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Posted: 12 years ago

#41

very nice do update soon

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: hiddenpearl
Interesting...
update soon

thanks dear😊

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Posted: 12 years ago

#43

Originally posted by: KiSha13
Tina first of all sorry for such a late comment..
very interesting & suspence full start
looking for the case eagerly.
pleaseee continue soon & thanks for pm dear😊

its ok dear, thanks for liking the start😉

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#44

Nice start 😃

continue soon

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Posted: 12 years ago

#45

Originally posted by: Moumimon

continue dear...

yep will surely😉

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: Gurmeet4Drashti
Great start ...
I really loved it ... Yeah there should be a case but plz some ariya scenes along with it too ...
N awww poor riya ... She asked Arjun about the karva chauth ... Hope he opens a bit ... N do continue ...
Looking forward to it ...

Thanks for liking the start😳

Well of course i'd be including Ariya scenes, but most scenes will be as we see in the serial, nothing heavy dear, hope you wont mind

Well you know about Riya and her mouth, always speaking things , though not on purpose

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Hi Shyamala auntie(hope you dont mind me calling you like this),

actually my real name is Tina😊

as for the case, well i only wrote what came to my mind, and hope like i made the start so mysterious and you loved it, i hope i can do justice to this story also with the remaining updates...

Till now havent really decided what much to write on it, but will try to update as soon as i can

N yep Riya is here to stay, cause i love her character too too much, she's so funny and a positive person, that's why i love her😊

Originally posted by: sashashyam
Dear haruhi (Tina?),

This looks like being a real treat for me, a true blue thriller! Thanks a lot, and please do continue, and as quickly as you can manage. I loved the sudden shock of finding out that it was a crime in such high places; you had camouflaged that so neatly in the opening paras, you clever girl!👏

And of course poor Riya is back with her bouts of foot in the mouth disease. I am very pleased that you have retained her, and thus thumbed your nose at the uncaring CVs, so to speak!

Shyamala

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Posted: 12 years ago

#48

Originally posted by: M.V.Kohli007
Amazing..

Plz update asap.

thanks dear😊

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Posted: 12 years ago

#49

Originally posted by: luvzindagi
I loved the start... Thanks for the PM
Please update soon...

thanks dear😊

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Posted: 12 years ago

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No,Tina, I am 65, and I would love to be called Shyamala Aunty, it makes me feel quite at home!

Now, as for your dhamkedaar opening, please remember one thing, the security at 7-9, Race Course Road, New Delhi, which is the PM's residence, is VERY tight. I know this from personal experience, as I have been there for official meetings. Oh yes, you would be puzzled about that, but you can take a look at http://www.flickr.com/photos/menik/2530924779/, and you will understand why I am saying this. The report is 5 years old, and my son is now 28 and I have retired, but the rest is all ok!

Also, I am sure you will be updating this tantalising tale regularly, which is a must for thrillers, as otherwise you will lose the thread. It might be difficult, given that I am sure you have much else on your plate, but do try. I have been looking for updates to Ivre's thriller for well over a month in vain!

It might be best to work out the whole plot in outline right at the beginning and flesh out the details as you go along, for this way you can iron out all the inconsistencies right at the start, and not have them pop out at you midway, when you cannot fix them. I am sure you will do just fine.

All the very best with this one, and take care.

Shyamala B.Cowsik

Originally posted by: haruhi26
Hi Shyamala auntie(hope you dont mind me calling you like this),

actually my real name is Tina😊
as for the case, well i only wrote what came to my mind, and hope like i made the start so mysterious and you loved it, i hope i can do justice to this story also with the remaining updates...
Till now havent really decided what much to write on it, but will try to update as soon as i can
N yep Riya is here to stay, cause i love her character too too much, she's so funny and a positive person, that's why i love her😊

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