story: Mujhko ye zindagi_last part pg 25 - Page 20

Beautifulllyyy Penned down Pari...Shoorryy fr d late cmnt..!! At Last Payal is Saved n dat Sik got what he deserved..!! Awwwieee...Arjun-Payal Momentz wre sooo cute...had tearz in my eyez when Arjun sang fr Payal...N bful poem by Payaliyu..!! Thanxx 4 pming me such bful work Payaliyu n Pari..Gonna miss dis one..lovd it!!!!

First of all sorry for the late comment😳😳😳😳

Was stuck up with a few things... personal issues aur mere favourite BK k jane ki news... i'm heart broken 🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺

But as promised... here is my lamba wala comment

First of all Pari...A big Hug to you ... for changing the story... 🤗

This new update is really amazing... I'm in love with this complete story now...👏👏

Long back when i discussed this concept with Payal... i thought of two possibilities... u created the third one and this is the best among the three - "Payal following foot steps of her brother and becoming a police officer herself angering her dad" 👍🏼

Superb idea 👍🏼

Payal marrying Pranav... fighting with Arjun for him... was really an interesting start 👍🏼

And Payal being the eyewitness of Roshni's murder was the most shocking thing... i never expected that... beautifully conceptualized... 👍🏼

Flashbacks were simply cute... the bonding between bro-sis was presented so beautifully... it was so warm... even their cute fights were touching... 🤗

Payal gathering the proofs and sending them to Sam and Arjun realizing it was another jhatka 😲

And then Pranav finds it out ... i hated him when he was beating Payal 😡😡😡

But finally Arjun is here... i loved the part where Arjun beats Pranav and then Payal coming in to save her bro... 🤗🤗

And my most favourite part... hospital scene... Papa Rawte realisd the worth of both his kids... and family re-united...🤗

i was touched when Arjun was talking to Payal when she was unconscious. Remembering all their good moments...🤗

I was so happy when Payal came back to senses... and the Rakhi scene actually brought tears to my eyes... so sweet of Shree that he picked up the Rakhi and gave it to Sam and Sam too was a sweet heart ... he got that rakhi for Payal... and Payal tied the rakhi to Arjun...😭😭😭😭😭

And the song... ek hazaron mein meri behna hai... cute... 🤗

Originally posted by: ShanayaShaleen

Beautifulllyyy Penned down Pari...Shoorryy fr d late cmnt..!! At Last Payal is Saved n dat Sik got what he deserved..!! Awwwieee...Arjun-Payal Momentz wre sooo cute...had tearz in my eyez when Arjun sang fr Payal...N bful poem by Payaliyu..!! Thanxx 4 pming me such bful work Payaliyu n Pari..Gonna miss dis one..lovd it!!!!

awwie thankyou shanaya dear for d lovely cment
glad u like it
yup bhai behen ka rishta h hi anmol <3

@bhavna di hugs
aww love ur lamba wala comment
glad u lov it
somwhere ur headache motivates us to change d plot
yup having tears bt happy wala
hmm ehmmh sng one of our fav
we love u too...
yup we all r upset wid d news of bk ji leaving
very happy dat u cmented

You have done a fantastic job of this story my pyari didus :-) take a bow yaar...

the sweetest brother-sister bond ... beautifully showed .

Originally posted by: shreya09

the sweetest brother-sister bond ... beautifully showed .

loved the cute flashbacks... they were lovely
pranav😡
so Payal was collecting proofs against pranav... excellent concept
loved the ending
beautiful poem .
a very much nicely written story
superb👏👏

p.s. Payal dear, i am jealous of you😈

well again u r d one who r jealous of me lol
awwie bro sis really have a beautiful bond
i know n understand cos i hv my big bro in real too
waiting for ur action wala lol sys
thanks a lot sis
meant a lot