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Posted: 12 years ago
#51
wow nice one.. Thanks for pms..
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Posted: 12 years ago
#52
Nice...
loved the way how Arjun his attached to Riya things...her diary...sweet!!!!
loved Sam concern for his frnd Arjun...!!!
waiting for ur next update!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#53
awesome update dear...
love ariya n sarjun. ..
only one thing is it arakshi or ariya? ??
thnx for pm...
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#54
nice update
poor arjun...
pls bring riya back yaar
cont soon!!!

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Part 5:

Arjun opened riya's dairy(he imagines her daiiry as ria)

Arjun:toh riya aaj mujhe kya bathane ka mann kar raha hain tumhara

Riya:dear wAit and read this page

Dear arjun:

Tum hamesha kyu cases solve karthe ho ek baar hamein bhi moka hona chahiyena

But tumhara observations skills muuuah one day when I become mrs arjun rawte even I will solve the cases thinking why only after our marriage

Arjun:hmmm after marriage hi kyun

Kyun ki marriage ki baath tum mera better half banogi tab tumhara half intelligence mujhe hoga then even I can solve the case naaa ok neendh arahi hain good bye love

Arjun:toh tumhe aaj case solve karne ka mann arahi hain teke karo mein bhi dekthi hoon meri riya kithni intelligent hain

A murder of a girl in a girls hostel came

Arjun:toh case bhi agaya chalo

Everyone observed the whole premises they even collected the evidences and went from their

Everyone is in conference room except arjun

Arjun to dairy as ria:toh ria kuch choot raha hain tumhara dimag mein

Sam:arjun come to conference room

Sakshi:sir I think its not suicide we can see that it's a rape

sam:but how is it possible it's a girls hostel

Sakshi:so what agar security alert nahi hota toh

Shree:nahi ria as far I checked security is good

Sakshi:then some girl or friend can obuse the girl and might have killed her

Liza:no sakshi its not girl but boy because vuski dna mein ladka ka dna mili huvi hain

shree:yeh kya yhaar ye sab kaise ho saktha hain kuch nahi samajh mein arahi hain

sakshi:kal take k nayi adventuros aur intellectual case ke liye lad rahi the jab aya ro rahi hain

shree:haan case acha hain lekin kuch nahi samajh arahi hain aur arjun sir toh apni dairy mein busy huyi hain lagtha hain vunko bhi kuch samjhe ya samju nahi ho rahi hain

its short sorry next update will be big

thanks for reading hit like button or post comments for pm

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Posted: 12 years ago
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part 6:

arjun opens the dairy

Dear arjun

Aaaj mein tumhe time scence ki bare mein bathana chathi hoon mein ek hafthe se notice kar raha hoon tum ghar time se nahi jathe ek din 11 ek din 3 ek din 2 yha sometimes ghar hi nahi jaathi agar aisi toh tumhara health ko kya hothi haan.abh tum kadoos ho ek baar pyaar hojay tab mein dekloongi jabh bhi tum ghar late jathi mein tumhara kaan kichloongi samjhe ya samjao

Ok good night my guddu

Arjun smiles

Arjun:pagal kithni naam raka hain ek baar guudu,love,arju,pumpkin

Sameer sees all this and wants to divert

Sam:arjun kya aaj kuch nahi choot raha hain tumhari dimag mein

Arjun:hhan time time scence

Sakshi:yes sir in the objects near the dead body we even got a broken side clock

Liza:aur sir vus mein murder huvi ladki ka finger prints bhi hain

Arjun:lagtha hain madam ki dimag mein kuch chal raha hain

Arjun:send the clock to my cabin sakshi

Chotu:voh vus clock ko kya karungi yhaar

Shree:kisko jantha ye arjun sir vus clock se murderer bhi nikal sakthe hain

Chree hi5ed eachother

But sameer's glare made them quiet

In arjun's cabin

Arjun:abh bathao ria kya hain iss clock mein

Arjun observed the clock carefully

According to their observation

The girl used the clock to hit the murderer and the clock got broken

So the time shown by the clock that is 1:30 is the time when the murder took plac

Arjun:ok lets see whether the clock is working or not

Arjun kept batrries in the clock and smiled

Arjun:mana padega tum bhi kuch kam nahi ho good job riyu

The pages of the dairy got flipped and a page is opened in the page one line attracted arjun a lot that is ladki ka kabiliyat par kabhi sakh math karna

Arjun again smiled remembering the day when riya did gnan bodh of girls power

Arjun:thanks ria for telling the girl power to me

He went to the conference room again

Arjun:sameer murder 11 clock pe huva 1 clock nahi

Shree:kya lekin sir vus time pe sab log vuti hotha hain so even the murderer do something then everyone can listen how is it possible

Arjun:vuskeliye abh meri paas jawab nahi hain lekin murder toh 11 clock hi huva and he showed the clock which is moving in reverse direction

Sam:that means the murder happened on 11 clock but how is it possible

Arjun:for it we need to go to the hosel again

All reached the hostel

Every girl living in the hostel stood before the team

Arjun went near each and every gil and looked at each of them

Arjun:ok jis din kya ap kisiko kisi shor ya chekne ki awaj nahi suna

One girl:sir meine vus din kuch awaj suna

Arjun:tumhara naam kya hain

Girl:purva

Arjun:purva kya tumhe koi aur awwaj nahi suna vuske baad

Purva:nahi sir kuch nahi suna

When arjun was going his hand kerchief fell down(even he became cleanliness freak like riya)

A women bent down and took the handkerchief and gave him

Arjun:thankyou

He went from their

No one still has no clue who murderd the girl

Even arjun getting no idea about it

thanks for reading


Edited by sonycs001 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#57
Res
Unress
Me 1st 🥳
Update is awesome, superb,brilliant,amazing,outstanding dr
Yr Riya ko vapas leker ayo Ager Tum thik samjhao
Me love Ariya
They remain in my hrt forever
Ariya convo awesome
U r such superb writer who depict all feeling in the words
Hatts of to u
👏 Clap 4 such outstanding writer
Love ur work
Mishti
Edited by Mishti_k5 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#58
Awesome update.
Please bring back riya.
Plsss and reunite ariya.
Continue soon.
And thanx for pm.
unishaz thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
#59
nice both part r awesome loved it.. Thanks for pms..
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Posted: 12 years ago
#60
yupiee dancng!!!!

gr8 update...
awesome one..
love it..
pumpkin..akdhu😆😆
aiya always supperb~!!!!
continue soon

thnx for pm

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