Arakshi Two-Shot: Make you feel my love - 2 (Pg.6) 23/9

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neeraja

@life93

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Posted: 12 years ago

#31

hi avani di🤗... awesome!!!! ...n then all the time the way u define meaning of love is just amazing!!!👏👏👏... hmm!! u know arjun hai na harr baar galati karta hai lekin sudharta bhi hai😉... iss time he did really wrong with sakshi...both are in pain 😭😭... just heal their pain bring them together 2gether di😃... update soon di🤗

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Snehajain

@Snehajain

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Posted: 12 years ago

#32

Awesome start...😊😊😊

Poor Sakshi...😭😭😭Poor Arjun also...😭😭😭

Continue soon...Thanks for PM...😭😭😭

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ll-Shilpa-ll

@SIP1997

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Posted: 12 years ago

#33

Hey there...I go away for few days and look what happens.😆

Never say never behna, looks like the magic is still there as well as hope.😉

Anyhow this is a fantastic start, and yeah behna once again you brought tears to my eyes.

I could imagine the whole scene playing out in front of my eyes, I never imagined their love story to be anything like this, not this intense, but you did wonders with it as always.

Sakshi' pain and helplessness was palpable but so was his. If she is in pain because of his rejection and betrayal his pain is no less at being away from her, poor misguided soul, wish he had thought hard before making a life altering decision.

But as you say, the muskil prem khanis are the best kind and this is no different.

As always it was perfect, loved it.👏

Please do continue soon.

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nikki.171

@nikki.171

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Posted: 12 years ago

#34

This was so sad but so intense as well.

Waiting for the second part !

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Sia

@satanslove

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Posted: 12 years ago

#35

Chalo Surprise mat ho main hi hoon !!!

Calender main time book kiya hai to read all PMs

Yeh kya tha ...Marriage se phele Arjun ji Udan choo...One fatka from my end and u know where 😉

But Honestly Gabbar Loved it ...and dekhan jaye toh me not surprised tht he ran away ...he is such a broken man with so many doubts on himself ..where he loved ones are concerned ...

Hope Sakshi does a good SYS to him ...and ek do fatka mare ...

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Nazneen

@naz_2012

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#36

amazing concept... so arjun left.. n sakshi is hurt..hmm.. eagerly waiting to read wat happens nxt...cont soon... 😊 😊

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Farheen Shaikh

@ll-Farheen-ll

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Posted: 12 years ago

#37

Again an intense one from you.👍🏼Cant point my fingers on Arjun of him thinking that he is a curse to the loved ones closed to him but yes leaving a girl just before her marraige is something not acceptable i felt.So Saakshi's action is justified for more than one reason i guess

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Avantika

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Posted: 12 years ago

#38

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Avantika

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Posted: 12 years ago

#39

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Sakshi

@SAKSHI..

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Posted: 12 years ago

#40

res/unres..
Sorry for reserving the first comment itself for soo long...!!
Coming to your update...
Wow it was really amazing...!!!
JUst loved it to the core...
Happy ending...!!! The more you made me cry last night the more m happy today after reading this update...
It was really amazing...
they manner in which you describe the whole atmosphere ...its just amazing...
I know its fiction but mind you all the time i felt as if all this was happening infront of me...
Loved the ending it was just superb...!!!
Thank you for this amazing story...!!!
😊.

Edited by SAKSHI.. - 12 years ago