collab SS: Dua-last part pg 10

First Previous

Page

Next Last

Frequent Posters

Unknown

@AnatomyAddict

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#171

payal di, i can't write a comment, am tooo shaken...

i'll try:

arjun and roshini... like the most adorable couple, they complement each other sooo much

and arjun's passion for his work.. for sure those who do these jobs for a living, me salutes your courage and determination for a crime-free place from creeps such as sikky😡

they way they talk abt women!!!! urggg it's sooo feral & shriya!!!! my heart goes to that poor girl who was completely distraught after the abuse.. but she still managed to smile & joke🤗🤗

and roshini🤗🤗... baby loves her hubby sooo much that she didn't crack at all.. my heart goes out to her strength & our hotwa!!!! well, no words from shooting his team-mate shreee to slapping his own wife!!!! i mean again the people who do this for a living!!! hats off again❤️

rehman🤗.. a life lost & the ending, me still shaken😭😭!!!!!!

amazing story didu🤗... should have totally conti & thanks for telling me abt these SS's.. i would have never found out we u hadn't told me😃

and ofc wellldone pari (girl with the same name, who writes sooo welll👍🏼)... u & payal di did an excellent job with this SS.. didu, i checked both us pari's😉 are the same age😃...

Edited by gujjupari - 12 years ago

Quote

Payal Goel

@Payal_156

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#172

Yup u r right u n my pari dat is princes_pari r of same age
widout her writing i never able to do dis
wel execution by her
aww itni jaldi padh liya 🤗
I love patriotism
my fav genre!
realy hats off to d people who lost their lives for protecting people
a standing aviation is smal
realy grt wrk
thanku pari for liking n cment 🤗
its my dream ss!
likhne ke bad bi
we r crying while writing it...
love u
glad u like it..

Quote

Looks like you are new here. Register for free, learn and contribute.

Unknown

@AnatomyAddict

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#173

Originally posted by: Payal_156
Yup u r right u n my pari dat is princes_pari r of same age
widout her writing i never able to do dis
wel execution by her
aww itni jaldi padh liya 🤗
I love patriotism
my fav genre!
realy hats off to d people who lost their lives for protecting people
a standing aviation is smal
realy grt wrk
thanku pari for liking n cment 🤗
its my dream ss!
likhne ke bad bi
we r crying while writing it...
love u
glad u like it..

lolz di i did my research before writing di or no di behind pari😉😉

and yes pari's words are very clear and emotional and just amazing👏🤗

u r right di!!!! patriots have a special place in my heart!!!! their bravery & courage is un-paralleled to anyone else!!!!! a standing ovation, wouldn't even be enuf for them... they do deserve the highest of high honours😃😳😃

and u r right, i dont cry tooo often (i just can't for some reason, u name the most emotional movie like from kuch kuch hota hai to taare zameen par to titanic, no tears at alll), but i was sooo shaken... like some1's sacrifice it just strings a sensitive chord in me...

dunno why u stopped writing di!!!!! it was sooo goood😃😃... u should right more often!!!!! u r really reallly goood at expressing these ideas...👏👏

Quote

Payal Goel

@Payal_156

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#174

Awie pari gud job wid research lol
i was shaken too everytime i read dis
bt i m nt a writer
thank god
i just share my ideas
n d awesum writing done by d writers 🤗 Glad after reading ur cment wow
thanku dear
being selfish i try al people read n atleast hit like

Quote

Payal Goel

@Payal_156

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#175

Originally posted by: mastmegha22
read all.
its awesome

Thank u dear :)

Quote

Shreya

@shreya09

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#176

ok firstly... i am so sorry for not commenting earlier... maaf kardo pleeease 😳

now about the story ...

😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭

u made me cry
i am speechless
it was a beautiful piece of work
superb writing

very very very well done 👏 👏 👏

Quote

Payal Goel

@Payal_156

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#177

Originally posted by: shreya09
ok firstly... i am so sorry for not commenting earlier... maaf kardo pleeease😳
now about the story ...

😭
u made me cry
i am speechless
it was a beautiful piece of work
superb writing
very very very well done 👏👏👏

awwie no maafi till action wala os 😳
will be waiting for dat
no maafi ok
awwie don't cry
sis
thanks a lot ji meant a lot
glad u like ..

Quote

Shreya

@shreya09

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#178

Originally posted by: Payal_156

awwie no maafi till action wala os 😳
will be waiting for dat
no maafi ok
awwie don't cry
sis
thanks a lot ji meant a lot
glad u like ..

grrhh 😡
yaha pe bhi dhamki ??? 😆

Quote

Payal Goel

@Payal_156

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#179

Originally posted by: shreya09

grrhh😡
yaha pe bhi dhamki ???😆

yes 😆
nno maafi sis till i get next action wala os

Quote

Amrita Malhotra

@Amritamalhotra

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#180

Awesome concept. .
Superbly written. ..
I was thinking how I wl comment. ..
My fingers are not moving. ...
Am devastated...
Each part was beautiful. ..
So real...
Hat's off girls. ..
The suspense quotient was so high...
Arjun as Aaqif was so real...
Was feeling so miserable. ..
Poor Roshni...poor Arjun...
Whn Roshni revealed Arjun's secret, I couldn't believe it...
They ended like this...
No more word...