

i loved the convo betn Arjun and th team...

apparently even i am gonna miss this saturday's episode as i'll be travelling too...
i am very sad abt it..cz i badly wanted to see hw they show th closure of this team
lets pray for the best...looking forward to th new team
awsm OS

love
Aisha