collab SS: Dua-last part pg 10 - Page 11

Im sorry for commenting late. Injust read all the parts. Oommgg... The updates were outstanding. So much suspense... Emotions.. And action in each part. I cant beleive arjun had to shoot shree.. Im glad shree knew it was arjun and they both understand eachother to know that arjun had no choice but to shoot him. Im glad shree is fine now. But roshni and arjun... R... Dead? :'( the ending was so sad! :( if my suggestion matters even a little bit.. Then i would suggest that you continue with this story. Maybe after arjun died how etf life is going or something.. It would be wonderful to see "dua" started again.

@Supreet thank u so much dear
bt we r nt continue dis
dis is d plot
thank u fr lyking
we glad!!

Wow awesome👏
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Read the whole story in one go... Amazing works girls...

aaahhh... me dancing now...
i just came back home after exam...i open this thread and haila... m soo happy now...😃
thank you soo much guys... your comments and likes made our day...❤️

@amanarjunkaran: thank you dear...
we had mentioned rathod's sister in part 3 pg 6... its roshni...😊

@life93: neeraja di thank you...
you took time and read our story, commented on it...
that means a lot to us...😊

@fatima15: thank you soo much dear...
your comment made our day...😃

@..sweetchilly..: thank you soo much dear...😊

@samiya.059: samiya di thank you...
even we cant bear arjun in pain or his death...
but had to bring it on to make justice to the story.
you took some time to read and comment on our work made us soo happy😃

@shona14: shona di thank you...
we happy happy...
about ending soon, it was a short story indeed...
just few parts...
again thank u😊😊

@alee001: thank you alee di😊

@IshitaRocks015: hey...thank you dear...
about shree... he is safe...
part 4 pg 8...i have written about his being safe and sound...
thanks again dear...😊

@daydreamer: thanks dear...😊

@vidya.anand:thank you soo much di...
it means a lot to us...
and yes...this was the ending we had planned...
the song is one of payal di's fav bheji thi dua i guess from movie shanghai...
it indeed a good song...
thanks again😊😊

@supreet_dmg: supreet thank you dear...
but yes dear as payal di sad we wont be continuing this...
because once we move out of the plot, it starts losing its flavor...
but we are happy that you liked it...😊😊

@aliya_begh:aliya thank you dear...😊😊

@Leki: thank u dear😊

@vamire_queen:
hey vampu, dear anki...
thanks soo much dear...
we are sooo happy for your comments on each part...🤗
happy wala dance

about the pain shriya underwent...i think there are soo many shriya's all over the country who were abducted and are being tortured every min and every sec...
we wanted to show their emotions, their innocence snatched away from them...

and about arjun...intelligent cop ya stone hearted husband...
well for me, he is definitely an intelligent cop and a hard core patriot and not at all a stone hearted husband.
he was torn between love for his wife and love and his duty towards nation.
he chose nation, because they say na to save a village, a person can be sacrificed, to save a state a village and to save a country a state can be sacrificed... he was ready to sacrifice his love for his nation...for his duty...
and even she understood it..
but yes sometimes physical pain becomes worse than death esp when he/she is in great strain and emotional turmoil...
end mein they did what they had to...save nation's peace and end evil be achieve it by sacrificing themselves...
thanks for your lovely comments dear...🤗




thanks guys...all of you who read, liked and commented...
hope many more people read and comment😛
thanks all of you again...
a hug for all🤗from me and payal di...

Hey stone hearted husband means he have the guts to do that even tht things with his wife keeping aside his love only n only n only fr his duty n country...
Only few peoples can do this.
I mean to say this, he kept the husband inside him aside n just service fr his contry at that particular scene. So i said him stone hearted. Coz no one in this would do this with any loves ones keeping a pillow of rose.



And about shriya...
U r right there are uncountable sriya's across the world for whom we r nt able to do sth..

U have done a great attempt in which it reflects the actual face of crime .

So thank u both payal di n u.

This is beautiful and so poignant!

Originally posted by: despicable_me

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">This is beautiful and so poignant!</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">Very nice written!</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">Take a bow both of you..really!👏</font>

Aww thank u so much di
n congo fr rocking 🤗

Oh God !!

oh man...shit...