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Prerna

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Posted: 12 years ago

#91

so emotional...i had tears in my eyes...and i'm so proud of them...really beautiful...👏

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vidya.anand

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Posted: 12 years ago

#92

Poignant intense emotional story!

I understand u ended it sooner than u intended to

but was this the end anyway?

Nagma was cute and loved it when Arjun did what he could to save her from the rest!

As they say, kuch accha hone keliye kisi na kisi ko sacrifice karna padtha hai!

And salutes to Arjun and Roshni for sacrificing their own lives for the sake of destroying evil Sikandar!

the lines at the end were superb!

Good work! my best wishes to both of you!

Edited by vidya.anand - 12 years ago

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BitterBerry

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Posted: 12 years ago

#93

Firstly accept my apology for being late.

Fr
Chap- 3
so arjun was brought there by abdul , and they believed on him..thats intresting.
And then arjun said to kill sik..very daring arjun..
Aisha too cared fr arjun n rathod is roshni's bro.
So he wanna disoclose this to media .
And arjun performed the tasks very well.
Then shree..
Omg he is fine or not.
I think there must be any plan..
Ok let me read part 4..

Thanks fr pm.

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BitterBerry

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Posted: 12 years ago

#94

Omg
thank god shree is fine..
So told you before na may any plan .
So they have full faith on arjun.
Bloody sik 😡
girls are not the toys of his hand 😡
and loved arjun n shriya's convo..
The most intresting part is the girl trusted arjun..and in a very nicly he he saved her 👏

no.. Ye kay hai..roshni 😲
i guess what would be the end..and it will be the bestest ever..
But let me read.
Its like i am watching the serial on screen..
Thanks fr such lovely SS
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Payal Goel

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Posted: 12 years ago

#95

Vidya di
thank u so much for reading ...
well dis is d end
we r nt satisfy by d reviews earlier bt nw happy lil bit
yup di plot is only lyk dis sry if disappoint u n anyone
last lines frm film shangai film sng
my fav one nwadays
d sng gave me d only idea n pari write acordingly
arni hats off to dem in dis story
we cry during writing it..
thank u so much di 🤗

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Payal Goel

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Posted: 12 years ago

#96

@daydreamer thank u so much dear
we also hv tears n yup we proud of dem
@vq anki dear
thank u so much dear fr reply indiviualy on parts
we glad u lyk it
thank u so much 🤗
Meant a lot to us!!
thanks everyone..!!

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BitterBerry

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Posted: 12 years ago

#97

Its really painful to even the words of the story angle 😭
its really hurting me...
And arjun..what about him...the intellgent cop or the stone hearted husband 😭

the portraytion of the character of arjun n both roshni 👏
what to say about them.. I really can't feel the pain of arjun... Coz its very heavy.. I m damn sure no one can 😭
to see ur love in that state n the is he himself is the reason.. Before his pysical death , it would hav killed him uncountable times 😭

and roshni poor soul but her determination to her country n to her love... Hats off to the writer.

I m really not surprised when roshni opened up her mouth... It was bound to happen..
Coz some time some pains are really unbearable n even it hurts more than death.

So no complain fr roshni 😃

then the last words...
They are together in the heaven.. Thnank you soo much payal di n my sweet angle that you never left roshni or arjun apart from eachother...

Two lives only acted for country n togeter acted for their love...
No more words ...

😭

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thank you for bringing such concept ... Now i don't have to wait the cv's to reveal anything for past..

Coz it is the perfect for me now n then.
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Payal Goel

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Posted: 12 years ago

#98

vq aka my anki dear
u made our day
pari isnt online right nw
hope wo jab ayegi n watch ur coment
jump like me
well dis story is special fr me its my dream!!
arni in dis story just wow fr me
their love n separation in show was i myself unable to explain
no one is able to expres d feeling wen u watch ur dear ones in pain in front of ur own eyes
thank u dear
u compare our story wid cvs wow 🤗
I realy dnt knw wat cvs plan for us in d show
its my imagination
n i believe to write n to watch something very diff feeling!!
thank u so much
love u all
tc
hugs..
ur coments our inspiration..!

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BitterBerry

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Posted: 12 years ago

#99

Thank u payal di..
I wanna write more bt dripping tears from my eyes , n my trembling hands r not cope up with me.

For me this is the perfect n best ARNI ever n it will be.
Thank u again.

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Payal Goel

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Posted: 12 years ago

#100

Originally posted by: Vampire-queen
Thank u payal di..
I wanna write more bt dripping tears from my eyes , n my trembling hands r not cope up with me.

For me this is the perfect n best ARNI ever n it will be.
Thank u again.

Awwie dnt cry pls
its ok i knw its heart touching
i n pari also eyes welled up..
thank u dear frm both of us 🤗