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Payal Goel

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Posted: 12 years ago

#111

Sia di 🤗
Thanku fr d coment
yup di its heart wrenching
intense n emotional
we both r also crying
bt dis is d plot only
we glad u r liking it..
thank u so much
@riya thank u dear..!!

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Deleted_Account

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Posted: 12 years ago

#112

Pari...
payal di...

CHEEKHTI RAHI,
PHIR BHI ANSUNI HUI...
GIRGIRATI RAHI,
UNHONE NA SUNI...
AB SOCHTI HU...,
JAB KOI NAHI SATH MERA,
IN SITAM O KO SEHNA PARHEGA...

PHIR BHI...
HAA PHIR BHI...
KAASH KOI SUNLETA MERI ANNKAHI...

DUA...

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Payal Goel

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Posted: 12 years ago

#113

Aww sumu dear heart wrenching lines!!

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Mimi2609

@Mimi2609

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Posted: 12 years ago

#114

Now Payal and Pari, i'm definitely gonna beat you two😭

The whole update was a very shocking, and heart touching one😭

i dont know what i would have done in their place, whether my country was more important or the person i loved😭

That was a very difficult choice Arjun had to make, and he even had to slap her and burnt her using acid😭

she was just a human, for how long would she have supported all this torture😭

and Sikander making her the human bomb itself😭

I think this was the most perfect way to end this story, because saving Roshni was next to impossible and Arjun is nothing but a corpse without his wife, and on top the fact he hurt and beat her would probably never have let him be in peace😭

Splendid work by both😊, though i was too numb after reading it

I kept my promise Payal ji😊

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Payal Goel

@Payal_156

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Posted: 12 years ago

#115

Tina di
finaly i relieved watching ur coment 🤗
Beat us we ready..
well di d story plot lyk dat
i want show may be kash lil bit aisa hua ho thoda bahut
i personaly lyk patriotic genre most
arjun being a true patriotic duty cums first..
fr me its lyk a dream cum true story
we both r getting emotional while writing dis or plan dis
we glad u lyk it
thank u so much di
meant a lot to us 🤗 thank u fr fulfiling d promise
love u
tc..!!

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pravallika

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Posted: 12 years ago

#116

Wow Pari and my pari..

brilliant job...

I just loved the story entirely...It was so emotional...

Arjun as aaqif and under secret mission and Rehman helping him out...

A true cop...whose priorities were to save those millions...

he even din't care be it brother or his wife...that was really emotional..when he had to put the acid on roshni and when he had to shoot Shree!!

the way finally they gave up their lives for people...I salute to them,,,,

Superb one pari...

hope you come up with a new one...

and do pm me!

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Payal Goel

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Posted: 12 years ago

#117

Pravalika di 🤗
Ur coment wow meant a lot to us...
thank u so much di
d wrk is my dream
i believe dat to assume write n watch everything is a very diff feeling
hope jo is ss me arjun ko krna pda wo kabi kisi ko na krna pade
hats off to d officers who sacrifice their lives for their country
dis dua is very special fr me..
its arni one
i guess everyone knw abt me hw much i m possesive abt arni...
thank u so much di 🤗
Ur coment made our day
love u
tc..!!

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Piya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#118

Loved it.. Thanks for pms..

awesome yaar

hats of pari n payal😃

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Payal Goel

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Posted: 12 years ago

#119

Originally posted by: lizadavidmm
Loved it.. Thanks for pms..
awesome yaar
hats of pari n payal😃

Thank u so much piya di 🤗

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Arooj Arain

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Posted: 12 years ago

#120

ohh wow..
Jus amazing ss dear..
Sorrie for reading cmngt late..
Bt truly i lovd it to bits..
It was so emotional..
Very-well written...
Awesome idea nd love arni as dey sacrificed deir lives for deir country...
Thumbs ups to bth :)