SSLove and Deception Ch5 Pg26 Up06/12,IMP Notepg28 - Page 12

Originally posted by: sbp1971

Tina just caught up with part 2 and 3 nice going. It's getting very interesting as more details emege. Continue soon.

Thanks for the PM, sorry for the late comment.

Originally posted by: M.V.Kohli007

Really nyc 1.

Thx 4 PM.

Originally posted by: Pumpkinn

Awesome update ...

Loved it ...

Waiting for next ...

Update soon ...

Thnx for pm ...

Originally posted by: sashashyam

Dear Tina,

You are coming along nicely so far, and I liked both the disapproving saas and the snooty sis-in-law as characters. Also the nuances of the PM's reaction to the idea of an interrogation. Finally, you have ended it with just the right, tantalising precap too. 👏

Shyamala Aunty

Hi Shyamala Auntie,

thanks for the comments

I loved your critical analysis of everything i write, makes me try to be better everytime😳

I only hope i can do justice to this story, and maintain the tempo till the end

N i can say its not that easy at all😆

Originally posted by: fatima15

Great update :)

Originally posted by: vidya.anand

Great update...the case is getting interesting and gripping us into it...

Loved the way you brought out Arjun's anger when the PM quoted his wife's death...And awww Riya wanted to comfort him...so cute...but Arjun is Arjun afterall...ooops lagtha hai Riya ko ashes banaa dega!

cont soon!!

Originally posted by: priya00147

of course your mysteries make me glued to the story..!!! but mr.khatri do really love his wife..and it was natural dat arjun wud hav prob with his words.. his mother was definately weird!! but the best friend!!had fear watching the earring 😲 update soon 😊