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Posted: 13 years ago
Sikki😡😡😡😡... Bloody🤬 uska problem kya hai???? Y s he doin this??? already he made Arjun's life hell once nw again... Hope Riya s safe nd Arjun finds her soon nd brutually kills Sikki... continue soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
bloody jerk sikander 😡😡 what is his problem?? uska dushmani Arjun se tha roshni ki wajahse..but why Riya!! I am feelung very scared.

i hope Arjun & ETF get her soon..update soon dear
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Posted: 13 years ago
Again a rocking update di...
well nw plz gimme sikandar so that i can kill him...
he was such a _ that i cannt explain!!
He make arjun life more than hell..
hope ria is fine..
etf team n arjun may make ria save at time..!!
grt update di..!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hey ...
Great update :)
Hate that sikander ...
Poor Arjun is feeling so guilty :(
Plz update soon :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
I am so sacred of sik...
Hope arjun will find riya soon...
Update soon dr
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Posted: 13 years ago
kunchu :


" Damn It !! " .. that's my reaction as i finished reading the update. riya's life is in grave danger while sikandar ( well he's turned into a psycho by now i guess ) is constantly but successfully hitting at arjun's weakest and most sensitive points and to top it all, shree couldnt trace his location till now. okay, i cant take it anymore. update the next part soon.



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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: sashashyam

My dear Kunchu,

At times there is something to be said for reading 3 chapters at one go. One has a feeling of continuity and of forward motion.

This time, you have brought the story to a sharp turning point, like something perched on the edge of a cliff, with a strong wind blowing from behind. After reaching the end of this chapter, there was only one question in my mind, Riya knows nothing about the looming threat to her, but Arjun is very well aware of it and he takes it very seriously. How then does he let her go to the ladies' room all by herself, instead of accompanying her till the door and standing guard outside? He knows full well what Sikandar is capable of, so how is he so careless? This is probably what can only be classified as 'fate'.

But the passage I liked the best was when Sikandar comes to Roshni's house and cries his heart out on her shoulder. The next one was when, after having stabbed her, he tries desperately to save her and get her to a hospital.

Kunchu, you have managed something not attempted anywhere else in this forum that I have seen, to humanise a character who was till now a faceless, dyed in the wool villain, evil incarnate with no shades of anything else. By showing his deep and totally genuine love for Roshni - no matter that it is a maniacally jealous love that in the end destroys it very object - you have lent him an almost tragic dimension.

It might have been one sided, and it might, when frustrated, have turned into something totally destructive,but it was love. If Arjun had never turned up, Roshni would most likely have married Sikandar in due course, and continued to work with her NGO while also raising a family, with Sikandar forging ahead in his career and being blissfully happy with her and their kids.

But that was not to be, and like Lucifer, Son of the Morning, who became a fallen angel and turned into Satan, so also does Sikandar, Roshni's dear friend, turn into a murderous changeling, like one of the distorted images one sees in trick mirrors. A man devoured by raging jealousy, who destroys the woman he loves rather than let her belong to another. This is an archetype that is common in literature, but I never expected to meet it here. Congratulations!

Shyamala Aunty





shyamala aunty :

i may not have my way with words like you do, but i do agree to all that you have said about sikandar's character in this FF. till now, Sikandar has been portrayed as a cold-blooded villain in the show (from arjun's POV ) but i wont mind seeing kunchu's theory coming true behind his cold-bloodedness ie how his genuine but obsessive love for roshni turned self-destructive and he ended up losing her while trying to kill his so-called enemy, arjun.

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Posted: 13 years ago
wao lvlu update
hope arjun find riya
,i kil sikander ,
bus ek bar mil jaye
plz conti soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
My dear Kunchu,

I too would like to wish you and your family a very peaceful and healthy New Year- and with those two blessings, happiness will automatically follow!

As for the Sikandar-Arjun face-off, I think Sikandar would not precipitate it too soon; he would probably prefer a long drawn out cat and mouse game to strain Arjun's nerves to breaking point. Hatred makes one a sadist, and I expect that is exactly what he will do.

Shyamala Aunty

hey everyone!! sorry I'm late!!!
first of all.. MERRY XMAS!!!

CHAPTER 23:


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Posted: 13 years ago
i am now when Arjun gets to the Sikendar

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