story: Mujhko ye zindagi_last part pg 25

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Posted: 12 years ago
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hey everyone...
i am back to much on your brain as always😆
well this time back with my Didu, payal...

frst thing first..
i thank all who liked, commented on Dua, our first work together.
i hope you like this too...😳

this story is hatke...
i mean different...
concept by Payal didu and presented in words by me aka aapki Pari...

read at your own risk, and yes feel free to throw anything and everything at...not me but DIDU...
its completely her idea...😉😆😆

oki... well if you want pm then add me in buddy list... 1st part, i ll pm to all those in didu's buddy list and also mine... so you may see two pms on same story...😛😆
aage ke parts only for those in my buddy list so DO add me...😳

i had to say something else also...
i forgot...😛😕
well, if you are not interested please ignore or say that in a pm please...and feel free to bash didu...😆
silent readers hit like atleast please... it will lift our spirits...😉
if you comment that will make us more happy...
i have whole story with me and didu instructed me to discontinue if there is no enough response... i ll do that...😛

ah i remembers...
payal didu's message: this will be posted in twitter...😃😃😳

scroll down for character sketch and part 1...

with love:
pari and payal❤️


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Posted: 12 years ago
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here goes part 1...
happy reading... 😊
Banner by Didu...😊
Bhavna di thanks for the link😊
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Page 3: Hind Times

'India's most sought Entrepreneur Mr. Pranav Rai is said to be no more bachelor. You read it right gossip lovers. Handsome, dashing, cool Pranav has officially confirmed his marriage with the M.D of Raute Group, miss. Payal Raute, daughter of Mr. Suryakant Raute. It is said that the couple are in relationship from past 3 years and today they are entering the wedlock. This marriage will definitely bring fortune to both the companies. When we spoke to miss Payal, she confirmed the news. Wedding will be taking place at Raute mansion...'

"what the hell?! Arjun threw the paper on the table, making every ETF member turn their head towards him.

"she... she cant do this..."

"Arjun whats wrong?! Kya hai usme aur who cant do what?" ACP Sameer Rathod asked in confusion.

"Payal. She is getting married. Read this.."

Arjun passed the paper to sameer and ran hand through his hair.

"Arjun..."

"I need to go. I need to stop her. He is not the right guy for her..."

Without listening to anyone, Arjun rushed out of ETF.

~~~

Arjun ran towards his sister's room ignoring words from his father.

He saw his sister sitting all decked up in bridal finery, looking at her henna adored hands.

"Payal..." he called her, signaling others to leave them alone.

"bhaiyya..."

Payal went to him and hugged him tight.

"I thought you would never come..." a tear escaped her eye.

"aapko hi mera kanyadaan karna hai bhaiyya..."

Her words were cut when her pulled him away from her.

"kyon kar rahi ho ye Payal?"

"kya bhaiyya?"

"ye shaadi. Tumne kaha tha ki you will let me choose a suitable boy for you. Oopar se you did not even tell me. I had to find out this through some paper." His voice raised a notch higher.

Bhaiyya wo... main aapko batane waali thi..."

"kab tumhare aur uske 2 bacche hone ke baad?!"

She flinched at his tone.

"bhai I love him... I want to spend my life..."

"spend your life with a bloody murderer right!!!!"

"bhai you are mistaken. He is not..."

"I know that I am right Payal. He is the one who is suspected to the the alleged sikander who killed YOUR BHABHI... i don't have enough proofs to put him behind bars warna..."

Payal wiped her tears and shouted at Arjun.

"ENOUGH BHAI... BOHUT HOGAYA. Pranav se main pyaar karti hun aur uske khilaaf kuch nahin sunungi. Bhabhi ke maut aapki wajah se hui hai naaki ki Pranav ne unhe maara. Aap bhabhi ke kaatil ho naaki Pranav. Wo bhi mujhse utna hi pyaar karta hai jitna main usse karti hun. Aur hume koi juda nahin kar sakta. Aap bhi nahin. Samjhe aap?"

Her face was completely red after her outburst at Arjun. He stood completely still, letting each word to absorb in his mind. He could not believe that his little sister said those words.

"tumhi wo thi Payal jisne kaha tha ki chahe koi bhi ho jisne roshni ko maara, hum milke saza denge. Aur aaj tumhi..."

"Pranav is my life"

"he is a murderer"

"he is not. Please get out..."

"Payal... listen to me baccha... its about your lif...""

"I said GET OUT mr. Arjun Raute."

Arjun stood numb. Her eyes held fury in them, desperation. Roshni's body drenched in her own blood flashed in his mind. Anger gripped his whole being and his voice turned to steel.

"aaj se mera aur tumhara, koi rishta nahin hai Payal. You are dead to me. Meri pyaari behan Payal aaj mere liye mar chuki hai..."

Arjun spun on his heels and marched out of the room completely ignoring grim expression on his dad's face.

~~~

Payal sat next to Pranav in mandap... he held her hand asked.

