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pravallika

@prava55663

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#11

great start dear...loved it:)

do pm me when you update next..

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Sanchayita

@Love_Arnie

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#12

I think Gorky Sir has hacked Tina's IF account...! This wz awesome... U rock babes!!! The story is just perfect in all aspect... The charesteristics of each character is descripted superbly... Everyone's dialouge's n bodylanguage are so realistic... On a lighter note... I cant stop grinning.. The PM wz romancing, 'I can't sleep without you my wifey' OMG!!! Prime Minister's too romances... U know being in India its... u know na...! Please continue. Thanks 4 the pm. Keep writing n take care...!

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NidhaA

@NidhaA

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#13

You've proved your mettle as a crime writer Tina.
I love that and also envy you for that, he he.
You are great in that you know.
We do tend to forget that crime is a part of the show!
And you've given a thriller a brilliant start.
Do continue soon.

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shruti

@shrutisweety

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#14

offcourse u should continue
semd me pm

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little.princess

@little.princess

Explorer

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#15

Grt start 4 an awesome story.. Eagerly waiting 4 the nxt part..

Update soon and thanx 4 the pm..

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Sanchayita

@Love_Arnie

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#16

Tina.. Nice dp! Cant help saying! Sorry for taking a post!

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Sreeparna

@Mellifluous

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#17

Tina first of all sorry for such a late comment..
very interesting & suspence full start
looking for the case eagerly.
pleaseee continue soon & thanks for pm dear😊

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Niki

@luvzindagi

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#18

I loved the start... Thanks for the PM
Please update soon...

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Nida

@Gurmeet4Drashti

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#19

Great start ...

I really loved it ... Yeah there should be a case but plz some ariya scenes along with it too ...

N awww poor riya ... She asked Arjun about the karva chauth ... Hope he opens a bit ... N do continue ...

Looking forward to it ...

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sashashyam

@sashashyam

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#20

Dear haruhi (Tina?),

This looks like being a real treat for me, a true blue thriller! Thanks a lot, and please do continue, and as quickly as you can manage. I loved the sudden shock of finding out that it was a crime in such high places; you had camouflaged that so neatly in the opening paras, you clever girl!👏

And of course poor Riya is back with her bouts of foot in the mouth disease. I am very pleased that you have retained her, and thus thumbed your nose at the uncaring CVs, so to speak!

Shyamala

Hello everyone, i know i'm supposed to be working on my other FF: While you were sleeping, but just read a post where someone i respect and love reading her comments loads, have written that we tend to forget that this serial is a crime based story, and not just Ariya😆...

So this story is completely dedicated to her and yep Riya is still alive, because i love her too much, dont worry no need to be disappointed too much cause it will have some Ariya moments in it, though minimal cause the crime plot will take priority, hope no one minds...

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