story: Mujhko ye zindagi_last part pg 25 - Page 19

Divi 🤗
thankuwa fr d awesumwa cment
wel u r visualising d scene
cracked me up sry
pari beta sry i knw bahut mehnat lgi thi wo likhne me 🤣
Agree d lines r grt <3
my sweetu rocks in d genre of writing heart touching scenes
awwie u gng to mis it wow
thanku
glad u like it
meant a lot to us..!!

Originally posted by: Payal_156

Divi 🤗
thankuwa fr d awesumwa cment
wel u r visualising d scene
cracked me up sry
pari beta sry i knw bahut mehnat lgi thi wo likhne me 🤣
Agree d lines r grt <3
my sweetu rocks in d genre of writing heart touching scenes
awwie u gng to mis it wow
thanku
glad u like it
meant a lot to us..!!

Originally posted by: devildiva21

my pleasure girl😉😳

yupz me will gonna miss this😃

Aww 🤗
Bro sis relationship <3

Yet another painfull update angel.
Payal acted very bravely , wow she is a undercover agent too! She played both the role very well, as a officer and as a sister !
I really couldn't imagine the pain, and the sufferings she have gone through!
But I liked the part, thought she was immensly hurt physically, she mouch more strong mentally!

The dialogue, " kitna tadpaoge ..aur tadpao.. Ab toh ye dard sehne mai bhi maza aata hai.." truely indicates this fact!

In between the rakshabandhan flashback is dubble dhamaka!

Awesome plot of the story didu, and brilliantly portrayed by angel! Wow!

Tht ba****d sik, hell with him! Arjun too was there with her!

And i am really scraed for reading the next part eh!
Do not let anything happen to payal yaar!

Okay now going for the difficult part!

Oh thank god! It was a happy ending! Really enjoyed reading this part! Truely define the relation of a brother and a sister ! Sam and ayesha reached in the correct time! Oh so she was just a buisness official! Cool!
And sam-jun too were nice!

Fantastic execution you and awesome plot didu!
Why ur stories are very short!

PS- still missing Dua badly!

Thanks for the PM!

Originally posted by: Vampire-queen

Yet another painfull update angel.
Payal acted very bravely , wow she is a undercover agent too! She played both the role very well, as a officer and as a sister !
I really couldn't imagine the pain, and the sufferings she have gone through!
But I liked the part, thought she was immensly hurt physically, she mouch more strong mentally!

The dialogue, " kitna tadpaoge ..aur tadpao.. Ab toh ye dard sehne mai bhi maza aata hai.." truely indicates this fact!

In between the rakshabandhan flashback is dubble dhamaka!

Awesome plot of the story didu, and brilliantly portrayed by angel! Wow!

Tht ba****d sik, hell with him! Arjun too was there with her!

And i am really scraed for reading the next part eh!
Do not let anything happen to payal yaar!

Okay now going for the difficult part!

thank u vampu
yup thoda painful tha
glad u like it
pari rocks!!

anki aka vampu ss pe to cment ni milte ff to dur ki baat h
ss hi theek h
atlast we change d end 😉
glad u like it
ps. masterpiece tha wo

perfect ending dear..
eagerly waiting for yet another story from u asap...

Aww... I wish I had a big brother like Arjun!! I love his character so much..!! in fact.. he is My brother..!

Originally posted by: Arjunkibehen

Aww... I wish I had a big brother like Arjun!! I love his character so much..!! in fact.. he is My brother..!

(ARJUN is my brother huh! NOT SHALEEN!😉)

awwie glad u like it
n we both a real bro as well
bt we both asume sha n arjun both as bro lol