"are you ok? I heard your brother came..."

"yeah..."

"he hates me. Don't he?"

"he has just misunderstood you Pranav... and nothing matters more than you to me...

Not even him..." she closed her eyes as tears threatened to fall.

Soon the wedding rituals were done and she was officially Mrs. Payal Pranav Rai and no more her brother's darling.. she went to the Rai mansion, seeing happiness in her father's eyes and missing the person she loved most.

~~~

The wedding had made buzz in the entire media.

Arjun was beyond furious. He felt helpless. He knew his sister had made a great error in judging a person. He had to protect her. But what could he do? She herself chose a wrong person. She had known the entire lengths that he went to trace his wife's murderer what he came to know was just a name Sikander and possible person behind that name, now his sister's husband, Mr. Pranav Rai. He did not want her suffer. But if this is their fate, he has no choice but to hurt his sister.

He recalled how he had found Roshni's body, and the image was replaced by the image of his sister in wedding finery.

"AAARRRGGHHH!!!!!!!" he threw the paper weight to the window and swiped the table tumbling the contents down. He was feeling helpless, same feeling of losing someone, that he had felt not many months back.


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next part soonish... if we get good response...😃😳


Edited by princess_pari - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Yeh PP's welcome back...just brilliant piece again..
great start...Arjun and Payal head strong and against each other...😭
Loved the dhamaka already..waiting to know how their lives will turn and what are incidents coming up..
cont soon..

it is awesome!!
Edited by prava55663 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Unres 😊

This is comment is for u Pari 🤗
For the story:
Beautifully developed the concept 😊 ...
A dhamakedar start to a superb story 😉...
Bhai-Behen ka confrontation was perfect... jaisa akdu bhai ... utni hi ziddi behen 👍🏼
Pranav Rai - iske rang abhi dikhne baki hain... so will wait for the next parts ...😉
Papa Rawte gusse mein...
Bhai ki marzi ke khilaf shadi to ho gayi... ab khel shuru hua hai...
Continue soon 🤗
Thanks a ton for shaping this concept in a beautiful way... 🤗
And Thanks for mentioning my name and liking my choices of actors... I hope Payal didn't force u to use them 😉
(maine apna credit le liya 😉😉😉... i'm so evil 😈 )
Now something just for you dear 😊
Finally tumhari Didu ne tumko fasa liya 😆😆😆
I'll share a piece of crap with u... jo Payal ne mujhse gunpoint par likhwaya tha ... isi concept par...aur maine gusse mein aakar... Payal ko torture karne liye... is concept ko barbad kar diya tha...😉😉😉
And thank god ki maine usey aagey nahi badhaya... 😳😳😳😳
Warna Payal ki band baj jati 😆😆😆😆😆 (wo to mai waise bhi Baja sakti hoon 😉😉😉😉)
Because coming from you, this is more beautiful... I simply loved it... looking forward for next part 😊
Love u 🤗
P.S.: Don't say thanks for the link... Happy to help 🤗
Edited by bgargate - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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This comment is for u Payal 😊

Concept was anyways beautiful jaisa ki hum bat kar chuke hain ... And Pari ne usey bahut dhamakedar banaya hai... 👏👏👏👏👏
You r so lucky ki Pari maan gayi isey develop karne ke liye...😉😉😉
Warna ... maine kya kya plan kiya tha... ye yaad hai na tumhe 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣
Koi baat nahi... fir kabhi apne evil plan to anjaam de dungi 😈😈😈😈😈😈
Ab tak to tum mujhe jaan hi gayi ho 😈😈😈😈😈😈
Yaad rakhna maine abhi SR, deshdrohi aur Bhains wala idea drop nahi kiya hai 😈😈😈😈😈😈
BTW, mai Pari ke saath humari Chat wali story share karungi 😉
Baki tuhari dusri Bhai-Behen wali story bhi tumko jaldi hi mil jayegi 👍🏼
Love u 🤗
Edited by bgargate - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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lovely update pari
new concept
loved it
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice starting
arjun sis married murderer of rosh
cont soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Welcome back my golden angel and didu 🤗 with another master piece 😉
don't talk abt DUA ! Missing that very badly

coming to this one! Again a very different concept didu and words portrayed by you is fantastic! 👏
so arjun just cane there for her and she didn't even listened him
this story is gona tough also!
Both for payal and arjun as well
and he, i mean KVB! 🤔
really involved with sik 😡
hmm this is gona a suspence and action thriller story ⭐️
loved it! And others too will love it!
Thanks for the double PM 🤗🤣
best of luck 👍🏼
Edited by Vampire-queen - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: prava55663

~~Edited...


Yeh PP's welcome back...just brilliant piece again..
great start...Arjun and Payal head strong and against each other...😭
Loved the dhamaka already..waiting to know how their lives will turn and what are incidents coming up..
cont soon..

it is awesome!!

thanks di...
glad you liked it...
ll post next part soon...

PS: you are from hubli?!

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