Arakshi Two-Shot: Make you feel my love - 2 (Pg.6) 23/9

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diw9

@diw9

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#71

this is the third work of yours which i am reading.other two are the running ff on this forum.this OS was high on emotions and writers have always shown arjun going mad and crazy over his lovely ladies but it for the first time its the other way round.

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..sweetchilly..

@..sweetchilly..

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#72

I wanted to read the next chapter too soonish but couldn't make through it..so just finished the story.
Do I need to tell how the story was..?
I don't think so..phir v bol hi deti hun;) :p
It was amazing and wonderful..
uh huh:: how can I forget to say that it's romantic *blinking the eyes dramatically*
Arjun-Shakshi together..I had already said that Arjun will clearify everything and make over it.
Yeah, and it happened the same...
~how brilliant of me~
*pats her back*[:p] [:d]
It was awesome.
Beautiful:)
Loved it to the core..<3

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Unknown

@AnatomyAddict

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#73

oola😃!

Boy wasn't that intense!! Loved it! Loved it! Loved it! Loved it!... Kudos to you didu... You write romance so beautifully... Read both the parts in one go & boy do I need a tissue! It was so heartbreaking in the start & then fluffy in the end... Loved it to bits❤️🤗!!!

Another thing didu, I'm supposed to be inactive during october till november the 12th.. Studies and all... So kindly don't send me PMs... I won't be able to read and comment (i think you have realised this by now, since I haven't any of your PMs up.. sorry for that😳)... I'll catch up after the 12th nov though😃😃...

Thanks & Awesome, Lovely, Romantic OS👏

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Nida

@Gurmeet4Drashti

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#74

Hey ...

It was just fantastic ... As usual ;)

The first part was just heartbreaking ... <\3

I honestly had tears stinging in my eyes when I read the pain and hell poor Sakshi had to go through ... :('

But then ofcourse the happy ending brought a huge grin on my face ... :D

Thanks for the pm :)

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Anu

@anu91

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#75

👏.👏..👏.👏.👏.👏.👏.👏👏.

🤗.🤗.🤗.🤗.

awesome and amazing OS dr...u written so well...sakshi hurt and arjun lossing sakshi again...there patch was out of words u described well dr...ending was so superb...

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sneha

@snehaluvmaaneet

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#76

U made me cry so muchh

this Two shot was soo emotional and intense

hayee bichari sakshi

and arjun ka pain insecurities

u have so perfectly

no words to explain

hats off

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Amrita Malhotra

@Amritamalhotra

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#77

Hi dear..sorry for commenting so late..

am hell engrossed in studies these days..exam time pressure..

yes dear.. by now I know that you write in AF also...

waiting for my exam to end and to start reading them from very first part..

I am not exactly Arakshi fan...

I am at first Arjun fan...I am happy to see him happy with any girl..😊

Roshni, Riya Sakshi Aisha or anyone else...absolutely doesnt matter as long as he is happy..

Coming to the story..dear what was this???

am shell shocked..shaken to the core...so emotional this was...

while reading the 1st part I was thinking how Sakshi would believe this man ever again...

but girls are girls...and love is love..

"It flies in the face of all your pride
it moves away the mad inside
it's always anger's own worst enemy
even when the jury and the judge
say you gotta right to hold a grudge
it's the whisper in your ear saying set It free
forgiveness, forgiveness
show me how to love the unlovable
show me how to reach the unreachable
help me now to do the impossible
forgiveness, forgiveness
help me now to do the impossible forgiveness"
OMG..How beautifully you have made Sakshi to forgive her man..

it seems that she was just waiting for him to come to her again to complete her...

she was drowning and floating on her own...

its just the man to know how deep he had damaged her...

I can very well understand the "Arjun" as well as you have portrayed him here...

Drowning drowning drowning...deep down...

but he gave up his last chance to escape...

to not complicate the life of the girl he eventually fell in love..2nd time...

his understanding of the damage he made and his compensation..

OMG..again so deeply narrated..

"so if you're feeling lonely, don't
you're the only one I ever want.
I only wanna make it good
so if I love you a little more than I should...
please forgive me, I know not what I do.
please forgive me, I cant stop loving you
dont deny me, this pain I'm going through
please forgive me if I need you like I do
please believe me every word I say is true
please forgive me I cant stop loving you"

huh!!!you have made me understand these two favorite songs of mine differently..just now...

and whats this!!...this was the lengthiest comment I made in this forum till date...

longer than some OS...

sorry if u are bored now...

but needless to say dear I have started waiting for your next story..

you have promised to post "soonish"...right??

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floral

@floral

Trailblazer

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#78

wow it was an awesome update i just loved it to the core of my heart please do continue soon and thanks for the pm dear😛😛

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Geeta

@Geeta.R

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#79

Diii awesome two shot yaar...

My box of tissues came out!!

Loved sakshis outburst it was well justified...bechari didnt want to hurt him but was necessary he felt what he had put her through even though he went through the same by being far away from her..

And when she forgave him and the romance was beautiful thannnkkk yooouuu xxx