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kaveriw2008

@kaveriw2008

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#91

wow ariya scene...awesoem

its little bit scary arjun look but riya stands over there to calm him down...so cute...😛

...i like the ivestigation part...i really feel to kill that PM who make arjun remember his past...gosh😡

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haruhi aur ek baat... khabar dar jo poocha mein aisa kun feel kar rahi hoon...😳

acting karne mein to no 1 ho...😆

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nivanthi2

@nivanthi2

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Posted: 12 years ago

#92

nice update dear!!!!!!! 👏👏

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Sreeparna

@Mellifluous

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#93

Tina you are superb as a writer..you are too good to write a thriller like this as well as romance of Ariya in your other works 👍🏼

I realy love the case & eager to know about the killer..precap sounds very interesting..

continue ASAP & thanks for pm 😊

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ll-Shilpa-ll

@SIP1997

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#94

Tina just caught up with part 2 and 3 nice going. It's getting very interesting as more details emege. Continue soon.

Thanks for the PM, sorry for the late comment.

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MANALI MANKEEKAR

@MRD1692020

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#95

Really nyc 1.

Thx 4 PM.

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Neha

@Pumpkinn

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#96

Awesome update ...

Loved it ...

Waiting for next ...

Update soon ...

Thnx for pm ...

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sashashyam

@sashashyam

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#97

Dear Tina,

You are coming along nicely so far, and I liked both the disapproving saas and the snooty sis-in-law as characters. Also the nuances of the PM's reaction to the idea of an interrogation. Finally, you have ended it with just the right, tantalising precap too. 👏

Shyamala Aunty

Chapter 3

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vidya.anand

@vidya.anand

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#98

Great update...the case is getting interesting and gripping us into it...

Loved the way you brought out Arjun's anger when the PM quoted his wife's death...And awww Riya wanted to comfort him...so cute...but Arjun is Arjun afterall...ooops lagtha hai Riya ko ashes banaa dega!

cont soon!!