Arakshi Two-Shot: Make you feel my love - 2 (Pg.6) 23/9 - Page 3

awesome story
every emotions n state of mind
was beautifully written
both must have suffered a lot
in their own ways
poor sakshi
the strong n smiling girl
was completely shattered
while arjun was no better
keeping himself away from her
too hurt him
thanks for pm
cont soon

OMG..am just speechless...
May be for 5 to 10 mins I was silent after reading this part of story..
And believe me..I generally chirp more than Sakshi..
Okk...I have started breathing now..so I can comment..
This is the first time I have read any of your story...
Ab mujhe na marna joote chappal se..
Ab you know na you hardly post anything in AF...and I am completely new to this forum...
Since last 2 months only...I normally saw you commenting in other's stories. .
Ab maar hi do joote se..I dont mind...
Dear I cannot count simply that how many different emotions I have encountered with while reading this story..
And after encountering with each shade of emotions in every paragraph, I just felt helpless to meet the next one...
Yaar itna jyada rulaya tumne mujhe..tomorrow I have to submit one assignment paper in dept..
And I dont think I will be able to submit...
Trust me my eyes have become more red and swollen than Sakshi's..
You have made me feel shattered when Sakshi shattered actually. ..
You have made me cry when Sakshi was crying. ..
You have made me feeling ruined when Shakshi was left by Arjun...
Even you have made me feel Arjun's love and agonising love when Sakshi felt the same...
Blush blush blush...though painful..
I dont know if every damage is repairable. ..
If it is, may in next update of this story you will make it possible. ..
Actually its Sakshi's love probably will do more to heel her..
Because for me any attempt from Arjun's side will fall insufficient. ...
Yes..I may be vaguely can imagine how shattered he feels everytime to memorise the pain in the eyes of his beloved wife...with this pain vivid inside may be its not possible for him to give himself to somebody else...
OMG...how will things be sorted...
Sorry for my long bakwas comments. ..
If you are still reading it, dear ab toh samajh hi gayi hongi k i am actually pleading u to update...
Haan house job sab kuch sambhal k update kar dena...
Plz plz plz..

awesome story avantika
Just fabulous and perfectly written
Great job avantika... Loved it
Thanx a lot 4 d pm sweety 😃

Wow...great start.
All emotions so brilliantly written...am so looking forward to the next update
Plsss PM me if possible

u r back!!!missed ur updates

res unres on page 11.

U R BLESSED...!!

yeah...u r blessed with a fantabulous talent of writing..

all ur stories makke me feel as if i m living thm...nd they r happening jst infrnt of my eyes...nd this is no diff...

awsm OS...now waiting for th part 2...

specially loved the POVs of both sakshi nd arjun...

continue soon

thnx for th pm...



love
Aisha

well coneected to my heart!!!!

superb update
it was sooo emotional
awww that was amazimg
loved it soo much
continue soon
can't wait for more

unresd my comment on page 3...
sorry for the delay...act i read few lined n got dt i need time to read this...in peace n properly so...
😊