Arakshi Two-Shot: Make you feel my love - 2 (Pg.6) 23/9 - Page 2

Hello hi happiness.. bye bye Sadness. 😉

superb
excellent writing
u made me cry 😭
brilliant 👍🏼

I m speechless...
You really left me tongue tied...
The pain of Sakshi was expressed beautifully.
It touched my heart.
Lovely.
Please continue soon.
Do pm me.

Loved it di...
Would love to see Arjun filling his lady love's heart with his love again..

reserved../ unres...
Sorry for replying late...
coming to your story...
WOW...it was really amazing...!!!!
Just loved it...
As far as i can remeber in all the stories i have read so far...there was a time when i felt bad for Sakshi OR i felt bad for Arjun...i mean it used to fluctuate all the time from story to story and from update to update...but this is one story in which i felt bad for ARAKSHI...really...
It was soo emotional...!!!!
I really felt bad for Sakshi ...she just cared and thought for HIM...she was soo selfless...her going to his place...lighting the lamp...waiting for him...well wn i was reading and imagining it was like no dnt imagine you have to sleep also...
Then Arjun's POV was also sooo well written...not his fault also...I really felt really felt bad for this man...in your story...i was actually crying for his condition... felt like please i really hope someone like him nver did or nvr evr will exist in reality...if ever they show smtng lyk ds in d shw ill drp d idea of seeing it...(though wid ur next update ill re join..) bt will nvr see ACPArjun like this...
You have got awesome writing skills...loved your story very much...
😊

Very intense and interesting, love to see where you take it

Awesome...
Really very emotive...

Poor Sakshi...but she faced the facts of her life maturely...
Impressive...
Ohh..!!! He fled just one before their wedding day...
Whatever may be the reasons I think its not excusable...
He had no rights to crush her dreams and expectations like that..

Hope the complicacy will be erased very soon...
Cont.soon...

Avni avni..that was soo emotional..sakshi has gone through soo much in these two years...and Arjun has gone not through less also..both have suffered soo much during this time...please please continue soon dear...i just loove it very much 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

woww so emotional story ...👏.. sakshi poor condition 😵... continue soon 👍🏼