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Payal Goel

@Payal_156

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Posted: 12 years ago

#141

Originally posted by: BDCTG

Kyaa yaar...Payaal Aapi...!

Ye kya 'Thank u' 'Thank u' laga rakhkhe ho...

Uuhhu...mujhe ye sab nehi sunna...!

okies no more
ty
🤗

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@MriduB

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Posted: 12 years ago

#142

At last...meine aaj yeh SS padh hi li! 😆

Wonderful idea Payal and wonderful execution Pari!👏

Just fantastic! Or should I say this made me speechless!😛

Freaking awesome! 😊

Acha huya Payal ki u somewhat forced me to read this...otherwise agar mein itne ache kaam ko ignore kar deti toh bas...ik regret sa reh jaata! 😳

Ending was painful...but loved Rathore's dialogue!

Do write more!

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Payal Goel

@Payal_156

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Posted: 12 years ago

#143

Mridu thank u so much dear
finaly u read
relieved lol
thank u fr d compliment
meant a lot to us
n
yup we write more 🤗

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princess_pari

@princess_pari

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Posted: 12 years ago

#144

@ MriduB: thank you soo much😊
agar payal didu naa hoti to i would have never written this😊😊
n as didu said, we ll write more...😊😊

🤗

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Sabia Khan

@BDCTG

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Posted: 12 years ago

#145

Yes...of course! You should write more girls...so that we all can get a chance to read another excellent piece of work...!

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devildiva21

@devildiva21

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Posted: 12 years ago

#146

heyy guys firstly very sorry for the late comment...!!!😳

just read the last two parts together...!!

and they were super duper awsum...!!!!

glad that shree is fine...!!!!

omg that poor girl shriya... that sik and his men arghhh😡😡😡 how could they do all this to that small innocent girl...!!! really feel like killing them...!!!

😲😲 they kidnapped roshni also...!!!! hats off to her spirit...!!! itna pain ke baad bhi she didn't tell anything aur arjun apni identity save karne ke liye usko rosh ko pain dena pada...😭😭😭

and the end omg it was very emotional...!!! arni ka sacrifice😭😭 and sam ki last line was heart touching...!!!!

loved the story a lot and gonna miss it for sure...

Edited by devildiva21 - 12 years ago

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Payal Goel

@Payal_156

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Posted: 12 years ago

#147

@Sabia dear
fr sure
bt after 21st may
thank u so much 🤗

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Payal Goel

@Payal_156

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Posted: 12 years ago

#148

@Divi
its ok..
thank u ap aye to sahi
thank u fr d lng coment
aww u going to mis it
aww!!
thank u fr d compliment 🤗
Glad u lyk or love d story
meant a lot to us..!!

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devildiva21

@devildiva21

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Posted: 12 years ago

#149

Originally posted by: Payal_156
@Divi
its ok..
thank u ap aye to sahi
thank u fr d lng coment
aww u going to mis it
aww!!
thank u fr d compliment 🤗
Glad u lyk or love d story
meant a lot to us..!!

heheheh aana to bht phle se chahti thi bt ye khambaqt exams time de to na😃😆

🤗 thank you both fr such a lovely story

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princess_pari

@princess_pari

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Posted: 12 years ago

#150

Originally posted by: devildiva21

heheheh aana to bht phle se chahti thi bt ye khambaqt exams time de to na😃😆
🤗 thank you both fr such a lovely story

thank you...😃
i understand...
exams ne sab ki wat laga di hai iss baar...😉😆😆😆😆
finally i m free... exams khatm... yaya...⭐️⭐️