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Posted: 12 years ago
#21
awsm start dear...

continue soon

nd plz pm me th nxt parts
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Posted: 12 years ago
#22
great start...
everyone's pov was lovely...
loved how arjun expressed his love...
awww his proposal was lovely
so cute ...
continue soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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PART 2:

Arjun driving car

Ria:Arjun road deko mujhe nahi

Arjun:kaise deku aaj tum ithni sundar ho

Ria:tum bhi naa rasta deko

ria sees someone lying on the road

Ria:arjunnn

Arjun moves the car in the other direction but lorry comes their and hits the car hard the car flips

both ariya goes unconscious

They are taken to hospital

Samesha comes their

Sameer:dr arjun and ria kaise hain

Dr:lady ka condition is serious but more than her the man's condition is more serious due to internal bleeding

Sameer:oh god yeh kaisa din hain arjun bathaya mujhe ki aaj who ria ki bare mein sabko bathogi phir ye sab

Ayesha:dhair rako sam kuch nahi hoga dono ka bhagvan voh sab teek kardegi

Sam:haan Ayesha agar vundono mein kuch huva then this time I will never forgive god

Ariya's mind talk

Both ariya are unconscious but both talk in their unconscious talk(are yhaar athma talk)

Arjun:ria tum teek hona kuch nahi hoga thumhe mein bhagvan se ladkar thumhe vaapas bulalega

Ria:nahi arjun mujhe kuch nahi huva bus mein tera teek hone se wait kar rahi hoon

Dr gives the electric shock to both ariya

Both of them dosent respond

Arjun:ria fight karo bahar aao ria bhahar aao

Ria responds but still arjun dosent respond

Nurse came out

Sameer:sister ria kaise hain

Nurse:gabrane ka koi baath nahi hain her health is getting stable but due to head injury we need to observe her for 24 hre

This relaxed sameer but he is frightened of arjun still

Ria:mein tho tumhara baath mangayi arjun abh teri baari jaldi aao im waitng for you arjun aao jaldi

Arjun:sorry ria I can't mujhe nahi hopara he hain mujhe lagtha hain mein

Suddenly arjun's condition is sinking more

Sameer came to know this and he hugged Ayesha tight and started crying

After some more try dr came out

Dr:sorry sameer ji I tried a lot but I could do nothing he is no more

Sameer:no bhagvan aisa nahi karsaktha arjun ko jinda haonahi hain I warn you I want my arjun back god I want him

Ria:nahi arjun tumhe ana hi hoga tere liye mein apni saas bej rahi hoon agar tum mujhe pyaar kiya tho yeh saas lelo arjun

That was the last word spoken by ria

She stopped breathing

Dr:sambhalo apne apko sameerji please

Nurse:dr the lady's condition is serious she is not breathing

Other nurse:sir arjun sir is taking breath now

Sameer is shocked few minutes before ria's condition is good and dr said arjun is no but now

Sameer:Ayesha ria ne apne pyaar ko bachate bachate who kudh

Ayesha:aise nahi kehte sam subh subh bolo kuch nahi hoga hamari riya ko

After some time

Dr declared that ria is no more and arjun is getting fine

thanks for reading

i pmed most of the members if anyone want to get pm then post your comments on the update

Edited by sonycs001 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#24
😭 again u separated ariya...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#25
emotional. ...
ariya separated... 😭
thnx. ..pm

continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#26
nice dear.. thanks for pms.. continue..
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Posted: 12 years ago
#27
awsm update

vry emotional

feeling bad fr riya

continue soon

nd thnx fr th pm

pm me th nxt updates too...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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pls pls add me n PM list ...wat ariya seperate ...oh no
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Posted: 12 years ago
#29
Awesome update ... Aww Riya dead and ab Kya hoga Arjun ka ... How will he cope ??? I feel bad for him... Anyways thanks dear for the pm and for update also:)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#30
Again you separated ariya.
Continue soon.
And plss make it ariya.

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