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Posted: 12 years ago
#31
Hopefully Sakshi will come soon and fill Arjuns life with live and happiness

Thanx for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
#32
awesome update
very emotional
continue soon…
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Part 3:

Morning 4

Ria's parents came

Ria's father-davesh and mother 'shalini mukerjee

Shalini:sameer beta ria teek haina ye sab vuski naatak haina Bandar apni birthday par bolane keliye ye sab natak kyun agar batha diya yha jidh kiya hum kudh ajathi vuski birthday par

This is a shock to sameer

Sam:aunty aaj ria ka birthday hain

Shalini:haan isiliye hum vuske man pasandh khana and gifts le ayi kaha hain who ane de vuse mein daant loongi

Davesh:shalini sambhalo ria abh nahi hain

Shali went to ria's room

Shalini:vuto naotnki vuto abh tera ye dramebaaj katham karo and dekh mein agayi naa vuto abh nahi vute naa tapad doongi ek

Sam and davesh dint know how to tell the mother that her daughter cant wake

Shali:vuto lagtha hain kumkarn bangayi meri beti

She droped whole jug of water on her but no response

Shalini is coming to her scenes but her heart is not beliving

Shalini:vut riyu vut

Shalini started beating riya and shaking her

Sam and davesh came and stopped her but she dint stop

Davesh gave a tight slap to shalini to bring her scenes back

Davesh shouting:shalini hamara beti abh nahi hain who mar chuki hain tum kuch bhi karo who waapas nahi asakthi hain

Shalini fell on davesh and cried

She became on conscious

Shree and chotu who came knowing about ariya came and saw all this

Even they cried seeing their dearest friend and mainly her mother

After some time shalini gained conscious

Davesh:waise arjun kaha hain

Sam told him all that happened pin to pin

Davesh:mein janthi hoon meri beti arjun ko kithna pyaar karthi hain aaj voh vuska kudh jaan bhi diya vuski pyaar ke liye mujhe garv hain apni beti aur apni beti ki pyaar par sameer arjun ka kyaal rakiye mein chalthi hoon

Sameer:uncle I will do the preperations for the last rites

Davesh:nahi sameer I will take her to kolkatha

Sameer:ok uncle

No one went with davesh as arjun's condition is still critical and seeing etf people shalini remembers about ria's sweet talks of her etf friends and mainly her love arjun

After a week arjun gained conscious and he asked for riya

Sameer:arjun tum chup chap let raho tum abhi abhi teek ho raha hain

Arjun:please sam ria kaise who teek haina

Sameer:haan who hain tum so jao

Arjun:tum jhoot bol raha hain

Sameer:haan jhoot bol raha hoonRIA TEEK NAHI HAIN MARGAYI HAIN

Sameer fell their and cried

Arjun shouted ria's name and fell unconscious

Sameer:arjun arjun kya huva tujhe vuto DR

Dr comes and says that he went into shock and he will wake up in a day or two

After 1 month arjun became normal

Arjun still sees ria smiling at him teasing him her stupid talks

Sam:arjun chalo soup pilo tumhe medicines lena hain

thanks for reading

i pmed most of the members if anyone want to get pm then post your comments on the update

davesh mukerjee:



shalini mukerjee:

Edited by sonycs001 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#34
my heart goes for riya:-(
she gave up her life to make sure Arjun lives...:-(
I was crying reading riya's parents reaction...
Shree and chotu bhi :-(
Now Arjun knows the truth...and now he is lost...
Very well done Sony...
u ahve penned down the emotions of each person very well
For u👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
#35

oh Ariya separated... plzzz don't do this nd get them together again...😭

Plzzz add me nd could u PM me the story... will read it after the 14th june if u PM me as I have got exams till then... nd will surely comment on it...

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Posted: 12 years ago
#36
Awesome update.
I am literally crying.
Please dont separate ariya.
Plsss.
Continue soon.
And thanx for pm.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#37

Originally posted by: rocking_gal

my heart goes for riya:-(

she gave up her life to make sure Arjun lives...:-(
I was crying reading riya's parents reaction...
Shree and chotu bhi :-(
Now Arjun knows the truth...and now he is lost...
Very well done Sony...
u ahve penned down the emotions of each person very well
For u👏

riya loves arjun a lot she cant see her arjun going away from her
so she herself went away to keep riya safe and sound
riya is the only daughter for mukerjees and seeing their sweet and energytic daughter being their lifelessly made the mother crazy
i tried my best in penning down the emotions and happy that you liked it
thanks for the comments
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Posted: 12 years ago
#38

Originally posted by: love-arhi

oh Ariya separated... plzzz don't do this nd get them together again...😭

Plzzz add me nd could u PM me the story... will read it after the 14th june if u PM me as I have got exams till then... nd will surely comment on it...

and dont cry this story is both ariya and arakshi both will love arjun and arjun may love both
ill surely add you in the pm
thanks for commenting
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Posted: 12 years ago
#39
awsum updates...
omg no... riya died... :'( she gave up her life so that arjun could live... so proud of her...
feeling so bad for everyone...
it was so emotional...
feeling bad for arjun... omg he was in shock
continue soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#40
awsmly written

this ws too good

poor riya

riya's mom's outburst ws too painful

i hd goosebumps while reading it

gr8 job sony dear...

continue soon
nd thnx fr th pm

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