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princess_pari

@princess_pari

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#121

hieee...
@ despicable_me: thanks di... 😳

@ sips_crazy: thank you sia di for the comment...
happy that you liked our work...😊

@riyasarkar007: thanks riya...😊

@Sumu4JayD

your lines,
'CHEEKHTI RAHI,
PHIR BHI ANSUNI HUI...
GIRGIRATI RAHI,
UNHONE NA SUNI...
AB SOCHTI HU...,
JAB KOI NAHI SATH MERA,
IN SITAM O KO SEHNA PARHEGA...

PHIR BHI...
HAA PHIR BHI...
KAASH KOI SUNLETA MERI ANNKAHI...

DUA...'

awesome heart wreching lines...
dil ko choo liya...
thanks dear...😊

@haruhi26: thanks tina di...
we are ready...
it was indeed emotional one to write...
thanks di...😊🤗

@prava55663: thanks di...
it means a lot to us😊😊😊

@thank you so much piya di...😊

@aroojarain: thanks arooj di...
yes it is an intense emotional and patriotic story...
its ok...you took time to read and comment...that means a lot to us...😊😊

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shrtsoni

@shrtsoni

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#122

Superb story...
Very nice & really heart touching..
Congo Pari & Payal... Keep it up..
U made me cry...
😭

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ankita2804

@ankita2804

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#123

what should I say...

am simply Speechless... 😲 😃

its awesomeee... super awesomee...

ArNi... aah... I just loveee them... 🤗 ❤️

thanx for writing on them... loved it..

Pari darling... Miss JD... very nicely written... n the suspense... woww... ⭐️

payal... I just love your concepts... they are sooo nice and sooo unique... 😉😉

this was something very much well written with so many flavors in a single shot... 👍🏼

there was mystery, risk, friendship, love, care, sacrifice and so on... 😳 ⭐️ ⭐️ 👏

loved it to the core... *claps* 👏 👏 👏

and the last two parts... what to say... they just wrenched my heart... omg... so so sooo emotional..

trust me.. couldnt stop my tears... 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭

the last scene of rathore... that was just tooo emotional... he lost two important part of his life.. but still for work.. he have to be strong enough... 😭 😭 😭

ArNi's sacrifice for each other... just tooo goood... 👏⭐️

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ankita2804

@ankita2804

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#124

One REQUEST...

Please put the index...
its little difficult to find the parts... 😳

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Payal Goel

@Payal_156

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#125

Anki dear 🤗
Thank u i feel extra special re
my concepts unique dancing..yay
pari is awesum to bring d effect..
well its my dream ss..
thank u much
hugs..
its intense emotional..
i gues other dan comic every flavour of lyf..
thank u so much fr d lovely coment
love u
tc
hugs..!

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princess_pari

@princess_pari

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#126

anku di thank you...
🤗🤗
i am soo happy that you are here...😃
yes an intense story, payal di's concept...
i am soo happy that you liked it...

and yes i have given index now... thanks for reminding that di...
🤗🤗❤️🤗🤗

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ankita2804

@ankita2804

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#127

Love you both dear...

🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗

yes Pari... am here... at least for more 10 days...

so dont worry for comments n all... Mai Hun Naa... 😉

kep wriiting as much as you can... I loooveee your stories... 😃

Payal... I can understand how much close you are ... and its indeed a dreamyyy sequence... coz i just love everything related to patriotism and this story was damn Patriotic... 😳

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Payal Goel

@Payal_156

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#128

Ankita..
patriotism my favourite genre
den frndship
den emotional
me getting offline frm tom due to exams!.
love u re.. 🤗
Read pari index
wrth reading
i guess 6 or more dan dat arni wrks fr me
pari 🤗
Love u both my sweeties..!