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DivineDarkness

@DivineDarkness

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#421

Awesome update...

omg Riya s Kidnapd... Sikki😡

Bonding of the Trio s cute nd nice... Loved Rathore...

hope Arjun finds her soon... nd kill dat 🤬 Sikki

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Queen.Bee

@Queen.Bee

Sparkler

Posted: 13 years ago

#422

wow!! sikander riya ko lekar gaye!!😭 hope arjun saves her in time!!

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Moner_Radio

@Moner_Radio

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#423

kunchu :

read the entire FF and commenting now. honestly speaking, when i found that you are making arjun go through a memory loss .. i got apprehensive and almost expected to read an Ekta Kapoor sort of drama unfold in you story. but to my surprise, i never felt like that even once .. thanx to your handling the plot extremely well. the inner turmoils of the team, specially riya as arjun tries to cope with his memory loss, her noting down his minutest details of progress as arjun's subconsious mind sends out signals to dress up in his own familiar way, ordering his cutting chai or saying his TM " samjhe ya samjhau ?" , most importantly, Sikandar's flashbacks with Roshni ( that was the best part of the FF for me ) of what actually transpired .. must say the PH ought to take up this idea when they decide to reveal arjun's past in details in the show ..i wont mind seeing Sikandar as an obsessed lover of Roshni who ends up killing her in an attempt to get her. and finally, the revelation to arjun and the entire ETF team by Rathore .. very well written.👏 and now the truth is out, both arjun and sikander are after each other, each with reasons and justifications of his own , i'm waiting to see how arjun and ETF manages to save ria and accomplish their mission.

update soon. and please pm me next time.😊