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Payal Goel

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Posted: 12 years ago

#161

Yup di tabi to maine kunchu di ke sath tum bin likha tha..

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Payal Goel

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Posted: 12 years ago

#162

Originally posted by: khemanisarita
i love this story

Thanku so much dear 🤗

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aptl123

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Posted: 12 years ago

#163

ohh nooo...

Arjun also died...

at least they both are togather...

loved it

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Payal Goel

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Posted: 12 years ago

#164

Originally posted by: aptl123
ohh nooo...
Arjun also died...
at least they both are togather...
loved it

Thank u di

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-Carrie-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#165

Oh!Sweet Lord!😭😭😭 Yeh kya ho gaya?

Payal, tumne yeh script Gorky ko bheji hai? Please post this in his Fan Fiction corner dear.It was superbly written like a thriller movie script👏 Well done!👍🏼

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Payal Goel

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Posted: 12 years ago

#166

Zuby ji
nw u made me speechless
thanku frm d bottom of my heart..
thanku !
meant a lot ...!
🤗

Edited by Payal_156 - 12 years ago

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Priyanka

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Posted: 12 years ago

#167

Part 1
ohh no Shree is kidnapped :O
loved his dialogues !!!
Part 2
arey wah Arjun ji in a different avtar :P
Arjun eating paan😆
Sik punched Shree😡
Part3
What!! he shot Shree :O :O :O
loved Sam and Rosh convo <3
part4
Phew Shree is fine..
Thank God Shriya is saved..
Sam ki bahen???
and that Sik is so disgusting man!!
part5
Ok i am literally now in tears😭
well Shree is saved...
but...that Sik is such a 🤬
He tortured Roshni so much...Arni died for the country😭😭😭😭

this was just so amazing girls, beautiful <3

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Payal Goel

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Posted: 12 years ago

#168

priya ji in action :D
thank u dear for d lovely review
glad u lov it
🤗
Dis ss is my dream cum true story
dnt knw abt cvs :p
Pari u dne a fab job!

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Bhavna Antriwale-Gargate

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Posted: 12 years ago

#169

Cute... Arjun-Roshni

Hawww... Shree missing 😲

Arjun on undercover mission... .

Shree... supercool... desh ke liye jaan dene walo ki umar nahi hoti...👏👏👏

Naya Chichundar... hee hee hee ... obviously... it none other than ASR 😉

Sick Sikandar and his men... MCP 😡

Haaye Arjun Bhai... entry mil gayi...⭐️

Aisha and Sam worried about Arjun and Roshni

Arjun is the best... but Shreee... 😭😭😭😭😭 Arjun had to shoot him

Thank god Rehman brought him to hospital and informed Sam 😭

Sick... torturing a 16 yr old girl... 😡😡

Rathod ki behen kidnapped...😲😲😲 Damnittt

Roshni tortured...😡😡😡

Arjun torturing Roshni with acid...... Arjun's cover blown by Roshni... poor girl... cant blame her...

Arjun - Roshni bothe dead 🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢

why sad ending 😭😭😭😭😭😭😭

it was so good... why the end had to be so sad 😭😭😭😭😭

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Payal Goel

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Posted: 12 years ago

#170

Bhavna di
finaly u here yay
di dis is d concept
i want to see hope cvs arjun bhaiya ko aise undercover par bheje
more of his patriotism shwed
thankyou di fr d lovely review 🤗
Pari dne a grt job

ps. dua n emptines on forum 32

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