story: Mujhko ye zindagi_last part pg 25

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princess2507

@princess2507

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#161

I m sad that this awsome story ended
But it was a perfect ending!!
It was such an emotional ending!!!
Thanks for such a wonderful story pari and payal!!!

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Aabish_02

@Aabish_02

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#162

awesome ending
loved it
payal save
loved the convo of arjun and payal
the poem was amazing
waiting for ur more stories

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Amit

@Swaronvrushan

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#163

Hey beautiful penned down...
loved the concept a lottt...bro n sis relation is indeed very special no doubt...
payal is a great sis...she has married that cruel man to get justice for her bhabhi..really loved her a lot...
lovdd the innocence n exitement shown by payal while tyeing rakhi on arjuns hand...n also loved the love poured by arjun on her...
keep writing ...u r indeed a good writer...
eagerly waiting for yet another story from u asap...

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Anu

@anu91

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#164

lovely and perfect ending for brother and sister bonding...

advance happy rakshabandhan...

Edited by anu91 - 12 years ago

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-Carrie-

@-Carrie-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#165

Ufff! Thank Pari & Payal that Payal is safe & back with her loving family.Most of all Arjun got his Gudiya again 👏😃 So happy!

Loved what you guys said about Bhai-Behan rishta.I got two older ones & though ours is not a very demonstrative relationship still I know I am foremost on their minds.They worry themselves silly over my safety & make sure my bhabhis treat me well😆 Not to mention the fat bundles of cash for Eid & birthdays😉

Happy rakshbandhan to all😊

Thank you for an awesome story!Loved it!🤗

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Payal Goel

@Payal_156

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Posted: 12 years ago

#166

Originally posted by: -Carrie-

Ufff! Thank Pari & Payal that Payal is safe & back with her loving family.Most of all Arjun got his Gudiya again👏😃So happy!


Loved what you guys said about Bhai-Behan rishta.I got two older ones & though ours is not a very demonstrative relationship still I know I am foremost on their minds.They worry themselves silly over my safety & make sure my bhabhis treat me well😆Not to mention the fat bundles of cash for Eid & birthdays😉


Happy rakshbandhan to all😊


Thank you for an awesome story!Loved it!🤗

zuby ji 🤗
Bhai behen ka rishta hota hi itna pyara h no mater hw much we fought at d end we r sharing a beautiful bond ;)
wel rakshabandhan n bhai dhuj my fav
gift milta h re lol
frm ur cment we cmplete 200 cments yay
glad u liked it
thanku sis..

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Anika_VR

@Anika_PreRish

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#167

Emotional and lovely ending.
Will miss this story a lot.
Great concept and beautifully executed by Pari.
Hats off...
Sorry,couldnt comment on some previous parts.
Will do that in a short time.
Bhai Behen ka rishta sabse anokha rishta hota.
Happy Advance RakshaBandhan