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Posted: 12 years ago
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Finally!
I managed to end the story which I had a wonderful time imagining and

expressing. Hope everyone enjoyed it too😊.

Here goes the last part. Looking forward to comments,especially your

interpretations of scenes,emotions,dialogues. I think that is what makes

art so exciting..that the audience is as much a part of it as the creator!

So do let me know your opinions if possible.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Part 6-The end


"Lets do it guys!,Today itself." said Saakshi in an enthusiastic tone. The

others felt all charged up. They too were compelled to do it from within.

It was not an obligation, nor a part of their job. Logically speaking it

seemed like a crazy idea, but no one wanted to hear their mind,it was

their hearts holding the reins at the moment. And it seemed like luck

was on their side too because they had no case to solve on that day.

As if life had suddenly decided to stop being so unfair to Arjun, and

graciously agreed to give him a better birthday this year.


And so they got to work. They had very little time and a lot to do. But

passion sees one through in such times. And so four individuals put

their heart,mind and soul into the task they had undertaken and by evening

they were done.


It was 8 p.m in the evening and they waited patiently in the ETF head

quarter's parking lot. They wished their chief was here too, for they

knew one hug from him could do much more for Arjun than all their

efforts put together, but they admitted that it was asking for too much.

Right now they just hoped that Arjun did not choose this as one of

those nights to spend in his cabin. That would ruin everything!


But very soon,they heard him coming. The brisk walk of the morning

had turned into a slow dragging of feet in the evening. Arjun suddenly

stopped and saw a piece of folded paper on the bonnet of his car. He

felt a tinge of familiar irritation and thought-surely his team had not

dared to give him a birthday card. But as he inched closer he saw that

it contained a drawing. A flag,a police officer in uniform and a little boy

saluting him. Below it was a name scribbled-..Raju. He looked up and

saw the boy he had saved from child traffickers. He saw his eyes

gleaming with happiness as the boy approached him and held his

hands. Arjun suddenly found himself to be surrounded by a lot of kids.

He realized that these were the kids from Sharada Devi Ashram when

he saw Rama approaching with her year old baby. The kid whom he

had saved from an unimaginable cruelty. He felt a pat on his shoulder

and turned around to see Sheen standing. She was the only one who

still managed to arouse some tender affections in him. He noticed her

bright eyes full of life as she hugged him, and shuddered to think what

a nightmare her existence would have been had he not managed to

rescue her. Gradually a lot of people started to surround him. Acp Arjun

never forgot a face and he recognized each one of them. The

kidnapped boy...Bunty with his parents, the kid he saved from the

psycho Austin,the ganikas from Swami Vishvanand's ashram,

Sandy-the boy trapped in the web of cricket betting, parents of

Meera-the girl burnt alive, Sanjay-whose entire family was murdered in

his house.Aarti's father who had lost her in a dowry death case...so

many random people containing one common emotion in their

eyes-GRATITUDE. For saving some of their lives or getting justice

for their loved ones.


It was a sight worth recording,and had anyone of the ETF members

managed to keep a dry eye,their phones would have been out. But

they too were overwhelmed with a scene so rare... Arjun surrounded

by excited children who wanted to share so much with him. And he

actually paid attention to their chattering,patting them lovingly and

occasionally flashing the remains of what had once been his smile. He

noticed that the little baby was bending towards him and he moved

forward to take him in his arms. The baby was visibly sleepy and put

his head on Ajun's chest and nuzzled. The moment his tender hands

touched Arjun's heart,something stirred within. He stiffened up as he

suddenly became aware of his heart beats,he heard himself breathing,

and just realized-that he was still ALIVE.


He saw some of the adults approaching him with folded hands and

immediately stopped them from any display of emotions. But he could

not help feeling satisfied. By saving their loved ones or getting them

justice,he had at least prevented them from becoming another Arjun

Rawte. And this was why, in spite of his job being the cause of almost

all he had lost in his life from the very beginning,he was disillusioned

with everything but never his profession.

Prayers,friends,relationships,love...all lost their significance in his life,

but his uniform..his oath still stood respected.This was re-established

as he silently stood and saw how he had managed to provide so many

strangers with hopes,dreams,peace,security and most importantly a

future.He realized that -his existence actually mattered. It had

played a significant part in each of their lives.


And he was suddenly seized by a strange sort of peace-it dawned

upon him that-

Roshini would have been so proud of him today.


In spite of the the fact that he was unable to avenge her death,being

the selfless women she was,he could imagine the pride she would

have felt today seeing all those who had been helped by his services.

And for the first time in many years,instead of her haunted, suffering,

lifeless eyes...he was visited by her silently smiling,appreciating,proud

eyes...And suddenly time stood still and space was echoing with

silence in spite of so much of noise. He felt as if he had established a

contact with her beyond the realm of this world. A moment which lasted

for a second but felt like eternity.


He soon regained his awareness of the surroundings and glanced at

his watch ; saw that it was time for everyone to go home. He also saw a

reflection on the side glass of his car. His team hiding behind a

vehicle. So, they had actually managed to make it an

occasion worth celebrating . He knew that this night was not enough to

compensate for all that had been snatched from his life, but he really

was touched by their attempt to provide him with one night of peace,

and wanted them to know it. He took a post-it from his car and scribbled

something on it but was having trouble seeing as his vision was

blurred by his moist eyes.


The ETF team suddenly saw him walking towards them and became

alert. But to their surprise he just walked past them. They were slightly

confused by his behavior and also by their own reactions . After all,

there was nothing to be hurt about, what exactly did they expect Arjun

to do? But soon they realized that he had actually done the best he

could do. They had not noticed him sticking something on the glass of

the car they were hiding behind,as he walking towards them.

They all crowded around it and stood there, speechless, staring at the

fluttering piece of paper.

It contained just two words-THANK YOU.

But the ink had been smudged with his tear drop. And it said what

millions of words could not have.


They immediately turned around just in time to see the outline of the

man walking into the darkness. But for some strange reason,it did not

seem very dark. Almost as if some light had managed to enter his life.

And they knew that his wounds were still fresh,but hopefully they had

prevented him from scratching it further...

<The End>




Edited by Sadhana_pr - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#43
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Superb
Excellent
&
Beautiful

please try to write more stories ...
u r an excellent writer 👍🏼
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Posted: 12 years ago
#44

Originally posted by: shreya09

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Superb
Excellent
&
Beautiful

please try to write more stories ...
u r an excellent writer 👍🏼

Thanks a lot. Really touched.

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Posted: 12 years ago
#45
WOW...!!!!!!!!!!!!!
M SPEECHLESSS...!!
It was not Arakshi...ITwas not Ariya it was not arni...
It was just ARJUN !!! And this was the best part of your story...
Really loved your story...m sad that this was the last part...BUT whatever it was ITS just amazing !!!
It was really emotional...touching and what not...
Will always remember this story ...ALWAYS...you are undoubtedly a very good writer...
Just awesome ...
Lastly, THANK YOU for this beautiful story...!! ( I mean more than my words...really ..)
😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#46

Originally posted by: SAKSHI..

WOW...!!!!!!!!!!!!!
M SPEECHLESSS...!!
It was not Arakshi...ITwas not Ariya it was not arni...
It was just ARJUN !!! And this was the best part of your story...
Really loved your story...m sad that this was the last part...BUT whatever it was ITS just amazing !!!
It was really emotional...touching and what not...
Will always remember this story ...ALWAYS...you are undoubtedly a very good writer...
Just awesome ...
Lastly, THANK YOU for this beautiful story...!! ( I mean more than my words...really ..)
😊

Thank you,once again.
I started watching Arjun just three months ago,and as much as I respect the pairs,none of them were the reason for me to have continuously watched so many episodes in a day to catch up from the beginning😉 The reason was Acp Arjun Rawte . So, it is only fair that he remains the center of my stories. Moreover, I thought that surely one of the best written characters on television could actually , alone make a compelling story even without a counterpart in particular 😊

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Posted: 12 years ago
#47

Its entirely my pleasure...
Yes ..we all watch arjun mainly because of THE ARJUN SURYAKANT RAWTE...!!
Though now my personal favourite is Sakshi Anand...because of some personal reasons...BUT ARJUN was is and will always be my all time favourite...infact OUR favourite...and i totally agree with you on that part...its totally fair to write a complete story on The man himself...but i must say its very difficult aswell...and you have written it sooo well ..sooo.. HATS OFF TO YOU !!!
😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#48
This was beautiful. I can't think of a better birthday surprise for Arjun.
Loved this story. Do write more.😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#49
I dont know what to say now...this much emotive update...

Its a perfect ending...
One of the best stories I ever read in AF...
I can never be an interpreter for this work...because I think
this is the most beautifully clarified version...nothing more to say...even a simple "thank you"
contains lots of emotions beyond just a phrase of gratitude...

The effort taken by you is visible...you keenly observed the show and thats really worth
appreciation...very nice...

Thank you for this awesome work and expecting more from you in future...
Edited by mital276 - 12 years ago
Sadhana_pr thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
#50

Originally posted by: mital276

I dont know what to say now...this much emotive update...

Its a perfect ending...
One of the best stories I ever read...
I cnt never be an interpreter for this work...because I think
this is the most beautifully clarified version...nothing more to say...even a simple "thank you"
contains lots of emotions beyond just a phrase of gratitude...

The effort taken by you is visible...you keenly observed the show and thats really worth
appreciation...very nice...

Thank you for this awesome work and expecting more from you in future...




Honestly,I am beginning to get red with embarrassment 😳. Thanks a lot for taking out time to comment.

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